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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 20, 2006, 01:06:48 AM

Title: Cowgirl picture
Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 20, 2006, 01:06:48 AM

This is a picture I drew for my rodeo art piece for school. If you know Suikoden, you will recognize this girl automatically. This took quite a while to draw. Please, comment on it. I would like to know hwta you all think.



EDIT: Right-click and select "View Image" to see it at "full size."

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on January 20, 2006, 01:11:20 AM

Very good, nicely shaped, shaded, and etc.

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Post by: blaze_shinigami on January 20, 2006, 01:43:53 AM

it's ok.

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Post by: Desimodontidae on January 20, 2006, 02:05:29 AM

Aye. It's very "ok", but something just seems off about it...

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Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 20, 2006, 02:13:23 AM

I know there's something flawed with it, but I can't pinpoint it. I guess I got so irritated (rodeo art sucks) and can't notice it right now. It's not perfect, but I'm fine with how it turned out. It'll beat out most people's art.

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Post by: 69_so_fine on January 20, 2006, 02:13:39 AM

Looks pretty good to me did you get a grade on it

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Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 20, 2006, 02:15:57 AM

I haven't gotten a grade on it yet, but I'll get a 100 on it. I might even get bonus points on it just because I didn't draw squarish cows or sheep. :p

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Post by: Desimodontidae on January 20, 2006, 02:30:22 AM

I think the problesm's in the face/head structure...

and also, the pants... at closer look it seems to be a gun holster but at first glance it just looks off.

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Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 20, 2006, 02:33:01 AM

That might be it. I had a hard time with it. After trying to fix the face about 10 times, I gave up and went with what looked best at the moment.

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Post by: carmen on January 23, 2006, 03:07:31 AM

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Originally posted by Rune_of_Punishment
I know there's something flawed with it, but I can't pinpoint it. I guess I got so irritated (rodeo art sucks) and can't notice it right now. It's not perfect, but I'm fine with how it turned out. It'll beat out most people's art.

The face placement is whats askew. The eyes should be spaced. The mouth is too low especially for being open. And ...

wheres the back of her head?


anyway. it's a good piece  ^_^ thumbs up

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Post by: Rune_of_Punishment on January 23, 2006, 04:19:57 AM

Thanks for the critique Carmen. ^_^