Charas-Project
Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Weregnome on May 24, 2005, 07:06:49 AM
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Ok this is the first part to my art piece for this semester. I hope you people look and comment.
Reflection (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18657098/)
Also read the descrip if u wish to know what its about.
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Looks good.
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As always, I have to comment, critique, and critisize.
First off, MAJOR anatomical problem in the legs. The top half of his leg looks okay, a bit long, but okay, but his shins are as long as his head, meang way too small compared to the size of the rest of his body. His feet, er, foot, and hands are way too small too, as is the beer bottles. Now the arm, the way it seems the elbow bends make the arm seem like a 90 degree angle, while the shirt looks like the arm bends a little off. The head looks good, but the hair would probably be hanging down a little off the head instead of stuck to his forehead like that.
ADVICE: Draw out you char's body, arms, and such (draw him naked before you put clothes on him. If you can see what he looks like it becomes MUCH, MUCH, MUCH easier to draw him.
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One: I do that. This is my old style. I don't have the time to go ovewr and chnage to my newer one. I realise the errors, trust me i do. I have two more to cg tho so I don't haver time to go back and edit.
Thanks for the comment anyways.
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Well, proportions that off aren't really a style, more of errors, but yeah. I've had that happen when no matter how hard I get stuck in my old style o a pic, no matter how many pics I drew before it.
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lol I know that its classed as error, but that actually how I drew em all, and I thought it was a style. It worked fine... till I began trying to work with it. Then I realied it wasn't a style, but error. Yer I found it kinda hard to get out of, but luckily I did