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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 07:37:23 PM

Title: A Knight Soul
Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 07:37:23 PM

Well,i am not good at storys,but here is it:

HISTORY
Its About this guy Sengal,(The bad guy),Goes to the arena,and says I have some kind of power that is of him,and then You go to a castle to request soldiers to kill him,but they got allied with Falcone,and I have until there now

CHARCTERS

Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Enchated with Thievery Skills

Name: Solian
Age: 28
Weapon: Sword
Bio: Before The Arena Thing,Best Companion of Sengal

Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Samurai Trained with Ninja Skills,An old Friend Of Blaze

Name: Kiro
Age: 23
Weapon: I dont know which weapon will he use....
Bio: A Bounty Hunter that wants to kill Sengal

ENGINES

Maybe there will be some duels,the game will be for RPG maker 2000 with battle animations,and some funny minigames,
I will put screenies tomorrow

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Post by: WarxePB on June 26, 2005, 07:41:52 PM

Your "story" makes very little sense. It might be a good idea to elaborate on it a bit.

And isn't Sengal one of ZeroKirbyX's characters?

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 07:43:56 PM

Ok,I will try ot get the story better,And yes,Sengal is one of ZKX Characters,I will Change the name,but if he says that i cant use his char,I will Change it

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Post by: Leon_1990 on June 26, 2005, 07:54:47 PM

a swordsman named solian....

change that.

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on June 26, 2005, 07:58:09 PM

Yeah, maybe you should elaborate on the story. And yeah, I'd appreciate it if you just changed his name.

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 07:59:11 PM

But I like Solian,And these are the screens,they are in spanish because i will make the game both in spanish and english
This is 1 One

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 08:00:40 PM

2 One

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Post by: Leon_1990 on June 26, 2005, 08:01:13 PM

I hope you have dragonium's permission to use that system.

seriously, change the name solian, or  the class at least.

Solian the swordsman has already been taken.

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 08:07:07 PM

Ok,Here I go,solian now is called Azrael,Sengal Now be called Falcon,And i Changed the system for this one:

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Post by: Dragonium on June 26, 2005, 08:16:16 PM

Thanks for changing the system. ;)

This looks like it could go places. Keep it up.

Yeah, and if a name has been taken, try not to use it. If you really didn't know, it's okay.

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on June 26, 2005, 08:18:01 PM

Wait... it that Sengal's sprite?

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 26, 2005, 09:20:52 PM

Ok,I got a new history,There was once a Time,4 diferent Gods,
Atlanta,God of Wind and light,the one which decided ot take care of the Humans,Silkus,God of Fire and Darkness,The one that deicded to take care of demons and monsters,Kirik,God of Earth,and Father of Gnomes,and Zabulon,God of Water,and Father of all Sea life Forms,One Day,Silkus,Decided to finish all the other Gods,And conquer Humans.Gnomes and Kill the sea Life Forms,Atlanta (Is a woman) discovered it and sned a message to Kirik and Zabulon,and they joined
to finish all the demons and monsters,and Atlanta,Killed Silkus....
4000 Years Later,The Soul Of A Knight Prophecy Says,that the osn of Silkus,(Falco) Should Try to conquer all the world,and The Strengh of Atlanta should Reborn on a Warrior,so he could Finish Silkus Son,

What do you think of that? :viking:

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Post by: darkrune on June 26, 2005, 11:50:36 PM

Falco, reminds me of Star Fox

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 27, 2005, 12:34:55 AM

Sure,do you all like the new story,it is above  :jumpin:

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Post by: InsaneJP on June 27, 2005, 12:52:30 AM

hmm your new story is better and it has more detail but it still needs to be clearer...you have alot of commas and alot of stuff just jammed together. Other then that when you post characters have a more in depth bio about them because you dont tell much about them at all and another tip is get everything ready for your game and your story straight before you post it so when you do its a real good post!

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Post by: Meoix on June 27, 2005, 12:56:34 AM

your not very good at creating things are you? _sweat_

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 27, 2005, 01:00:57 AM

I am good continuing stories,but noty good with intros and strating stories lol :blush:

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 27, 2005, 01:12:21 AM

Ok,I made a little update to the characters:


Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Capable of using Thievery Skills,His Father,Rohan,Was killed In war Fighting Two Demons


Name: Azrael
Age: 28
Weapon: Big Blade
Bio: Companion Of Falco,But after Falco Wielded The Climhazzard,He Leave`d Him and Went His own way,He become`s A Pretty good Friend of Blaze


Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Childhood Best A Friend Of Blaze,they got separated when a Demon Attacked Irassia Village


Name: Kiro
Age: 24
Weapon: Dunno,What do you think he could use?
Bio: A Bounty Hunter Who twice tried to kill Blaze,His Reasons are Discovered Within the Game,

What do oyu think about this Character update?

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Post by: InsaneJP on June 27, 2005, 01:24:18 AM

thats better but still you can do better with the bios

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 27, 2005, 01:30:26 AM

Ok,I iwll try,But what do you think Could Kiro Use as Weapon?

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 27, 2005, 10:28:41 PM

Ok,I made a new update to the Characters,Kiro`s bio will stay as it is



Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Blessed By The Wind God,Atlanta,He is Capable of using Thievery Skills,His Father,Rohan,Was killed during war by Fighting two Demons,He Was Born and Lived 12 Years on Irassia,at 12 Years he gont on journey to Windrad to Train.Actually,He has 20 Years and wants to prove his skills on the arena.


Name: Azrael
Age: 28
Weapon: Big Blade
Bio:Falco`s Companion,But After Falco Wield`s the Climhazzard,
Azrael Decides to get his own path,At born,he got separated by his parents,at 7 years,He was adopted by Greg in Jurid and lived there,when he got 20 Years,Became Falco`s Companion and Travelled with him 8 Hard years.


Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Childhood Best A Friend Of Blaze,they got separated when a Demon Attacked Irassia Village,his father also Died in Battle,Helping Rohan.Ray Went to Hirim Ice Mountains to Train With His Sensei: Oroku


Name: Kiro
Age: 24
Weapon: Dunno,What do you think he could use?
Bio: A Bounty Hunter Who twice tried to kill Blaze,His Reasons are Discovered Within the Game.

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Post by: Trueform Darkside on June 27, 2005, 10:55:44 PM

I think the story's progressing well.
Keep up the good work; heres a list of potential weapons you could use:

shurikens
axes
swords
daggers
whips
boomerangs
clubs/maces
staffs
wands
scythes
bows & arrows
knuckles

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Post by: Blazingheart on July 02, 2005, 05:54:03 PM

I changed totally the story again,I will post it in a new thread

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Post by: Dragonium on July 02, 2005, 06:08:16 PM

Try inventing your own weapons. Your game will be a whole lot better if there are weapon which haven't been seen before.

Your character bios are better now. Add a little more detail, and they'll be 100%.

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Post by: Blazingheart on July 02, 2005, 06:37:14 PM

As I said,I iwll reopen a new thread showing the new story