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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 02:46:36 AM

Title: Trilogy
Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 02:46:36 AM

I'm not going to quit FMA I just need a LOT more resources to do it. So until then I will work on this one. Read below.


STORY
Okay this is the story.

You are just a baby in a small village named Nazerin. There is a small chirp of crickets in the background and the glow of the moon shines on the village. Then a rustle comes through the peace as demon bandits creep through the grass. They aren't that big just a small hored of goblins. Then as if appearing out of the blue a huge demon called a Kisorn (Ki'zorn) Runs through the woods toward the village. The Kisorn is known to be a ruthless fire breathing demon that stops at nothing untill it gets what it wants or it dies. It plows through the goblins and then attacks the village. It eats all of the livestock and kills all the people except for an injured mother and her son. She goes as fast as she can to find a safe place. She comes upon a city and at the front are gaurds. The gaurds seeing how bad off she was knew that there was no way she could live. She begs them to take her baby to a place where he can grow and live in prosperity. The gaurds take the baby and the mother falls to the ground dead. After 17 years the boy named Jax starts to have vivid dreams. He sees his mother and all that has happened to his village. At first he thought that it was just a dream but the dreams became more clear and then he sees the look on his mothers face. A sad and hopeless look that shows nothing but pain and suffering. His mother then talks to him and tells of the pain and misery she has been through. He then decides to leave the village without a notice and search out the king of the demons.

CHARAS AND BIOS

Name:Jax
Age:17
Weapon:Sword
Bio: The boy from the story. Sharp minded and good with a sword he seeks out the king of demons to get retribution for his mothers death.

Name:Klange
Age:25
Weapon:Spear
Bio: A man who has a very short fuse. Though mostly skilled with a spear he has been known to use a bomb here and there.

Name:Jessie
Age:16
Weapon:Bow
Bio: A young girl whos parents were killed in a ship wreck leaving her on at home to fend for herself. Stealing only to survive she has been arrested many times. Quick with her bow and reflexes she is a valuable character.

Name:Vinsh
Age:??
Weapon:Hand
Bio: A half demon who wants to become fully human because he has been thrown out of towns and cities for what his father is. Not much else is known about him.

OTHER STUFF
Day Night with in game time
Reputation System 0_0 maybe knew I don't know
Random Weather
Bank System
Any other stuff that might be thought of.



Tell me what you think.    :)

Criticism welcome.

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Post by: drac9776 on July 08, 2005, 02:52:49 AM

I like the idea

The characters seem original. i hope to see some screenshots and char sets soon

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 02:56:49 AM

Well Jax is an original rtp but Klange Vinsh and Jessie I don't know yet I even made Jax some battle charsets. look here.

http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=11912&forumid=6&catid=4

Those are him.

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Post by: drac9776 on July 08, 2005, 02:58:59 AM

Thats really good. Do you have any ideas for the other characters?

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 03:03:30 AM

Like what they look like and all?

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Post by: drac9776 on July 08, 2005, 03:05:39 AM

Like what features they should have and their personality

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 03:13:13 AM

Well I think that the descriptions above are clear but if more people ask then I will post more. As for the charas looks it goes like this.

Jessie
a dark green shirt, dark blue shorts, she uses a bow so a quiver on her back, short about on her neck hair that is blonde. she is white.

Klange
deep blue maybe navy blue shirt, light blue pants, bulky build of muscle, black hair, he is black.

Vinsh
Purple robe with the arms going over his, white hair, he is white.

After I make these or maybe someone makes em for me I will do the poses for them. Is that good enough?

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Post by: CoolZidane on July 08, 2005, 03:28:45 AM

The story is a little bit cliche, but overall interesting. If you need music, I'll help out.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 03:29:53 AM

Thanks Zidane and not to sound dumb but what does cliche mean?

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Post by: Bobb on July 08, 2005, 03:39:03 AM

cliche means its not original and its kinda not original, but i think its good. I'll help if i can. :D

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 03:41:43 AM

well that just proves that I came up with it and not square. >_< And if you want to help can you make these charas?


Jessie
a dark green shirt, dark blue shorts, she uses a bow so a quiver on her back, short about on her neck hair that is blonde. she is white.

Klange
deep blue maybe navy blue shirt, light blue pants, bulky build of muscle, black hair, he is black.

Vinsh
Purple robe with the arms going over his, white hair, he is white.


Thanks.

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Post by: Bobb on July 08, 2005, 03:44:38 AM

OK I'll get to work and probably get done tonight...or tommorrow.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 03:48:23 AM

Thanks Bobb. Your always helping me. :D

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Post by: CoolZidane on July 08, 2005, 03:51:34 AM

Mainly it's the thing of the hero going to kill the demon thing (I assume for revenge) that's a cliche. But if you present it right, it could be very interesting.

