Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 17, 2006, 08:05:43 PM
In the age of magic and witchcraft, an evil warlord, Shazmardei, cast a plauge of strife and war across the land. One witch, Lumena Rena, stood up against him and set the world free. But before long, she had left on another venture, and returned with a child. A boy of eight, named Murai.
However, it is almost unheard of for a witch to have a son, and thus she hid him with a trustworthy family. She died that very day.
Ten years later, a skilled magician as he was, Murai was unable to protect the women that he loved, Velinda, from the evil Sony Daioh orginization.
With nothing but an old spear fighter for wisdom and the sword that had been his mother's, Murai embarks on a quest to destroy the orginization and recover his beloved Velinda.
MURAI RENA
Age: 18Weapon: Sword
Class: Sorcerer (Spells and Skills)
BIO: He was raised by his grandfather and found by his mother after his grandfather passed away. She gave him her bellm to wear, and then left him on the steps of a Shammar home at the age of eight. He grew up learning to use a sword as well as common simple spells that most humans could do.
JULIAN WHITESAIL
Age: 38 Weapon: Spear
Class: Warrior (Skills)
BIO: A long time friend of Murai. He is a skilled hunter and fighter. He is oblivious when it comes to magic, but does that the abbility to amplify his physical atributes. he helps Murai get through many hardships along thier quest.
VANESSA TRYVOKA
Age: 17 Weapon: Staff
Class: Pathmage (Non Elemental Spells)
BIO: An old childhood friend of Murai. She had gone off to learn magic in a far away city. After fighting the orginization, she sets off on her own quest to fight Kafaread. On the way her path crosses with Murai and Julian once, and then again when the three team up perminantly.
VEMIR
Aage: 61 Weapon: Crossbow
Class: Squire (Skills and some spells)
BIO: A tigrian from a wasteland city. He is an old friend of Julian and a skilled marksmen. He has seen many battles and has thus picked up many skills. He can also use his tiger like body to rip and tare at his enemies.
S C R E E N + S H O T S
Murai walks to the City of Shammar by taking the path from his house.
The potion shop is like sorceror grocery store.
A lady gaurd rests at her post to protect all in need.
Murai waits at the big lake near the mansion.
Post by: drenrin2120 on July 17, 2006, 08:24:31 PM
Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 18, 2006, 02:54:43 AM
Post by: drenrin2120 on July 18, 2006, 03:11:28 AM
Post by: Dragoon de Sol on July 18, 2006, 03:12:15 AM
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Post by: aboutasoandthis on July 18, 2006, 01:09:19 PM
Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 18, 2006, 01:23:41 PM
Post by: DragonBlaze on July 18, 2006, 03:53:29 PM
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the evil Sony Daioh orginization
Sony evil? Never _ghost_
The story isn't bad. I think this could turn out to be a good game :)
Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 18, 2006, 09:48:41 PM
Post by: Meiscool-2 on July 18, 2006, 10:19:30 PM
Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 25, 2006, 10:44:57 PM
Post by: Shadowless1 on July 26, 2006, 02:17:40 PM
Post by: Lighting Half Dozen on July 27, 2006, 01:01:07 PM
Post by: Meiscool-2 on July 27, 2006, 02:46:42 PM
See how in that screen the white rocks are the path, but they arn't connected in the red circles? That's what I mean about distorting it.
Other then that, looks fine.