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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Sephiroth12317 on May 19, 2005, 01:52:21 AM

Title: Midnight Warrior of Dantooine
Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 19, 2005, 01:52:21 AM
Ok you start out on Dantooine (a star wars planet) and you run out of your house. When you walk outside you see nothing but dirt.....I'll post more information (like Bio's and stuff) later on but im still on the first part! rofl
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on May 19, 2005, 03:30:02 AM
Was zum Teufel...?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 19, 2005, 08:43:05 PM
Lol what? Anyway so far I have one Char Bio and here it is....

Name: Ke'o Zenik (Yes this name is from Star Wars a different story, but I made that char so Im not taking it from whoever made that game)

Species: Rodian

home planet: Rodia

Side: Sith

Saber color: Double sided red

Bio: Once a Rebel Commando he was turned to the dark side aka the sith by Darth sidous himself he was trained by the best imperials the sith lord could afford. then after many attmeps he finally made a double sided light saber. Soon after that he was given the rank of sith master.

And thats it! So
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 19, 2005, 09:28:22 PM
yes he made it and i let him do it
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on May 19, 2005, 11:24:16 PM
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Was zum Teufel...?


It means "What the hell...?" in german. I need to practice.

If you're gonna want people to be interested in your game you have to say more than "For no reason you run out your house just for the hell of it and see dirt on a desert planet. Dirt? On a desert planet? What's going on!?!?!?!?".

Off-Topic: For god's sake lan, use periods and commas, or at least capitalize the first letter of a sentence! Please?!
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 20, 2005, 12:37:52 AM
you don't control everything you see that is bad zerokirbyx andi can do it the way i want Duh!!!! the only you control is yourself any how is the game going any scrns
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 22, 2005, 03:35:19 AM
If anyone wants to make a char now is the time! Make Bio's!
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Post by: Blademon on May 22, 2005, 05:14:46 AM
Like they said, the topic needs a little more info. I know a bit of Star Wars but I don't even know what race lives on Dantooine. You want some Han Solo guy in the big city? Some small time Luke Skywalker farmer? Some jedi? Direction helps making the chars a lot easy, for you and all the the contributers.
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 22, 2005, 02:11:20 PM
Well Dantooine his a remote planet so pretty much anyone can go there.
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Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on May 22, 2005, 03:12:36 PM
I always thought that it was "Tatoonie"...
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Post by: Blademon on May 22, 2005, 03:55:21 PM
There's 2 of them.
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Post by: darkrune on May 23, 2005, 06:48:05 PM
Try giving us a story line as others have said and If he is a sith lord that could control thousands of evil minions why is he on Dantooine? And Sidious is anti alien and I don't think he would ever teac a rodian let alone a rebel commando Rodian. Try making him at leats a humaiod.
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 23, 2005, 07:34:43 PM
Hmmm I see what you mean...Just yesterday I was typing the Story line for Blademon but when I was really far the program shut down and I lost all of it. So when I get a little further in my game I'll post the story line. Oh, and about Sidious being Anti-Alien, He hates them but that doesnt really mean that they cant be Dark Jedi right? Lol I'm also going to post some screen shots in a few mintues
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Post by: Syntax on May 23, 2005, 08:04:49 PM
What is with people and starwars these days?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 23, 2005, 08:18:11 PM
Its a big thing and plus the new movie just came out so everyone is making a game like me lol
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Post by: darkrune on May 23, 2005, 08:44:46 PM
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Originally posted by Sephiroth12317
Hmmm I see what you mean...Just yesterday I was typing the Story line for Blademon but when I was really far the program shut down and I lost all of it. So when I get a little further in my game I'll post the story line. Oh, and about Sidious being Anti-Alien, He hates them but that doesnt really mean that they cant be Dark Jedi right? Lol I'm also going to post some screen shots in a few mintues


Ok kool man.

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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 24, 2005, 10:01:56 PM
[GLOW]Ok here we go! My first Screen shot[/GLOW]
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 24, 2005, 10:03:58 PM
Tell me what you think!
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 24, 2005, 10:04:56 PM
nice pic
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 24, 2005, 10:11:41 PM
Thanks i'll have more later
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 24, 2005, 11:02:44 PM
Here is another one...its in a wookie outpost lol
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 24, 2005, 11:03:49 PM
nice
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 24, 2005, 11:07:18 PM
yeah
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Post by: Blademon on May 25, 2005, 01:40:18 AM
Oh hey Sephiroth, since I'm on a roll right now, I was thinking of a character for a while for the game. I didn't know if he was good for the story that you had in mind, but here is his bio.


