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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 07:39:59 PM

Title: Inuyasha: Shinjitsu no Uta
Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 07:39:59 PM: Hi im Kat.
Okay my game Shinjitsu no Uta is based out in an Oriental era in Japan.
In the era there is a great force of demons.they are all planing to take over the land of japan.but the 5 desendents of Japans greatest heros are in luck to find eachother just in time.So they band together to defeat the great demonic force.

the bios:

Name: Diku
Age:looks 20(actually 50)
Race: Demon(not ugly or scary)
Weapon:Sword
Description:A very big smart *** as we could say.Talks back at people ya know that stuff.
Trait:Rough, cold,but stupid(dumb)

Name:Seig
Age:looks 20(actually 100)
Race: Demon(not ugly or scary)
Weapon:Spear
Description:A quiet demon...not like others. He only talks to one person out of the whole group.
Trait:Silent

Name:Ocas
Age:120
Race:Wolf Demon(like a werewolf)
Weapon:Bow
Description:A weirdo...someone thinks he is racist but he is not.At rages he eventually turns into a full fleged demon.
Traits:non social

Name:Arimas
Age:19
Race:Human
Weapon: Staff
Description: He is just the guy who wants a chick. gets hurt pretty much....everyday...he uses great magic to heal his friends.
Trait:.....pathetic attempt

Name:Clause
Age:17
Race:unknown
Weapon: shurukins,sword
Description:The adventurous and sweet girl.Even though she can be nice on the outside but deep inside she is a ninja ready for action.
Trait:Kind hearted but dark atitude towards enemys

Okay that is all but if you have any questions ask me or pm me.
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on August 23, 2005, 07:46:23 PM: The characters personality/traits sound straight out of inuyasha.
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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on August 23, 2005, 07:46:49 PM: Inuyasha rip. The title's even a god damn inuyasha song..
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 07:53:07 PM: yea i know they ar pretty cliche but i was making a book of this.....and they all have a similarity to the characters from inuyasha but im looking to change some of the traits
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 07:55:41 PM: *sigh*.....who gives a crap...
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Post by: blackskullwarlock on August 23, 2005, 08:00:26 PM: Like Asa said, it's a 'rip' of Inuyasha. Get them another personality and maybe, just maybe, it'll be less of a rip.

And it's not cliché, it's copying to an extent.
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Post by: Rikushinblade on August 23, 2005, 08:00:45 PM: well i do and maybe you should look at forum rules cause u double post and if u wanna change ur charater profiles i think you should use ur mind alittle more :smoke:
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 08:03:27 PM: *sigh* i guess your right ill change the personality but keep the pervert....you need the pervert.
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on August 23, 2005, 08:15:29 PM: Quote
Originally posted by Dragonchick93
*sigh* i guess your right ill change the personality but keep the pervert....you need the pervert.

No, you need the guy that wants to pick up a chick. Making a guy the drooling pervert gets really annoying after a few lines from him.
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 08:20:23 PM: yes! thats right!!!!

thank you kirby zero dude
Axiy thanks you
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 08:36:45 PM: sorry for double posting but i changed some of the traits ::)
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Post by: MammonMachine on August 23, 2005, 08:46:36 PM: If you just make characters they won't fit together quite as nicely. You shouldn't be able to just change their personalities without having an influence on the story.

Write the whole story, and you will know what kind of characters you will need.
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Post by: Pythis on August 23, 2005, 08:51:31 PM: Bah, too many demons!!
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 23, 2005, 08:57:07 PM: there is just 2 oh i mean 3
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Post by: Dragonchick93 on August 24, 2005, 02:46:24 AM: theres not that many demons......well actually there are.......but thats not the point.