Charas-Project

Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Spike21 on March 19, 2006, 08:03:37 PM

Title: Coloring
Post by: Spike21 on March 19, 2006, 08:03:37 PM

this is my first coloring. i used a cell shadingish type style

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Post by: Bluhman on March 19, 2006, 08:11:29 PM

Well, aside from the OK shading, that person, who is supposed to be you, I presume, looks like a girl.

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Post by: Archem on March 19, 2006, 08:14:21 PM

Gasp! Bluhman! Look out behind you!
Too late.
It's an alright pic, but it feels kinda hollow and underconstructed. Draw a more complete pic, then try to color it in with a few more shades of color.

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Post by: Leon_1990 on March 19, 2006, 08:25:17 PM

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Originally posted by Bluhman
looks like a girl.

*phew* I thought I was turning gay for a sec...

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Post by: Kasumi_Sakura on March 19, 2006, 08:50:55 PM

Hey now, that's cool.  I like it.

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Post by: Grandy on March 19, 2006, 09:11:18 PM

A FAT girl I might add.

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Post by: Spike21 on March 19, 2006, 09:43:17 PM

thanks i will remake HIM less feminin and with better shading... i rushed with the picture because i just waqnted to try out a new shading style thingy...

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Post by: Spike21 on March 19, 2006, 10:17:14 PM

srry for double posting but here HE is... i could not make him look any less feminin... it just the person i am modling him after looks like a girl

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Post by: DarkFlood2 on March 20, 2006, 12:39:18 AM

1: Make the eyes smaller
2: Put like some clothes
3: make the hair darker

that might help.. I'm not too sure.

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Post by: Ruler of the Dark on March 20, 2006, 02:11:21 AM

Give them a jawline, enough of this really rounded stuff.

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on March 20, 2006, 03:49:21 AM

For anime propotions, the face itself is fine. Eyes are sposed to be big, jaw is sposed to be pointy, but the rest, ugh. The neck is far too thin and the shoulders go up to sharply. They really shouldn't go up at all. You may also wanna lengthen em, they seem way too short.

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Post by: Spike21 on March 20, 2006, 04:01:33 AM

thanx :) i am still learning

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on March 20, 2006, 04:06:33 AM

I looked at it again real quick, the nose is a wee bit too high. Maybe lowrr it or make it longer. Did you use PS to color it?

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Post by: Spike21 on March 20, 2006, 04:20:15 AM

no all done in flash i do not have photoshop

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Post by: shadus on March 20, 2006, 05:22:22 AM

Look's wimpy.Give him some meat on his bones.