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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Darkfox on June 09, 2005, 01:53:08 AM

Title: New Kitsune sprite in the works, advice needed.
Post by: Darkfox on June 09, 2005, 01:53:08 AM

Ok, I'm working on a new kitsune sprite but I have made a few errors and need them pointed out before I start shading and adding the tails and hair. Also I need to work on the chest fluff a little.

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Post by: Darkfox on June 09, 2005, 01:53:45 AM

Based on this picture by Carmen.

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Post by: GhostClown on June 09, 2005, 01:55:54 AM

Well, DarkFox, it's looking good so far, keep it up, and it'll turn out to be a good sprite. ;)

EDIT: Actually I don't like that yellow too much, maybe something less poppy..

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Post by: Snake Eater on June 09, 2005, 03:16:54 AM

It looks good! But the Yellow is a little bright. :)

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Post by: Darkfox on June 11, 2005, 01:09:45 AM

Any anatomical problems?

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on June 11, 2005, 01:19:04 AM

Since it's a kitsune (that means fox, right?), I assume it's not human proportion. But the upper part of the front leg seems to small and the upper part of the back leg seems to short compared to the pic.

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Post by: MrMister on June 11, 2005, 01:21:55 AM

The lumpy part of the back leg doesn't seem really.. connected to the other part of the leg.. it's hard to put into words. Looking good, though.

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Post by: Grandy on June 11, 2005, 01:42:17 AM

My sprites usually look better after I finish it, sometimes it looks like theres something wrong, but there isnt, and when I finish, they're pretty good. Try to put the tails and hair, and see how it looks like

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Post by: Darkfox on July 20, 2005, 12:09:53 AM

After a long time I'm starting detailing it.

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Post by: GhostClown on July 20, 2005, 12:17:44 AM

I think the front and back leg are too close.. But other than that, looking good.

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Post by: Darkfox on July 20, 2005, 12:39:39 AM

Well she's not really sitting but crouching. Or more like squatting, they can't sit like dogs and cats can, they sit like humans.

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Post by: Osmose on July 20, 2005, 01:30:06 AM

1.The eyes are too mad. In the picture they are much more docile.
2.I don't know why you did it, but the first tuft design was way better than that mess that's on the latest one.
3.The back turns downward at the spine to suddenly - soften it a bit more.
4.Again, I don't know what you did to the front paws, but go back to the olds ones and then make them curve more gently rather than having a spikey back paw-part.
5.The back leg needs a line going diagonally so the knee doesn't just look like a big old lump going outward.
6.The ears are too fat.
7.The front legs are too spikey at the elbow.

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Post by: GhostClown on July 20, 2005, 01:44:04 AM

 

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3.The back turns downward at the spine to suddenly - soften it a bit more.

Looks like it was an attempted shoulder blade, but yes, I think it sticks out a little too much..

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Post by: Darkfox on July 20, 2005, 01:53:43 AM

1. I'm working on that later
2. I wanted it to appear like it's covering somthing -TOP REASON WHY IT'S THERE- rather than being a giant clod of fur. I'm using a variation of the Renamon style.
3. Going to fix it later
4. I want bigger puffier paws
5. Eh? I thought there was one?
6. I already plan to change them
7. Smoothing is later.

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Post by: Osmose on July 20, 2005, 02:21:03 AM

The tuft, as it is, looks like a white octopus is trying to escape. And what would it cover? A chest? The original acomplishes that much better.

And the paws just end up looking like goofy clown gloves. Shrink em.

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Post by: Osmose on July 20, 2005, 02:29:24 AM

And below is what I meant.

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Post by: Darkfox on July 20, 2005, 02:47:48 AM

Oh yes, I think I believe I see now, as for the tuft, I'm working on it to look fluffier. And I still have not applied the fluff for the underbelly... though I think it's too covered by the arms and legs...

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Post by: dragoninja on July 20, 2005, 02:56:44 PM

Looks Nice, A bit Plain though... you can only see it's left side... Maybe by showing the right front leg and making it slightly orange alike... I think that would do the trick :D
Also, maybe jus' a little shading...

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 20, 2005, 04:11:51 PM

A good sprite, except for the slightly awkward looking legs. I can't see anything really wrong with it except what Osmose said.

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Post by: Bluhman on July 20, 2005, 04:19:18 PM

Please make a second arm and leg. It would look very flat without one, even with the shading applied.