Charas-Project
Off-Topic => Archive => Resources => Topic started by: Iori Raku on July 13, 2006, 06:38:32 PM
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Hello !
here is my char i made hes called Eco Man
(the movements were edited from megaman)
what you guys think ?
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The black outlines are too thick in some poses. Only use one layer of black for the outline.
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I don't think it's detailed enough to meet the picture in the corner. Me thinks you should make the differences in flashy armor designs more noticable, and less bright green.
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I like the bright green, it doesn't look like it would animate well though.
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The charset is green, but the picture is.... gray?
Is that just a bad picture?
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NO the pic is grey-ish cuz when i copied it into idraw it made it that way !
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Thinner outlines, more fluid animations, and levels of shading.
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hmm... a bit tooo green :happy: , maybe animate it more..
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Let's put it this way...
When a person is running, their clothes are moving in a way that is settle for the wind and in the direction they are running.
With your character, he seems to be running in all directions when the wind is blowing straight down on him. The shading makes no sense. And the failed use of color doesn't help.