Charas-Project

Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Fortet on August 20, 2005, 11:11:59 PM

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Post by: Fortet on August 20, 2005, 11:11:59 PM

Yeah. A work in progress, but here are some rough details of the main idea.

-Elemental Keys
-Dimensional Rifts
-Kick a$$ good guy
-Real bad bad dude

XP yeah. I still need to get storeis, characters, etc. set up. Just figured I'd write this down now before I forgot. XP Right now I'm working on characters.

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Post by: chocobomaster09 on August 21, 2005, 12:20:24 AM

post some pics and story in, so we can really see how your game is.
but so far, i cant say anything becouse i dident see anything, or read anything.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on August 21, 2005, 12:26:41 AM

Yep, can't tell very much thus far about what your game is going to be about, or look like.

Post the basic plot for us, that will give us a good idea of what to expect. Even if it's something as basic as "chose warriors kill acient evil" or something, just tell us :)

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Post by: Fortet on August 21, 2005, 01:51:40 AM

Like I said, still working on story. XP
and how can I show pics if I haven't started anything other than charas and story? XP

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on August 21, 2005, 02:36:43 AM

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Originally posted by Fortet
Like I said, still working on story. XP
and how can I show pics if I haven't started anything other than charas and story? XP

Indeed. but couldn't you have just made a new notepad or something on your desktop labeled in big letters REMINDER? Not that it's that bad. Just what i do. A lot LOL

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Post by: Fortet on August 21, 2005, 03:11:23 AM

XD yeah. Like 'scratch' story files. I should do that. Thanks, Pyro!

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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on August 21, 2005, 03:11:38 AM

So you're making it with XP?

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Post by: Fortet on August 21, 2005, 03:17:46 AM

o.O No. I went 'XP' as in the face. I overuse that one. XP

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on August 21, 2005, 04:06:38 AM

Clearly.

Plot: While Mr. Assanine Dumbass Kicker was looking for his elementalk key to get into his house a bad guy name "Dude I'm so bad" pulled out his guitar and played a dimensional rift, causing all squirrels to fall out of their trees, and now Mr. Assanine must save all the pandas that are being killed by falling squirrels.

Like it?

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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on August 21, 2005, 04:19:58 AM

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Originally posted by ZeroKirbyX
Clearly.

Plot: While Mr. Assanine Dumbass Kicker was looking for his elementalk key to get into his house a bad guy name "Dude I'm so bad" pulled out his guitar and played a dimensional rift, causing all squirrels to fall out of their trees, and now Mr. Assanine must save all the pandas that are being killed by falling squirrels.

Like it?

Good, but you cant play a rift. :flower:

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Post by: Fortett on August 21, 2005, 06:26:17 PM

XD Yeah.
BTW, this is Fortet. Having login probs. XP
Anyways, main char is almost done. I'll post him when I finish him.

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Post by: Fortett on August 22, 2005, 12:15:42 AM

Alright. 1st character done!
Say hello to Vance!

Name: Vance McLyn
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Bio: At the age of 12, Vance's grandfather, his gaurdian, died. Before he passed away, he gave Vance his most prized weapon: a short sword with a hook shape. He told him to take care of it and to use it to protect himself. He has been living alone in an old building ever sence, learning the ways of the thief.

Pic attatched.

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Post by: Pythis on August 22, 2005, 12:27:07 AM

cliche` hero...

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Post by: Fortett on August 22, 2005, 12:32:36 AM

Good for him. XP I like it, he's staying.

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Post by: Fortet on August 23, 2005, 01:31:06 AM

Yay! Login probs fixed! XD
anyways, 2nd char.

Name: Grant
Age: 15
Sex: Male
Bio: A mage in training, he started to notice strange occurences around him at 10 years old. He then got to a point where he couldn't control his energy, causing distruction everywhere he went. After a while, he met a man who helped him focus his energy into a staff in the shape of the sun. He's timid, but can use magic very well - or atleast the best he can.

Pic attached.

