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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Red Fox on July 21, 2005, 08:41:18 PM

Title: Red Queen
Post by: Red Fox on July 21, 2005, 08:41:18 PM
Story: (SPOILERS)
After an assasin from the land Lixar murded the king of Feryzs son have the two land been in a war. Talion a legendery knight from Feryz that never lost a battle is sent out to spy on Lixars defences whem he is shoot by a crossbow and passes out. The young healer Jeina finds him and bring him home to heal him. When he wakes up she help him to escape the land but first he must finds the legendary spear Red Queens Claw that he dropped when he was shooted. On there way back to the place where he was shoot he sees a slave colony (don't know what it call but a place where the prisnors have to work , like the one hitler put all the Jews) the king of Ferys have build and how the the slaves are treeted the men are forced to work while the woman and childrens are killed. When he comes back to his homeland he tries to convince the king to stop the slave colonys but the king refuse and bann Talion from the land.
Talion return to Lixar and join there army to fight against his former king.

Hope u could undersatnd it my english is not so good.
 
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http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Red%20Queen/5.png
The sewers

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Red%20Queen/1.png
My Item Combiner system

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Red%20Queen/4.png
A house

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Red%20Queen/3.png
Another house

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Red%20Queen/2.png
A little village

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Post by: DragonBlaze on July 21, 2005, 08:43:37 PM
Nice job mapping, I look forward to more info :)
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Post by: Red Fox on July 21, 2005, 08:46:55 PM
I am to tired to explain but .. well basicly it's about a war between two countrys and a knight (the hero) that change side ..

This is a very simpel explanations , post a better one when I get home...
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Post by: Al~Len on July 21, 2005, 09:02:26 PM
Very very nice maps indeed. The characters I see look good as well.
This will surely be something to look forward to. ^_^
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Post by: Red Fox on July 21, 2005, 10:08:10 PM
thx , All the heroes axept ont that is a girl is made by me and some others charsets....

32 wievs and two replies .... _sweat_
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Post by: Drace on July 21, 2005, 10:17:18 PM
Nice maps, looks promising.
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Post by: Bart_Fatima on July 21, 2005, 10:57:13 PM
I like the character set...cool mask
and very well done mapping way better then mine
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Post by: Linkforce on July 21, 2005, 11:10:37 PM
Great mapping, althought the houses look a little plain.  I mean the walls on the outside.  Otherwise, keep it up! :D
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Post by: InsaneJP on July 22, 2005, 01:35:11 AM
nice nice i like it....and im guessing thats full armor that the main guy is wearin....cant wait to hear the story!
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Post by: Bobb on July 22, 2005, 04:12:16 AM
Nice maps...umm, not much to talk about 'cause there's no story. But, I can wait.
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Post by: Red Fox on July 22, 2005, 05:36:39 AM
thx
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Post by: PikaTira on July 22, 2005, 05:49:44 AM
The houses seen a bit crowded. But the
screenies are amazing!



Please tell us more about your game.
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Post by: Red Fox on July 22, 2005, 05:52:56 AM
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Originally posted by InsaneJP
and im guessing thats full armor that the main guy is wearin


Yes it is..

Yeah I heard that from some other people too I keep it in mine when I am making the other maps.

And Next week I will tell the story.
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Post by: PikaTira on July 22, 2005, 05:56:15 AM
I'm looking forword to hear it.





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Post by: Robotam on July 22, 2005, 09:31:31 AM
Maps are suppose to be crowded wich exellent details like this, very nice Red Fox.
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Post by: Red Fox on July 22, 2005, 09:55:30 AM
thx
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Post by: ~Calvern~ on July 22, 2005, 01:28:10 PM
Great maps, and the Item Combiner syestem  seems really interesting. Great job with that! Looking forward for more screens and possibly a demo in the near future  :D
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Post by: Red Fox on July 22, 2005, 01:38:11 PM
thx , I will probely not make a demo becouse the game is not going to be so long.
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Post by: ~Calvern~ on July 22, 2005, 01:48:08 PM
Ok, well, Definetly can't wait. Screens are quite interesting and pose some questions so when you finish that game get a link up there, wld love to download and try it out
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Post by: Red Fox on July 30, 2005, 03:56:48 PM
have posted the story se the first page
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Post by: chocobomaster09 on July 30, 2005, 11:25:19 PM
very nice mapping skill, looks very nice. Nice job red fox!
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Post by: Red Fox on July 31, 2005, 09:55:38 AM
thx
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Post by: Red Fox on July 31, 2005, 10:50:56 AM
Sorry for dubbel post.