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Post by: Bobb on July 08, 2005, 03:53:59 AM

What do you mean he has arms over his? I dont really understand.

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Post by: blackskullwarlock on July 08, 2005, 03:57:26 AM

Could be interesting. Kisorn is the King of Demons in your game? Pah, the Demogorgon could squish him with one blow if you ask me.

The whole revenge plot is vastly overused so make sure you use it in an original way. If you ever need demon advices/infos, just pm me.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 04:00:33 AM

the robe arms longer than Vinshs'
like this

Vinsh Arm -
Robe Arm  --


BTW Zidane. I have a pretty good idea on how to present it. Noone said anything about killing him.     :D


BTW blackskullwarlock I didn't say Kisorn was the king.

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Post by: blackskullwarlock on July 08, 2005, 04:06:38 AM

So he goes hunt the King of all Demons just because a minor demon killed his mother? Atleast give a reason for the hero to hunt the King, the most powerful of all demons....

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 04:10:36 AM

Okay since he is the king of demons all other demons are below him. We all know that. So Jax goes after him because if he can defeat him in battle then he can have anything he wished. But before he gets there the plot twists. If you don't understand know you'll just have to wait till the game is finished to know.

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Post by: blackskullwarlock on July 08, 2005, 04:18:30 AM

Bah, I'll just wait and see. I learned old demon lores so this basically goes against everything I know. Just make sure the King of all Demons isn't the typical villain and can't be easily beaten at the end.

Apart from that, looking forward to more details and screenshots, assuming you release any.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 04:21:16 AM

I will. And what kind of demon king would he be if you could just back slap him to death? oh and pm me all the knowlege of your demons that you can.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 04:41:21 AM

I will help you as I am working on Elementa episode 1. I've been working on it for 2 months and I'm 7% done. Two big ones.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 04:44:41 AM

Hmm I shall create a new account on freewebs for anyone who wants to help on trilogy.


Current Workers on Trilogy

PyroAlchemist
Deathreaper
Bobb
CoolZidane


If you want to help PM me.

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Post by: Bobb on July 08, 2005, 05:02:11 AM

I' helping, but I am working on my game so I can't help all the time...Well I'm going to bed...so i'll post what I have done of the characters so far.

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Post by: CoolZidane on July 08, 2005, 05:05:50 AM

From your PM, you said you wanted Rock-style MIDIs, so here's one.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 04:15:17 PM

Here's one.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 07:06:33 PM

and another

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 07:36:12 PM

here is one I found.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 07:41:49 PM

Here is my current title that MSlash67 made.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 07:42:02 PM

Are you going to use the ones me and CoolZidane posted?

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 07:44:36 PM

Yish I am. I was just showing one I found.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 07:48:41 PM

Ok, I got 2003 on my computer so I'm ready to work on it with you.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 07:53:19 PM

Okay. It'll Go like this though. I will do the Intro first and make a mini demo of it for the Trilogy site. After that I will post the whole game to your site and leave the spoilers in an event at the bottom. That sound okay?

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 07:56:22 PM

Okay. But, you might still want to add a shapeshifter, their underused.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 08:01:28 PM

... fine Vinsh can shapshift. And after I get the site up I'll give the game helpers the passwords where they can edit there member part. What I mean by that is you add a page for you to talk about your interest and anything else you want. try to keep the page itself sorted and uncluttered. But first who doesn't know html?



EDIT: Weerd Thing made metallic extreme.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 08:07:22 PM

You don't have to change Vinsh, I'll make the char.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 08:09:13 PM

Alright Deathreaper. Uhm I'm gonna be off for a while to make the site and make the Intro. Bye.

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Post by: Bobb on July 08, 2005, 09:50:14 PM

umm...so I guess Deathreaper is making all the charasets then? Cuz I made some and you guys kinda ignored me...

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 10:08:07 PM

nah I'm using your charas Bobb. He just wanted to add his own special character. Thanks for them Bobb.


All I need you to do to them is finish. Thanks.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 10:18:06 PM

Questions

1. What are we going to name our shapeshifting friend?

2. How are our heros going to meet her?

3. Are we ready to work?

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 10:29:16 PM

answer to questions

1. Akara?

2. Heros meet up in cave with her clinging to life with a little life force?

3. I made the first few maps for the game so now I have to set up the events for it. So almost.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 11:00:12 PM

Good work, now you will be able to learn to use the dark side.



I mean! Now we can work on the game.