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Post by: Fortett on August 23, 2005, 11:50:44 AM

Alright. Story proposal #1:

Story Ideas:
5,000,000 years ago, ancient monks created four elemental keys to lock away a dark and wicked power known as 'Huso', an object that could tear away at the dimensions, time and space, and completely destroy the universe as we know it. Only the powers of earth, air, fire, and water were strong enough to lock it away forever...
Or atleast as long as they could...
 3,566,900 years later:
A dark warlock emerged from the peak and into the cave, holding a piece of parchment. At the end of the cave was a big door enscribed with an ancient writing. He read the enscription on the parchment, and the door opened, with a shrine behind it.
In the four corners were the foor keys, each shooting a locking beam over to the dark matter. He chuckled to himself as he cast a spell, blowing away the four keys, leaving Huso by itself, slowly expanding.
"This," he said, "shall be my ultimate power..."
Ziandre had done what he came to do.

Ziandre (Zee - ahn - dreh) is the main bad guy. XP

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Post by: Fortett on August 23, 2005, 11:43:04 PM

Alright. I've gotten another character done, but I can't log on through my computer. (I'm using my sister's comp) I don't want to log in as Fortet because I'm afrain that if I do, I won't be able to log back on over on mine later. XP
Anyways, the new char is on my comp, but I can give you guys her info.

Name: Lianna (Lee-ahn-ah)
Sex: Female
Age: 16
Bio: At age 13, she ran away from her parents. She had the thought in her head that they hated her. She learned how to use daggers and became an expert lock pick by 14. She meets Vance in a chance encounter - by which I mean, Vance tried to steal from her. The girl has a kind look on the outside, but has a bad attitude and isn't afraid to speak her mind.

Comments so far?

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Post by: Fortett on August 24, 2005, 11:02:59 PM

Alright. Here's her sprite.

And seriously, comments?! On the story or characters? Maybe even my craptastic spriting?!?!?!?! PLEASE!!! I NEED SOME C+C!!!

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Post by: xJericho on August 25, 2005, 05:41:52 AM

there's nothing female on her

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Post by: PyroAlchemist on August 25, 2005, 10:55:37 AM

Looks like a dude with long hair.

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Post by: Drighton on August 25, 2005, 02:34:10 PM

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Originally posted by Fortett
Alright. Story proposal #1:

Story Ideas:
5,000,000 years ago, ancient monks created four elemental keys to lock away a dark and wicked power known as 'Huso', an object that could tear away at the dimensions, time and space, and completely destroy the universe as we know it. Only the powers of earth, air, fire, and water were strong enough to lock it away forever...
Or atleast as long as they could...
 3,566,900 years later:
A dark warlock emerged from the peak and into the cave, holding a piece of parchment. At the end of the cave was a big door enscribed with an ancient writing. He read the enscription on the parchment, and the door opened, with a shrine behind it.
In the four corners were the foor keys, each shooting a locking beam over to the dark matter. He chuckled to himself as he cast a spell, blowing away the four keys, leaving Huso by itself, slowly expanding.
"This," he said, "shall be my ultimate power..."
Ziandre had done what he came to do.

Ziandre (Zee - ahn - dreh) is the main bad guy. XP

5mil years is a ridiculously long time. 3,566,900!? Did you just mash your numberpad hoping the result was less than 5mil?

The story is interesting, reminds me of FFV a bit, but choose some realistic dates. a few hundred years, or even just a hundred years, is long enough.

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Post by: Fortett on August 25, 2005, 09:39:30 PM

@xJericho & Pyro: could one of you edit her to make her look more like a girl, but keep the same outfit?

@Drightn: I know. XP I was bored and thre in some random numbers. Will be changed, though. XP

BTW, can anybody give me any ideas on another weapon for another female character? I don't want to re-use the same weapon over and over. XP

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Post by: Fortett on August 26, 2005, 12:31:46 AM

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Originally posted by xJericho
there's nothing female on her

Actually, a short shirt and short shorts. I think that's female-worthy, neh? Unless it's a cross dresser... XP o.O
I don't know how to make her more 'female' that she already is. I want to keep her look w/o loosing anything. XP
so, if you can make her more 'female', then go for it. Seriously. I wanna' be able to keep this game alive.

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Post by: Fortet on August 26, 2005, 10:10:37 PM

alright. Vance battle chara set a.
Seriously... Anybody wanna' edit her? Let alone reply?!

