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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 16, 2005, 05:10:41 PM
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And now...
The five parts of Rapture
have been completed.
But the time to reconcile
has passed.
And the Queen of Sin is here.
Lumina.
She and her partners Auron and Oda
traveled to the Forkeep
and found the Black Trio of Veksin,
Wizard of Rapture.
Ban, Banner, and Bana.
Oda defeated them on his own,
but on the marrow, Oda was gone.
Auron left Lumina and rose
to the top of the Forkeep
to speak with Oda.
You must
Return to Lumina.
To take her back
to the time you loved her.
Her true sin is about to be revealed.
So you must go.
for her Sin.
The coils of Rapture came upon the Forkeep
and the wizard Veksin took up it's power.
Auron and Oda joined once more
and defeated Rodair,
Veksin's Assassin.
Rapture began to grow
for darkness
was at the top of its power.
Of the Triangle Light.
On the Blue Heart,
the place where Rapture was,
created.
The Rapture, born of the Dark.
From the Rapture came Sodogon,
The Broken Axe, Maker of Fear.
From Sodogon came Ebidor,
The Twisted Heart Mage.
From Ebidor Came Tangment,
The Secant Desire.
For the forlorn scare of Rapture
grew to a height.
The Gate to the North Arc was blocked
by Sodogon, Maker of Fear.
Oda and Auron over came the Broken Axe.
but even then, they knew that
beyond the North Arc
was the Twisted Heart Mage.
Ebidor
The party pasted Ebidor and rode
to the Dragon Hoard.
With that they found Tangment,
The Secant Desire.
As they saw the smoke
of Desire came the Relic Wings.
The Angelic Ray of Cloth
that tore into Tangment.
which from the Secant Light
tore into Ebidor,
and Twisted the Heart
of Sodogon, the Broken Axe.
And with this Ray of Cloth,
The Rapture tell to a horror.
That in the midst of horror
Rapture birthed a new Mage.
For in the Darkness
the Dark
grows.
Darkfox, Prayer to Nature.
He chose the light side of the darkness.
And led the party out of the Dragon Hoard.
Out of the North Arc,
Past the Blue Heart
Beyond the Forkeep,
and into the depths of Rapture.
For gust of Dark Winds
a shadow fall of pain
broke through the whim of Lumina.
And she turned to the pain
and fell to the rapture.
Her vitality was the cause
of her dilemma
to the Quest for the Rapture.
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your writing has greatly improved.
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THanks i guess.
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It's good, if a little confusing at points.
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Originally posted by Lighting Half Dozen
THanks i guess.
yeah i meant that in a good way.
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Soory if its confuseing.
Explaining Rapture:
Blue Heart
"A eastern sea turns blue at dawn each day, the rest of the day it is green as the sea should be."
The Blue Heart Sea was the sight of a major war over sea 1000 years ago. The ghosts of the Red Enemy merged with thier fleet ship, the Rature, and the ship grew to an organic state.
With it's body now organic and large, it spawned five creatures.
The Black Trio
Ban, Banner, and Banna were simpal whitches. Thier magic was overcome by Oda.
Sadogon
The Broken Axe, Maker of Fear. this creature was a large Elf-like worrior. It's body was 2-dimensional, so it could not move its limbs.
Ebidor
The Twisted Heart Mage. THe cloth from the main sail on Rapture crew around a Sea Barnical. It could fly with a ghost like creature around it, fighting as its attacker body.
Tangment
The Sacent Death. A dead whale was caught in Raptures growth. No more information.
Darkfox
Prayer to Nature. this creature is 100% Rapture, birthed to dystroy those questing to dystroy it, he turned to those questing and guided them back to the Blue Heart.
Whether or not the 4 survived that far is still a mystory, well, to you guys at least.