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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Noobpwner on October 17, 2006, 10:58:05 PM

Title: heretic divinity
Post by: Noobpwner on October 17, 2006, 10:58:05 PM

the story takes place on two planets a planet like heaven where a bunch of people with angel wings and fox heads live and a planet that resembels hell where the humans live your a half human half angel who is thrown out of heaven to hell and your on a quest to try to fly back to heaven but god takes your wings.  So you have to go across all of hell looking for your wings but on your journey looking for them you discover a plan that god and the deil put together to join heaven and hell which would result in the death of all the angels cause thwe demons know about it so they are prepared but the angels dont so you and the people you meet must try to stop this from happening and get to heaven and warren the angels.


Main characters:

kanji:

is the main character and is sent to hell stupid thing erased what i said befor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill write it again dont worry.....



senji:

a mischievious angel who was also sent down from heaven he doesnt tell anyone about himself so hes very misturious

is that enouph info????


EDIT: the reason thats poor quality is beacause I had to try and save it as something that i could atach cause i didnt have a photobucket account then :(...

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 17, 2006, 11:01:58 PM

Is that story even a single thought?

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 17, 2006, 11:11:26 PM

what do you meen by that??

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 17, 2006, 11:13:00 PM

I mean its a giant mess of incoherent jibberish.

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 17, 2006, 11:19:37 PM

I tried your game from the link in your other thread.  It's slow because you have an Auto Start event that runs, and doesn't turn off.  All it does is turn on a switch.  The switch ironically activates a common event that is also Auto Start.  All the common event does is change the message settings.

You slow down the game pointlessly, and use a common event for something you definately don't need to happen endlessly.

Are you sure you're experienced with rm2k3?

Also, a game made by someone with little effort put into spelling and grammar (such as you) will be very hard to follow.  So without a decently conveyed story, you will need good gameplay to have even a mediocre game.  You don't.

From this we can draw that you, noobpwner, can't make a good game.  We can also derive from what you've posted recently is that you are full of yourself for skills you don't have, and like to make excuses for things you've done poorly.

You are the weekest link, goodbye.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 17, 2006, 11:35:27 PM

im sorry if im not perfect but i thought i deleted that common event and im not goin to give up because some **** told me to im goin 2 try to make this game the best i can....

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Post by: MrMister on October 17, 2006, 11:38:53 PM

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Originally posted by Noobpwner
im sorry if im not perfect but i thought i deleted that common event and im not goin to give up because some **** told me to im goin 2 try to make this game the best i can....

We are not telling you to give up. We are telling you to stop being a little jerkwater. Sorry if those two sound the same to you.

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Post by: Bluhman on October 17, 2006, 11:39:38 PM

He's right, though. I completley lose understanding of what you're saying by the time you reach the word 'Deil'.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on October 17, 2006, 11:41:38 PM

This deserves a big ROFL.

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 17, 2006, 11:42:55 PM

I didn't tell you to give up, just that if you don't stop being a stupid person, the game won't be good.  The two play hand in hand most of the time (including your case).

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Post by: drenrin2120 on October 17, 2006, 11:58:13 PM

Sorry dude, but I gotta agree with them. You're being needlessly whiny and on the offense for no reason. They're just saying what they see. They are the players man, what they see SHOULD matter to you more than anything.

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 17, 2006, 11:59:35 PM

I've been the only nice person in here. I think I've entered... The Twilight Zone.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 12:03:14 AM

duh duh duh......
well then i guess i should stop this game cause you guys are right it is hopeless and a waste of time i wish i knew how to use rpg maker 2k3 better... can someone post a demo of a abs here so that i understand how it works better cause those tutorials give me a headache....

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on October 18, 2006, 12:09:10 AM

Don't stop game making... just get better before you post a game that you think is gold and you claim deserves our full attention.

And believe me, though you might not've used those words, making 3 topics for one game seems to me like a scream for attention.