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on August 27, 2005, 12:51:28 AM

Your main character is supposed ot be a theif right?

Well, A: he has no look of a thief to him
         B: He is wearing what looks like really nice cloths, which i hope you're not just going to cover up that answer with "well he stole those garments.
         C: He has a more kind/gentle feel to his looks rather then a thief, he's not going to be one of those, it's ok if I do something wrong, but if someone else does something wrong it's immoral, kindda guys is he?  

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Originally posted by Fortett
Alright. Story proposal #1:

Story Ideas:
5,000,000 years ago, ancient monks created four elemental keys to lock away a dark and wicked power known as 'Huso', an object that could tear away at the dimensions, time and space, and completely destroy the universe as we know it. Only the powers of earth, air, fire, and water were strong enough to lock it away forever...
Or atleast as long as they could...
3,566,900 years later:
A dark warlock emerged from the peak and into the cave, holding a piece of parchment. At the end of the cave was a big door enscribed with an ancient writing. He read the enscription on the parchment, and the door opened, with a shrine behind it.
In the four corners were the foor keys, each shooting a locking beam over to the dark matter. He chuckled to himself as he cast a spell, blowing away the four keys, leaving Huso by itself, slowly expanding.
"This," he said, "shall be my ultimate power..."
Ziandre had done what he came to do.

Ziandre (Zee - ahn - dreh) is the main bad guy. XP


5mil years is a ridiculously long time. 3,566,900!? Did you just mash your numberpad hoping the result was less than 5mil?

The story is interesting, reminds me of FFV a bit, but choose some realistic dates. a few hundred years, or even just a hundred years, is long enough.

Completly agrees i do

And another thing, WHO THE HELL HIDES THE KEYS IN THE SAME ROOM AS THE CHEST OR DOOR OR WHAT THE HECK IT OPENS? OR RATHER, ALL FOUR OF THEM?- just something to ponder....

Nothing to offend, but if you're anything like me, you'd rather hear bashes for improvement then complements.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on August 27, 2005, 12:58:42 AM

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Originally posted by xJericho there's nothing female on her

Actually, a short shirt and short shorts. I think that's female-worthy, neh? Unless it's a cross dresser... XP o.O
I don't know how to make her more 'female' that she already is. I want to keep her look w/o loosing anything. XP
so, if you can make her more 'female', then go for it. Seriously. I wanna' be able to keep this game alive.

Just an idea, but if you add womenly things in like.... breast and a more baby look to the eyes, it might start to look like a girl.

Edit: or better yet, a bracelet or hair ribbon! Or color code, because somewhere girls got the idea that they look better when they wear all the same color.

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Post by: Fortet on August 28, 2005, 01:14:44 AM

@meiscool:
A: He's 17. o.O I'm not editing it. If I do, I have to restart the b-char.
B: Uhh...
Sweatar with t-shirt over it, wearing a vest w/old jeans and some shoes. More like dressed for the cold.
C: No. He's not. He just doesn't have a bad-*** look to him through his sprite. XP

Yes. I take these posts as ways to improve myself. Like my drawings on MSDomain, ZeroKribyX's reply. I took that in deeply and have improved.

I'd gove Lianna brests, but I tried to do that to another female character, and she came out SUPER screwed up. XP

Once again, year numbers are gonna' change. It's just that 1000 and 100 are so overused. XP

Yeah. I just noticed that, too. About the keys in the same room. But he still had to solve what the door said.

Thanks for the criticism. I will take this in and improve. :D

And for the reply. XP

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on August 29, 2005, 08:00:10 PM

Wow, you're like super cool. I don't think i said anything good about what you've done and you still say thanks and don't go balistic on me.

I could try to add tits to the girl, but sometimes I go just a "little" over board when I'm creating female characters. I would do the bracelet and the ribbon too, or at least attempt to.

As for your main character, if he's supposed to be dressed for the cold then that is an approiate look to him, I assumed that it was the normal rpg with grass and deserts and.... you get my drift.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on August 29, 2005, 08:21:47 PM

try this, just added a bracelet, cleavage, and fluffed up her hair a bit. As well as adding a belly button. That kept her basically the same, but with more female looks to her. And yes, give me some credit should you deside to use.