Name : (no clue I suck at those)
Side : Good. Not a Jedi or Sith
Age : 24
Planet : Dantooine
Abilities : can't use weapons in left arm.
Bio: When Ke'O Zenik was just begining his Sith training, his masters gave him a task to prove himself that he really is a Sith by raiding an innocent farm.

The farm was inhabited by (this guy) and his sister who were poor farmers trying to make a living. Zenik trying to prove his worth challenged (this guy) to a duel even though he was unarmed. His innexperience with the lightsaber showed as he was only able to scar (this guy)'s chest and left wrist. When the duel was finished, (this guy) was sentenced to death by being sent to a forced labor camp on an isolated planet, while his sister was enslaved.

Half-way across the galaxy while his slave ship was enroute to the isolated planet, it was misteriously attacked and crashed on a nearby planet. Finding himself as the only survivor of the crash, (this guy) quickly realised that he had to survive one way or another. Amongst the wreckage were some spare Iperial uniforms and he disguised himself as one. Upon reaching civilization again, he decides to pass for a new recruit, and start a new life that will take him eventually to his assaliant and sister...
(oof)
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on May 25, 2005, 02:13:01 AM
That first pic looks like honest to goodness crap. I can't tell what's going on. If the second is supposed to be a wookie colony it needs to be in the trees, like treehouses.
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Post by: Snake Eater on May 25, 2005, 02:30:05 AM
The screens are pure crap.
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Post by: shinotebasiiackh on May 25, 2005, 02:35:17 AM
I hope this is your first game. Otherwise, you really need to work on your maps.
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 26, 2005, 12:01:55 AM
Wow I just started the game guys so calm down Ii will get better! And Blademon Thanks lol
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on May 26, 2005, 12:18:27 AM
Look, don't post, "What do you guys think?", if when we tell what we think and it's not what you wanna hear you dismiss it. If those are beginning screens and they are bad, then the obvious assumption is that it will be a crappy game. Name one game everyone knows and believes to be good where the first maps were crap, RPG wise of course. None, so maybe work on the maps. It's just like an intro to a book, good= you keep reading, but bad= given to a nazi book burning (maybe a little exaggerated, but you get the point)
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 26, 2005, 11:39:14 AM
Ok Kirby 2 things for you



Ok? Now please if you want better screen shots, help me out! lol
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 27, 2005, 01:46:03 AM
that would help people could give each other advice then there will be les bad games
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 27, 2005, 12:12:23 PM
yeah good idea
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on May 27, 2005, 05:42:27 PM
any way how is the game goin
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Post by: darkrune on May 27, 2005, 08:49:43 PM
Sephiroth12317,
Regarding your chipsets and the 2 maps you posted. They look like they could be very good. I think your problemis is that the chipsets you have chosen are not able to provide detail. I know for me that I feel like the game is so much better with detail. Maybe if you edited it and made it have some detail slots.
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Post by: RPG LORD on May 27, 2005, 09:49:16 PM
Is Emperor Palpatine himself going to be in it?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on May 28, 2005, 10:10:20 PM
Yeah i may throw in the emp. and anyone got chipsets?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 03, 2005, 01:25:35 AM
Also the wookie outpost is NOT on their home planet...So there may not be tree houses or stuff like that.
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Post by: darkrune on June 04, 2005, 05:04:44 AM
Well still with the wookie outpost maybe if you added some huts or somthing because they look like they are just standing there. Looks like it could be good though. :D
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Post by: Moosetroop11 on June 04, 2005, 09:51:27 AM
As others have said, your maps are horrible. Look Lan, I know you're trying to encourage him, but blinding him with misplaced praise won't help him at all.

Pointers:

Those houses need to be bigger. Much bigger. They're hardly big enough for their windows, let alone their inhabitants!

There's grass at the edge of your dirt. Why? If you press shift whilst drawing the dirt this won't happen.