 

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 11:06:24 PM

Here is a sephiroth rock remix.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 08, 2005, 11:12:02 PM

My friend wants to see me so, I will be gone for an hour or so. bye.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 08, 2005, 11:30:29 PM

bye Deathreaper.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 12:09:47 AM

I'm back, Darth Torchus- Imean! PyroAlchemist.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 12:56:57 AM

I'll set you ablaze right now!

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 12:59:18 AM

If you destory me, then any chance of saving her will be lost.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:00:36 AM

So? Your point being?


And ARGH!! I have to start over on my Trilogy game because I just got Advocates translation and it won't let me see the chips from the other one. And if you know how to fix it don't tell me cause it'll tick me off for deleting it.  T_T

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 01:05:32 AM

If you kill me you will never know enough about the darkside to save Padme... I mean! Hawkeye's life. Learn my knowledge, I beg you.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:06:35 AM

Nah. FIRE!!! BURN!!!

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 01:09:35 AM

FIne, have it your way. You will just have to feel the full power of the darkside, Jedi. (Lighting) Unlimited Power!!!!

Title: PERISH!!
Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:10:35 AM

WITH MY TO MUCH SPAM ATTACK!!!!!!!

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 01:15:44 AM

Are we ready?

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:20:42 AM

Did you read the above? It says I have to start over. I know it sucks but I'll make the maps and you can put in the events. Ok? To know what to do just read my first post to this.


BTW are you using advocate translation?

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 01:23:35 AM

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Originally posted by PyroAlchemist
Did you read the above? It says I have to start over. I know it sucks but I'll make the maps and you can put in the events. Ok? To know what to do just read my first post to this.

I don't know how to use events well but, I can help you with animations, monsters,bosses, story,secretd and skills.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:26:44 AM

alright then are you using the advocate translation of rm2k3?

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 01:31:20 AM

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Originally posted by PyroAlchemist
alright then are you using the advocate translation of rm2k3?

Whatb dose that mean?
EDIT: Have you made the Battlechar for the shapeshifter.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 01:34:51 AM

read your pm deathreaper

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Post by: Bobb on July 09, 2005, 02:31:15 AM

I've been pretty busy lately, and i'm tired so I'm gonna go to bed, and i can't make a quiver...sorry. I'll post what I have.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 02:36:33 AM

thats fine. I can make the quiver. And they look great. Jessie is on her way.

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Post by: CoolZidane on July 09, 2005, 03:37:42 AM

Need anything specific musicwise?

(PS: Check out my game "Wishes of the Past" if you want)

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Post by: Bobb on July 09, 2005, 03:47:57 AM

Somehow, I woke up, I feel really awake now, so I finished Jessie. Here ya go!

Oh and BTW CoolZidane, would you make me some music for my game, I dont know what I need yet, but I'll need something later. I just started my game so I dont know what music I'll need, but in the future would you help me?

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Post by: CoolZidane on July 09, 2005, 03:49:38 AM

I'll do what I can.

(PS: Could you check out my game and tell me what you think? It's called "Wishes of the Past.")

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 03:54:13 AM

CoolZidane: Nothing specific really just rock is all and I'll find a place to put it.


Bobb:Thats great I'll put the quiver on and start making the bchar poses. :D

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 04:29:03 AM

So how dose this look for a shapeshifter or dose it need to no look like a shapeshifter? What do you think Bobb?

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 04:30:10 AM

that is fine Deathreaper.

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Post by: Bobb on July 09, 2005, 04:41:19 AM

I think that's great! Good job! Better than mine.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 06:17:35 PM

Here's another rock song.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 07:32:53 PM

Here's another song, you can use this for speical battles.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 07:55:39 PM

yet another MIDI

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 08:05:38 PM

yish ize got music. okay to THE MAP MAKING!!

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 08:14:39 PM

go to the complete resources.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 08:22:50 PM

and do what?

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 08:29:29 PM

get some chipset and tilesets. Also, animatio

P.S. Look for a plant lady.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 08:44:41 PM

I found a GREAT song. from  Maniac13

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 08:49:50 PM

Great, we'll attack the Rice Krispy biy tonight - I mean! Blast! Kill the Dough Boy!!

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 08:59:36 PM

no....we attack.... WILLY WONKA!!!!!!!

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 09:01:24 PM

Well, now the dough boy can tickle and luagh himself to HELL!! HA HA HA! I say we attack both bastards.

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on July 09, 2005, 09:04:48 PM

YEAH!!!! But i'm going to take a nap first.

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Post by: Deathreaper on July 09, 2005, 09:09:29 PM

Another sister is Emothtion and Wind.