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Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: Zerlina on August 15, 2005, 03:29:51 AM

Title: A face
Post by: Zerlina on August 15, 2005, 03:29:51 AM
So here's another face...this time I actually inked it, and it looked nice...until I put it on the computer. Why does my computer hate me? Anyways, so here it is, sorry bout the bad lines. :)


This is Titania.

The youngest and quietest in the group, Titania does not make enemies with the others- however, she doesn't easily become friends with them either. Though awkward and shy, the others take her for who she is.
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Post by: Relentless Soulscar on August 15, 2005, 03:48:16 AM
The face it self looks fine, but the neck's too large, and the body's too small.
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Post by: BlackIceAdept on August 15, 2005, 12:28:43 PM
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Originally posted by Relentless Soulscar
The face it self looks fine, but the neck's too large, and the body's too small.


Ditto...
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Post by: Moosetroop11 on August 15, 2005, 12:31:07 PM
Nicely inked, though :)
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Post by: Zerlina on August 16, 2005, 05:02:28 PM
Is this any better? I decided to change the colours and modify the sleeves in her costume and did it cell-style this time, instead. Also, I made those modifications you guys pointed out, and re-made the ink.







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Post by: oooog on August 16, 2005, 05:05:54 PM
Much nicer, but I still think the neck is a little long.  Just me though.
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Post by: Relentless Soulscar on August 17, 2005, 08:51:20 AM
Thats alot better, plus theres more of a background. I think the neck mesures out with the body fine..
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Post by: chocobomaster09 on August 20, 2005, 06:46:32 AM
lol that neck looks ok. Nice pic, better then i can ever can do.