Here is the character

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Talion.pngName: Talion
Class: Knight
Gender: Male
Age: 43
Description: The legendary knight from Feryz.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Jeina.pngName: Jeina
Class: Healer
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Description: A stutent in the great academy. Study to become a healer.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Tiljad.pngName: Ti'ljad
Class: Mage
Gender: Male
Age: 304
Description: One of the few mages that exist in Lixar.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Jack.pngName: Jack
Class: Gunner
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Description: One of the best gunners in Lixar.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 01, 2005, 01:17:53 PM
I haven't got so many comments since I posted the story but maybe it can change.

here is a screenshot
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Post by: maxine on August 01, 2005, 02:04:33 PM
i love that picture..... I JUST LOVE IT
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 11:07:46 AM
tack
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 05:34:10 PM
u know if u guys don't like the game just say so and I stop posting about and if u guys do like PLZ comment the character and story.

Anyway new screen

I am starting to know how RPG lord feels like
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Post by: Bobb on August 02, 2005, 05:47:30 PM
I like the story. The characters are good too. Nice maps also.
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 02, 2005, 06:15:39 PM
I'd think you like it just because of the screen.
And yes, Red Fox, you are right. My game gets ignored so much just because it barely has any screens. I'll bet they'd leave the game behind if you stopped giving screens and started asking for help.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 06:23:07 PM
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Originally posted by RPG LORD
I'd think you like it just because of the screen.
And yes, Red Fox, you are right. My game gets ignored so much just because it barely has any screens. I'll bet they'd leave the game behind if you stopped giving screens and started asking for help.


Yeah lets try that. Are there any good midi makers out there cuz I could really need a battle midi.
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Post by: Linkforce on August 02, 2005, 06:42:01 PM
Nice screens.  Keep up the good work.  ^^
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 06:49:18 PM
thx.

Talions change his armour later in the game and he will look like this.
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 02, 2005, 06:49:48 PM
I'll start on it.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 06:52:42 PM
Good thx.

What name do u want to have in the credit?
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Post by: Linkforce on August 02, 2005, 07:00:37 PM
Wow, Talions got some funky hair.  :P
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 07:01:31 PM
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Originally posted by Linkforce
Wow, Talions got some funky hair.  :P


LOL , it's his helmet
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Post by: InsaneJP on August 02, 2005, 07:19:10 PM
ill admit he is one of the most original main characters ive ever seen and i like it! :]]
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Post by: Red Fox on August 02, 2005, 07:21:20 PM
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Originally posted by InsaneJP
ill admit he is one of the most original main characters ive ever seen and i like it! :]]


Really!? ah now I am proud.... AAaaahhhh sweet proudness.

By the way RPG LORD u proberly getting tired of hear it but I firggin love the battle midi thx again
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 02, 2005, 07:46:33 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IIITTTTTTT HHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRTTTTTTSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCHHHHHHHHHH
Well, I'm delighted to know that you like it.
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Post by: maxine on August 02, 2005, 11:29:12 PM
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Originally posted by Red Fox
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Originally posted by Linkforce
Wow, Talions got some funky hair.  :P


LOL , it's his helmet


Hahahahaha LOL that got me a good laugh... Anyways since you are a swedish guy så ÄGER DITT SPEL HÅRT... DINA KARTOR IAF

Translation: Your game owns... At least your maps
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 01:52:16 PM
lol , så vad du påstår att min story inte äger då. det va lågt.
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 02:17:39 PM
nah, the story is great.. but the pics still owns
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 02:19:50 PM
Lol , thx man
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 02:35:32 PM
:D... I just love that woody pic with the high mountain thingy next too it and a hcest in the upper corner.... Lovely picture, unbeatable for the moment
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 03:21:50 PM
New Screenshot
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 03:23:12 PM
lovely lovely... Where do u get ur panoramas?
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 03:27:19 PM
secert .. nah i got it here (http://www.phylomortis.com/)
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 04:54:23 PM
tackar... The maps fits real good with the panoramas... You could make a whole game in thoos woody mountain stuff.. Then you would have me hanging on the game with the tongue hanging out the mouth.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 04:59:48 PM
lol det kommer va mycket berg i början av spelet
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 05:01:10 PM
mountains = goooooood :P.... Will surely play your game !!!

Kan inte vänta !
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 05:05:07 PM
haha det kommer ta ett tag innan det kommer började på det för ett par veckor sedan.

I have changed my mind I will proberly make a demo but I don't know when it will be out.
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 05:09:08 PM
cant wait... CANT WAIT !
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 10:10:53 PM
Lol , but u have to w8. Tommorow I will post some Good-to-know-and-just-some-boring Information , Not for I think anyone would care or read them..
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 10:13:38 PM
i will.. this is one of the threads my eyes keep going too. :D
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Post by: Red Fox on August 03, 2005, 10:17:51 PM
Cool , I got a fan or atleast something like it.
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Post by: maxine on August 03, 2005, 10:28:12 PM
you got a fan yes. ME!.. I am a fan of Red Fox aswell as i am a fan of Insane and i cant remember names of the great game creators i see around here.. But yes, you are right
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Post by: Red Fox on August 04, 2005, 07:39:03 AM
 Magic and Mages
The power of channel magic is very rare.
In Lyxia there is only two people who can channel
Ti'ljad , age 304 , Zurlan , Age 512.
For some reason can only mage channel magic.
For unknown reason most od teh males with the power have
been born in Lyxia. In Feryz there exist no mages at this time.
The oldst mage knowned is Chzilyro , he becamde574 years old before
he died in war.

