Post by: neb87 on January 03, 2006, 08:05:25 AM
Name:The Dark Knight
Platform:RPG Maker 2003
Plot: You are a leader of ruthless knights called the Dark Knights, you try to destroy the central and eastern opposing empires, you sucessfully destroy the eastern empire and make camp to get ready for the attack on the central empire. You are attacked by mysterices knights and are defeated but you live, then you have a flash back off your dad the (old leader of the The dark knights) being attacked but he wins and your father trys to find them. So you sent to live with your unlce. So you are on a mission to get revenge on these knights and maybe find your father. You will meet various charters and lands but this will be a difficult journey.
OTHER
CMS MENU
-With Char Bios and History
-In game Timer
Arena Battle trainer
Bank System
Characters
Name:Lord NEB
Leader of the Dark Knights
Weapons:Swords,Spears,Axes,
Special Abilties:None that has not been discovered yet
Sex:Male
Neb is impatient and dosen't show mercy but cares for his allies greatly.
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name:Watson
sex:male
class:dark knight(soilder)
Weapons:Swords, and bows
History: Watson grow up with Neb when they where kids after Neb's dad disapered. Neb came to live with his unlce which is watsons neighbor.
Personality: Loyal,doesn't like to be ruthless but will be to show respect for neb, patient.
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Name:Fredrick
Sex:male
Class: Dark Knight(Genral)
Weapons:two-handed swords/axes, axes, swords
History: Fredrick is Lord Neb's loyal bodyguard for ten years hired by his unlce after Neb was attacked.
Personality:Very Loyal, More ruthless then neb but patient and a good leader.
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name-Fargis
sex;male
class;dark lord
weapons;staffs
history;unknow
skill;dark magic
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on February 13, 2006, 06:58:45 AM
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Originally posted by neb87
trying to look for a good white text
Then make it. Just download font, type up name, save as png, import, viola.
It's not rocket science. And I'd know if it was because we'd have all kasploded by now.
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Post by: neb87 on February 21, 2006, 06:03:49 AM
Updated cms menu..|
Has in game timer....|.....Now!!
Post by: neb87 on February 27, 2006, 05:31:49 AM
--So hows the new text?
_-_-_-AND Did Anybodie Play My Game The Demo IS UP!!!!!
Post by: Meiscool-2 on February 27, 2006, 07:41:34 PM
Post by: coasterkrazy on February 27, 2006, 08:26:36 PM
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Originally posted by neb87
_-_-_-AND Did Anybodie Play My Game The Demo IS UP!!!!!
I played it. All I can say is... well... it needs work. Your maps are pretty bland. I especially noticed that with the castle. Also, if the beginning is just supposed to be the dark knights attacking and destroying, at least make the battles easy then. I found that all I could do was attack, and so that's all I did, and I ended up dying... so yeah, try to work on those things. Also, maybe try replacing all the RTP that you used. You don't have to if you wanted to use it, but otherwise I'm sure you can find things in the complete resources and other places on the web. With a little work, I think this could be a nice game. Keep working on it. ;)
Post by: Bluhman on February 27, 2006, 10:13:14 PM
But before I begin that, I'll have to tell you; your characters seem to be devoid of any life or something, seeing as how, as far as I can tell, every character was speaking in no expression. So, I'll tell you how to fix that. Here are a few ways to emphasize mood in dialogue:
"I'm happy! Yay!"
"No... NOOOOOOOOOooo...!!!"
"AGH! FIRE!! FIRE!!! GET THE WATERRRRRrrrrrrrrrrr...."
"... ... ...Shut up. Please."
"I... ... Um... ... ... Like."
Anyway, here's a few trends I noticed:
"Yes. Let's go back to the LIAR!!!"
Did you mean "LAIR?" 'Cause that makes more sense.
"I will REVENGE your death."
You mean AVENGE. Revenge is a noun, as in "I got revenge," And Avenge is a verb, as in "I'm going to avenge."
"RISE, ME MINIONS!!!"
Is that wizard a pirate?
Anyway, As I hacked through the first 5 battles of the game, all of which, were extremely tedious and boring, not too dificult, I noticed that your maps lacked detail, and... Um... ... ... Shape. Keep working, This game could work out.... Somehow...
Post by: neb87 on February 28, 2006, 12:51:51 AM
Once again thanx for playing the first version i will need to add some can of extra fighting techinqes (NO MAGIC, accept for Dark Lord's) any suggestion's!
and post spelling/grammer errors of you see them!
-Fixed LIAR errors to LAIR
-Fixed Revenge to Avenge
How does the village work i will probably keep it as is!
How does the wizrd look like a pirate and the intro was easy just heal and attack
Is the LAIR Blend or the eastern castle(probably both)
Here is a update off a map
Does anybody have any good overlays to go with this map?
Post by: nutter on February 28, 2006, 08:17:12 PM
nvm that i cant seem to download it, it says the is no link ...
plz help
Post by: Meiscool-2 on March 01, 2006, 12:46:35 AM
Post by: neb87 on March 01, 2006, 12:47:03 AM