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Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: Moosetroop11 on July 04, 2005, 08:01:51 PM

Title: Jumping on the bandwagon
Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 04, 2005, 08:01:51 PM

I'm making a charset version of Sai'kar's 'Goddess of song and dance'. (I didn't think you'd mind, Sai'kar)

Anyway, it looks strange. can anyone tell me why?

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Post by: Dragonium on July 04, 2005, 08:03:56 PM

Looks fine to me, except that the eyes are a bit... Off...

Not sure how to put it.

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Post by: Drace on July 04, 2005, 08:07:23 PM

Looks like they're looking to her left. The eyes I mean.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 04, 2005, 08:13:40 PM

Here, I changed the eyes, and did a bit more...

EDIT: Yeah, I know, I made a mistake with the leg, I'll fix it...

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Post by: Drace on July 04, 2005, 09:59:30 PM

No, still looks weird to me.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 05, 2005, 04:13:59 PM

Hmm... Well, the first version is done. Give suggestions as to how to improve it. Bear in mind that I'm fine with any critisism so long as it's constructive. If it sucks, please say so, but state reaons.

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Post by: Drace on July 05, 2005, 04:39:22 PM

I'm a little unhappy with the side view hair. It just doesn't look right and I can't really explain but I suggest to try something else.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 05, 2005, 04:43:07 PM

Will do

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 06, 2005, 04:17:13 PM

Here, I tweaked here and there, and the hair is better on the right facing sprite.

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Post by: Drace on July 06, 2005, 10:29:36 PM

Yes, looks much better now. It's in comparison with the front view hair now. Good job!

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Post by: GhostClown on July 07, 2005, 01:40:30 AM

Needs a chin, and the hair is sort of clumped some how.. But it'll turn out pretty good if you fix those things.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 07, 2005, 06:09:01 PM

Well, I tried the chin, and it didn't work. I did, however, make a whole load of dancing poses!

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Post by: Dragonium on July 07, 2005, 06:14:25 PM

4 letters, my friend... Y-M-C-A. :D

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on June 05, 2006, 09:46:43 AM

I improved her, she's for my game and was looking out of place. Any better?

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Post by: the keyblade master on June 05, 2006, 01:06:24 PM

Pretty nice' but the eyes should go the other way...

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Post by: Grandy on June 05, 2006, 02:13:28 PM

 The eyes are too far up and too to the right, they should b more centered.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on June 05, 2006, 03:05:59 PM

My try on the eyes and chin:

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Post by: Osmose on June 05, 2006, 04:20:51 PM

Am I the only one wondering why one leg is bigger than the other?

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Post by: SaiKar on June 05, 2006, 04:33:56 PM

I'm 84% sure this isn't my character. Nice set anyway.

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Post by: FFL2and3rocks on June 05, 2006, 09:10:38 PM

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Originally posted by Osmose
Am I the only one wondering why one leg is bigger than the other?

I'm guessing it's some weird sort of fancy dancer-type decoration thing.



The larger foot is the wrong foot on the left-facing part. Did you just take the right-facing and flip it?

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on June 06, 2006, 04:58:01 PM

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Originally posted by FFL2and3rocks

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Originally posted by Osmose Am I the only one wondering why one leg is bigger than the other?

I'm guessing it's some weird sort of fancy dancer-type decoration thing.



The larger foot is the wrong foot on the left-facing part. Did you just take the right-facing and flip it?

Lo! I am lazy! ;)

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 13, 2006, 11:01:26 PM

The dress looks good,the eyes weird,and the hair is ok but could be improved,i would give an 8/10,i know i am not so good making èm,but i know they are hard,but i would recomend using a template for faces to get the eyes ok. good job.

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Post by: Ryos4 on June 14, 2006, 11:44:45 AM

I couldnt help but see if i could help.  There are a few things you could do to make this look better.  Btw i dont exactly know what the the character looks like, so im basing it off of yours. Lets start from the top.  
The hair tends too look too flat if you dont go larger then the head itself, when its atleast 1 pixel larger then the head template it gives the hair some volume.  
For her face i suggest just using a template base it saves alot of time believe me. lol.
Course for skin tight close add the shading for the breasts which you did, though for her legs you could make then one pixel thinner to give it the dancer legs look.
I hate to sound like a know it all but, ive been told that my charsets are pretty good and im just sharing my thoughts.

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on June 15, 2006, 08:12:06 AM

Yeah cool, I'm not looking to improve it right now but I might some time in the future so thanks for the tips ;)

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Post by: Blazingheart on June 17, 2006, 11:44:30 PM

Lol...?
Ok,i think your problem is a bit on the detail side,just like me,u should try to draw the hair andress poses first,thjen add the details,it works really well