Charas-Project
Off-Topic => Really Old Stuff => Archive => Charas World Fan Kingdom board => Topic started by: Grandy on July 24, 2005, 06:37:12 AM
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I was thinking about writing a Charas fanfic. Why? Because I'm on vacation, and I have too much free time.
Anyways, basically, the story is about..... need to think about it. I got the beggining 'till now, but only me and Warxe are on it. and maybe I cahnge Warxe for someone else, I only put he in it because he was the first person that came in my mind (and the only one I can describe with WORDS).
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Plot:
None. Sheesh! I need to think everything myself......? I do? Well then, let me make a plot in five minutes, I have this capacity, you know?
30 seconds - Okay, it'll be around one of my favorite themes for writing about: War.
45 secons - The main character will be, guess who? Grandy, yeah!
1 min and 26 seconds - Secret society.
2 min and 57 seconds - I'll add my group of characters, the "Hokkunnente".
4 min and 10 seconds - Love history set.
4 min and 35 seconds - Adding some philosophical stuff on it, gives audience.
5 minutes:
Okay.
The world was in prosperity around year 5064a.C., prosperity at least for the rich.
After years of pretending they didn't exist, finally the rich people (or the Zenys, as they were called) started to despise the poor ones (the Inferis)more openly. In the year of 5080, it got worse, a law was made saying that "Any person above the age of 18 years who doesn't have a job and/or a house to stay in will have to work for the government" this work was pretty much slavery, with the excuse of that "They're being paid for it", the "Payment(spelt?)" was a bread and a glass of water a day for each person. Some Inferis tried to find a job, but no-one where willing to give a job, even because this same person would have to work for free to they.
At the year of 5085 the Inferies were already becoming "domesticated", or maybe "submiss" would be the more apropriate term.
Then, it happened, in the year of 5096, the Inferis were already being sold as dogs in stores, men for manual work and women for prostituition, but there was one incident at one "Governamental Store".
One Inferis, called Rayzen, tried to stop the shopkeeper from selling his wife, Barbara, the shopkeeper agreed, and sold not Barbara, but their daugher, Camille, Rayzen tried to do something, but his hands where tied, literally. Then the shopkeeper killed Barbara in front of his eyes "To put that damn Inferis back to where he belongs".
The thing is: He didn't. Rayzen somehow freed his hands and walked to the shopkeeper, and unleashed all his rage upon him.
Rayzen was the first, a rebel, one who couldn't stand anymore.
Then the Zenys made they'r first mistake: They let the word spread. From home to home, they started to talk about the rebel, without caring if the other Inferis listened. Rayzen got arrested, and then they promoted a public execution: Their second mistake.
The 3rd and last mistake was the torturer to spit in the dead man's face. A knife came flying, out of the Inferis and killed him.
Thus the rebellion started, all around the world the Inferis started to unleash all the rage of years of torture.
A special police team was made, called the "Pacifiers". Their mission was clear: Eliminate any focus of rebelion.
Great part of the Inferis joined the rebellion, but the majority prefered no to take the risk. Even that way, the rebellion still was a menace.
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Now its the year 15 a.R..
The Pacifiers are already an army of thousands of mens, some of those were Rebels before, but betrayed the rebels for heving theyr names clean or because of Lobotomization(spelt?).
A small group of rebels is planing to infiltrate in a Pacifier base to retrieve some captivies.
In this rebel group there is a green-haired, green-eyed young man.
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Yay, thats it, I just made this story out of nowhere! I'm good or what? . I'll randomly pick up Charas and SS people to put in the story, but if you want to be one of those 5, PM me the first 5 PMs will be they, the others can be one of the 2 captives, and I can think in something else later.
I just saw the rules and I hope "Prostituition" doesn't goes against anything, I mean, even lesbian kisses aren't allowed!
And, before you ask, no, the story has nothing to do with Charas, the characters does.
EDIT: And, before you say anything bad, this is only a sumary, this means without details, that I'll add later after sleeping because its........ 4am here..............!!! 4 AM?!!! WHAT I'M DOING WAKE UP AT 4 AM?!! I'LL HAVE TO GET UP EARLY TOMORROW!!!
EDIT 2: w00t! No replies, 20 view and I'm almost sure 15 of it are mine. My story is that bad?