Charas-Project
Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: SensitiveGuy182 on July 19, 2005, 08:19:49 AM
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Yup. I want someone to help me with my story. I mean I've already got like 6 chapters, I think. (Sumthing like that.) The real important thing is that I have no one to pitch ideas to. I spend 66% of every day without any human interaction. So when I write, it's a little unrefined and biased. I want a partner that I can converse with via AIM or MSN Messenger. I want to toss ideas back and forth. Here's what the game's about. Lemme know if anyone's interested.
The main character of the story, is not much of a hero. He's a deadly assassin named Kriss Vendetta. Actually, that's who he was... He was on a job to assassinate an Empire official, when he was caught by guards and beaten severely. They took him to an imperial laboratory completely destroyed his memory and chose him as a candidate for an experiment. He was bombarded by liquid energy, causing a reaction in his body that nearly killed him. Somehow, he awoke during the process, killed some guards and escaped.
Seven years later, he's adapted to life as a mercenary, but after a run in with an extremely venomous beast, he's found himself in a bed at the inn. In a half-dead, comatosed state, he has a flashback about what happened seven years ago and recalls the hellish torture that the Empire put him through. Because of them he had lived seven years of his life without even knowing who he was! He awoke in a cold sweat, screaming, and by the end of the day, he was suiting up to take back what the Empire had taken from him: life.
That's the story. Let me know if anyone has any suggestions or comments/questions.
Thank you,