Charas-Project

Game Creation => Requests => Topic started by: Spike21 on May 15, 2005, 06:23:13 AM

Title: Help
Post by: Spike21 on May 15, 2005, 06:23:13 AM

by now everyone nows i suck at drawing so can anyone make this guy look better. he is an espionos againt and hides in shadows alot

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Post by: Big_Duke on May 15, 2005, 04:53:24 PM

Who's the guy,what does he look like?

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Post by: Spike21 on May 15, 2005, 11:59:02 PM

oops i forgot the picture

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Post by: Big_Duke on May 16, 2005, 12:08:29 AM

I'll try,but it's pretty good anyway.

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Post by: Big_Duke on May 16, 2005, 12:23:07 AM

Here,minor Edits

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Post by: Chaotic_Death on May 16, 2005, 07:28:53 PM

I could try to hand-draw him, if you want.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on May 16, 2005, 07:51:38 PM

You don't need any help with your drawing. Just draw that guy over and over doing different things, perhaps make a comic with him in, and I promise you'll improve quickly.

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Post by: Spike21 on May 17, 2005, 10:09:10 PM

actualy he is one of my comic book characters

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Post by: blaze_shinigami on May 17, 2005, 10:42:46 PM

It's ok, but you should try to make your arms and legs more proportionate.

The eyes are wierd. Is he looking down? Try to round out your iris/pupils more.  You don't have to have big shining anime eyes if it's not your thing but try to have a defined look to the eyes.

Are those boxes pockets? if so, flaps/buttons/zippers would make it more obvious to ones who don't know. but maybe it's just a design.

Also that position he's standing in is kind of off. What I try to do is stand/sit/etc. in the position as i see it to see if it's possible/comfortable & for aestetic purposes.

You also might want to work on your hands more.

I'm not so good at giving tips so don't take it to be an attack.

did you draw that on paint? That's a real bitch to do with just a mouse! working in zoom makes it easier. hope this wasn't a waste of time.

good luck