 Energi and Healers
The power of channel energi is really common in both of the lands.
Only females has the power to channel energi. While magic destroy
and bring chaos hte energi heal and creat. But those with the power to channel energi dosn't live as long as those with the power to channel magic.

 The Red Queen
The Red Queen is the god of war. Wall paintings from ancints time
says she is halfbeast halfhuman. She got the upper body as a female and the lower body as a lion and she holds the spear "Red Queens Claw". The picture of her have changed during time sometimes she have been painted as a woman in red dress other times has she been pinted as a lion that walks on two legs but one thing she have had all this time is the spear. She is what god is to us today some belive she exist some do not but no one knows. Soldiers prays to her before they go out to war . though some don't belive in her it's has become a tradition so they do it anyway
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Post by: Starduster on August 05, 2005, 09:48:32 PM
The map detail is excellent, the story that I've read so far is decent I'll be checking up on this now and then.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 05, 2005, 09:50:26 PM
Only decent  :| , thx I will try to make the demo before school starts but it's only a week left so I will proberly not make it.
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Post by: Master Yoda on August 05, 2005, 09:53:28 PM
Looks great. Only cwibble is the brown main character. Slightly wierd I think! But hey, me no care, good game, I'd love to Beta test it.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 05, 2005, 09:58:14 PM
You can beta tes but I have to finish it first :|
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 05, 2005, 10:00:57 PM
Interesting...VERY interesting...
NEVER forget to mention that I did an organ battle theme for it :D
And I'd love to know what the Red Queen actually is. The description as a female on the upper body and a lion at the lower body appeals to me most.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 05, 2005, 10:27:20 PM
Lol , u did and it is gr8.
Haven't decided yet if u will see her in the game or not yet ..
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 05, 2005, 10:32:56 PM
Hmm...Well, it's greatly gained my interest in any case.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 05, 2005, 10:35:37 PM
Cool.
By the way can u make another midi for me?
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 05, 2005, 10:38:06 PM
It depends, I'm already stocked up with 3 requests (if that's all) which I still have to finish, so I probably won't be able to help alot with MIDIs for the next few days.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 05, 2005, 10:44:43 PM
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Originally posted by RPG LORD
It depends, I'm already stocked up with 3 requests (if that's all) which I still have to finish, so I probably won't be able to help alot with MIDIs for the next few days.


I don't need it now for awhile, If u want to make it so just tell me on msn when u are ready to make it
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Post by: RPG LORD on August 05, 2005, 10:58:02 PM
Hmm... I will.
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Post by: Red Fox on August 06, 2005, 10:06:16 AM
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Hmm... I will.


Gr8 !
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Post by: Red Fox on August 20, 2005, 12:21:39 PM
Three new screenshots

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq.png

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/gestweghwhywah.png

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/dawdwrffwafawgahshsnhj.png
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Post by: Red Fox on October 24, 2005, 08:57:55 AM
Yes, I'm back.

--Concept art--

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/Taliond.png

--ScrenShoots--
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/WoOot.png
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/DeepShitL/ehys.png


--Background--

 Talion
When Talion was 5 years old, the captain of the royal army of Feryz comed to the village Talion lived in to look for boy that would be trained to become a warrior.
While the captain searched for the boy where Talion playing Thelj'an and Knight (a game where one of the player is a Thelj'an and the other is a knight
and they beat each other up and the first one to fall to the ground loses). The captain watched while the two boys where playing and where amazed when Talion finished
his friend with a kick in the head that made him fall unconscious to the ground. The captain asked Talion if he wanted to become a warrior. Talion said Yes.
When Talions parents refused to let the captain take their so did he slaughter them. Talion just watched and didn't even fell a tear becouse no one would stand in his way to become a true warrior.
On their way out of the villiage the captain asked Talion if he was the Thelj'an or the Knight.
Talion looked up and said " I was the knight"

During 30 years where Talion trained to fight and not to feel pain nor fear.

--Things That will be in the Game--

I will be adding a charisma system.
Nobels will be able to train up your charisma for a small amount of money.
items will be 5% cheaper per level of charisma and peaople will tell you more importent stuff per level of charisma.(This won't be in the demo)

I will also be adding a csm. (This won't be in the demo)

And you won't be able to change equipment instead you will be able to insert orbs in your weapons that do diffrence things like rasing attack and stuff like that. There will also be unique orbs that do more things then a normal orb some of the unique orbs will also give the hero a new skill when he uses it. (This won't be in the demo)