Post by: Electronic Dragoon on July 27, 2006, 03:35:44 PM
"For each dragon there will be an angel..."
"Those who wish wealth and power shall pay with their life and peace..."
Developer:Electronic Dragoon
Maker: RPG maker 2003
Demo Version:
Alkkarya demo (http://files.filefront.com/Alkkarya_I__demoexe/;5325895;;/fileinfo.html)
This one works.I tested it.Needs RTP It has almost no songs to make the file smaller.
Synopsis:
- Prologue:
Malkavian,the most dangerous pirate ever known, faces his last challenge: rob the Holy Dragon treasure. To do it he wiped out the dragon that guarded the treasure. This fact gave freedom to the ancient curse spirit, which was sealed within the dragon's heart. This spirit killed Malkavian and soon found another host,a boy,who was transformed into an evil dragon on his fifteenth birthday. This creature brought chaos to the whole world. So, the Dragon Lord was summoned, but he couldn't kill the man behind the evil being and decided to put him in deep sleep for ten years...
- The game:
Ten years later, an unnamed boy ("Alec") wakes up on Yarukian with no memory about his past.Leos,a young angel helps him around,even not knowing his true nature.The town come to be under attack and they flee leaving nothing but ash behind.Every time they come to talk to one of the lords of the nature,they deny te tell "Alec" the truth about his origin and past.Why?(I won't go further on this because it leads to a wrong conclusion,whitch is the idea of the game,but later you can unfold the truth about "Alec",the Dragon Lord and the evil dragon.)
- Background story:
Long ago a "natural" disaster killed about one third of the Alkkarian population.Cultures were lost for ever.Only some old ruins and ancient profecies were left...And strange facts involving angels and dragons began to happen....The old profecies tell all about what is happening...But they are hard to understand...
Main characters
- Alec:
Mysterious boy without memory about his life and incedible powers. Soon he'll discover his true dark past.
- Leos:
Angel girl from Yarukian - where there is no place for angels...
Screenshots:
Notes:
- I am using RPT,but I've imported the files I need
- The game has features like mp3 music (not much).
- It works with any RTP 2003 version
- Full version soon available
- If you think it's a bad project,tell why and give me good ideas to improve it,ok?
See ya.
Post by: aboutasoandthis on July 27, 2006, 05:24:22 PM
First off, I'd avoid using MP3s. They are the biggest offenders for large file sizes. I avoid most games that take more than an hour to download. An MP3 for me takes at least 15 minutes.
You said you are not using RTP yet I see RTP Monsters and RTP Backdrops in that battle screen. If you import them, it's okay. I know what you want to do. It just doesn't look that appealing.
Your mapping isn't bad in that town. It's just boring. I'd suggest looking hard at the maps in Final Fantasy 6 or something and making your towns wacky and realistic like that.
I don't really care about title screens and artwork. That's just me. Plus you art doesn't really match.
You didn't mention much on the storyline or gameplay. Hmm...
Just give us some more info. Maybe 2-3 Paragraphs? You can give us more of your storyline without spoiling it as long as you don't give away the best part. If you can't tell me anything else without an important spoiler, you need to rework your storyline.
Post by: DragonBlaze on July 28, 2006, 12:04:15 AM
Post by: Electronic Dragoon on July 28, 2006, 01:48:19 AM
Post by: DragonBlaze on July 29, 2006, 01:45:15 PM
Thus far, the only comment I have on the actual game is that the loading thing is really stupid. Most games have loading stuff like that because they're actually loading stuff. Putting a dummy one in for looks is just stupid.
Post by: Electronic Dragoon on July 29, 2006, 07:51:18 PM