People? This is a town, man, where's the people?

The wall... Is okay, I guess

The wall suddenly gives way to some wooden platform of some type. It looks impossible- I wouldn't have it there at all. If they're meant to be stairs, please use the stairs tile.

Dammit, the crates of fruit are neatly lined up by the wall! Gimme some variation! And It's best if the crates aren't by the wall at all, because they look like they're part of the wall at the moment.

Other than this, everything is plain and empty. The houses are all in a line- spread them out! They all look the same- make them different! THink! What do these people actually DO in the town? Do they stay in their tiny houses all day? What do the kids do? Should there be a disgarded ball, or something? People shold be going about their buisnesses. What are they doing? Remember that this is supposed to be a real town.

That's all I can think of... The map guru strikes again :D
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Post by: SaiKar on June 04, 2005, 10:19:45 PM
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If you press shift whilst drawing the dirt this won't happen.


Holy stars! I totally didn't know that. I've been doing it the sucker way of copying and pasting filled squares to make things line up.
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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on June 04, 2005, 11:06:54 PM
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Originally posted by Moosetroop11
If you press shift whilst drawing the dirt this won't happen.


Holy stars! I totally didn't know that. I've been doing it the sucker way of copying and pasting filled squares to make things line up.


 :o

Me too... all that hard work... *cry*

How the hell did I not know that...
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 06, 2005, 01:06:54 AM
Thank you everyone! I promise that the game will be awsome! I'll post some more later
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Post by: Nandez on June 06, 2005, 05:24:28 AM
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What is with people and starwars these days?


Of course the final kickass movie came out and everybody saw and says I gotta make a Star Wars game and then everyone will love me because it rules!

Dumbasses.Already sounds crappy.

And when exactly did Darth Sidious have the time to turn this guy into a Dark Jedi he seems to be pretty damn busy all the time.
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 06, 2005, 07:31:18 PM
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Originally posted by Syntax
What is with people and starwars these days?


Of course the final kickass movie came out and everybody saw and says I gotta make a Star Wars game and then everyone will love me because it rules!

Dumbasses.Already sounds crappy.

And when exactly did Darth Sidious have the time to turn this guy into a Dark Jedi he seems to be pretty damn busy all the time.


Alright if you are going to say something bad about my game PM me. Now listen, Im not perfect at making games. Now Im getting help from people that think my game is crappy (thank you everyone) and if you want to help go ahead bt otherwise dont post mean things about my game. Oh and by the way....Can yo post your icon? I love sephiroth as you can see by my user name lol
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on June 07, 2005, 12:37:25 AM
ok when do you think the game will come out
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 07, 2005, 12:39:23 AM
Im not sure with the game not doing so good right now and with everyone not likeing it that much I may have to restart it lol
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Post by: lan-the phoenix holder on June 07, 2005, 12:43:47 AM
oh man I am interested
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 07, 2005, 12:45:38 AM
lol ok dont worry
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 07, 2005, 01:39:35 AM
Anyway If anyone has any questions just post and I need some charsets lol
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Post by: darkrune on June 07, 2005, 01:40:12 AM
How's it coming?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 07, 2005, 01:41:24 AM
Not so good right now  :(
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Post by: darkrune on June 07, 2005, 02:45:08 AM
Hmmmm, why?
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 07, 2005, 11:22:18 PM
No one really likes it, I may have to start over and I used the wrong chipsets :(
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Post by: PeRKLE on June 08, 2005, 10:32:00 AM
A little plot problem, I see (if it matters)

That rodian sith guy was Rebel commando. That means that he was in the same time as the parts 4-6 (New Hope, Empire Strikes Back and Return of the Jedi) which means that lord Sidious already had an apprentice, lord Vader. There cannot be more than 2 Sith at the same time; master (Sidous) and apprentice (Vader) so there is no possibility that the rodian guy would have been a Sith, even less the master Sith, because then he would have to kill the old master, Sidious.

Nothing more to say, this thing just sticked out like a sore thumb :D care about it or not, one and same to me.
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Post by: Sephiroth12317 on June 08, 2005, 11:51:58 PM
Not really....This doesnt take place during any of the movies so what you said doesnt really apply lol but thanks for trying to point that out