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Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: AsakuraHao2004 on May 23, 2005, 06:10:23 PM

Title: Samurai Guy
Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on May 23, 2005, 06:10:23 PM

Want some comments. He's supposed to be a somewhat modern samurai who carries two swords, one on his back, and one on his side. Based on a drawing I did.

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Post by: SaiKar on May 23, 2005, 06:16:34 PM

Hmmm. His head is very flat, and his eyes are not too easy to see, and he sort of looks like Link ala Zelda games with that shirt. But you handled the two swords thing well.

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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on May 23, 2005, 06:22:42 PM

The hair is supposed to create the effect of his bangs sort of popping out forwards over his eyes, and I was contemplating changing the shirt's color, I'm not really good with colors.

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Post by: DBZ on May 23, 2005, 06:42:24 PM

with what did you make it with the online charset maker?

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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on May 23, 2005, 07:03:13 PM

I drew on clothes, hair, and the face, and colored everything in in photoshop using a blank RTP charaset (as in, just a body with no clothes, hair, face, etc)

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Post by: FFL2and3rocks on May 23, 2005, 10:38:47 PM

It looks good, but as Saikar said, the head seems too flat. Especially in the front view.

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Post by: SaiKar on May 24, 2005, 12:08:45 AM

If you want the hair to look like it is covering the eyes, you succeeded on that point, because that's exactly what it looks like.

Maybe instead of being too flat, his head is just too wide. Perhaps you should shave a pixel or two off the side?

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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on May 24, 2005, 01:44:52 AM

Fixed a few things. Better? I want him looking perfect so I can start on poses and my game.

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Post by: SaiKar on May 24, 2005, 02:20:27 AM

It's a lot better, in my opinion at least.

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Post by: FFL2and3rocks on May 24, 2005, 02:33:28 AM

Yeah, the newer one is a lot better! :)