Charas-Project

Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: Linkizcool on May 21, 2006, 07:13:04 PM

Title: My first Char
Post by: Linkizcool on May 21, 2006, 07:13:04 PM

Heres my first charset I made. It's an old, silver haired dude. He's gonna be in the intro to my new game, but I want to know first what I can improve upon him.

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Post by: drenrin2120 on May 21, 2006, 07:17:43 PM

Not bad, better than I've ever done.

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Post by: Ryos4 on May 21, 2006, 07:19:39 PM

it looks okay, though his hair could use some thickness and the shirt clothes is lil too boring and could use some color.  Other then that it looks okay.

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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on May 21, 2006, 07:35:55 PM

You used JP's Tut eh? Thats a great tut for beginners, but my advice: Don't use the character you create in it in an actual game. The clothes are too generic for anything other than a random NPC. If he's old give him a robe, long hair in the back but bald on top. That type of old man stuff.

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Post by: Linkizcool on May 21, 2006, 09:41:20 PM

He's supposed to be from a desert tribe, so I'll try the robe thing. The hair is kinda blank at the moment, so I'll try change that as well.