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Post by: MrMister on October 18, 2006, 12:11:07 AM

I'm not posting a demo of an ABS so you can steal it, you have Google for that.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 12:25:45 AM

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Originally posted by Meiscool
Don't stop game making... just get better before you post a game that you think is gold and you claim deserves our full attention.

And believe me, though you might not've used those words, making 3 topics for one game seems to me like a scream for attention.

i wouldnt steal it id study it too see how it works until i understand it completely then ide make my own

EDIT: ive tryed copying somebody else did before its more a pain in the *** then just makin it yourselve... I wouldnt steal it..

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 18, 2006, 12:43:03 AM

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Originally posted by Meiscool Don't stop game making... just get better before you post a game that you think is gold and you claim deserves our full attention. And believe me, though you might not've used those words, making 3 topics for one game seems to me like a scream for attention.

i wouldnt steal it id study it too see how it works until i understand it completely then ide make my own

EDIT: ive tryed copying somebody else did before its more a pain in the *** then just makin it yourselve... I wouldnt steal it..

Oh wow, did you think admiting you'd tried to steal code would convince us to post one?

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 12:44:57 AM

You can only make a decent ABS if you fully understand rm2k3's abilities.  Start small, explore the differences of parallel process versus autostart.  Learn when and where to use kinds of events (like don't use a common event to change something once).  Move onto variables and switches.  Learn how labels work too.  EVentually you can tackle things like X and Y coordinates.  For an ABS, learn how to implement battle animations to charests seemlessly, or how to fluently incorporate more than 1 charset (through events) into an animation.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 12:55:54 AM

k i know how to use everything u said there besides variables and x and y quardinates...

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 12:58:04 AM

Learn them, they're the most powerful command in rm2k3.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 01:00:46 AM

k your starting to sound more and more like some kind of guy whops like a starwars geek....


EDIT: I dont have anything against starwars or anything its actualy pretty good but when someone starts to talk wierd thats just scary..

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 01:04:21 AM

I don't like Star Wars.

And I'm serious about variable.  Once you master them you'll use them for most things rm2k3.  Without them, you can't make a decent ABS.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 01:06:30 AM

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Originally posted by Daetyrnis
I don't like Star Wars.

And I'm serious about variable.  Once you master them you'll use them for most things rm2k3.  Without them, you can't make a decent ABS.

k well ill try but i must tell you im slow with programing.... lol

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 01:14:57 AM

There's nothing wrong with someone who isn't good at something yet.  The problem is when that someone acts all big and just wants attention.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 18, 2006, 02:03:56 AM

yeah i guess i was kinda acting big.... I never made so many topics cause i wanted people to go to them i made them cause well for the first one i made for the game then the second one i needed a poll and the third one had the games name on it but i guess tha kinda does make it that way XD but now ill practice making abs's till im good at them :) thanks everybody

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 02:12:42 AM

Also, if you take the time to improve your spelling and grammar, you will find that people do respect you more.  That includes capatalizing your I's and the beginning of sentences (and more).  This is a forum, not a chat room.

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Post by: Bhall on October 18, 2006, 06:19:48 AM

What are you some kind of english profesor to teach him how to spell words.He can write how he want's and how he likes.If u can't read what he writes then don't bother reading it and post your comments about his grammar and spelling.

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Post by: Ace of Spades on October 18, 2006, 05:06:55 PM

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Originally posted by Bhall
What are you some kind of english profesor to teach him how to spell words.He can write how he want's and how he likes.If u can't read what he writes then don't bother reading it and post your comments about his grammar and spelling.

The dialogue within the game is reflected on how someone talks to us. If he has poor grammar and spelling, that means he's going to have messages that are like "hi, i want to go too the place over there can we go their plz?" It's just an example, but obviously nobody wants to play a game that has that kind of dialogue. Now, if he does use proper grammar and spelling for the dialogue, then there is no reason as to why he can't use it here either.

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 18, 2006, 08:50:42 PM

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Originally posted by Bhall What are you some kind of english profesor to teach him how to spell words.He can write how he want's and how he likes.If u can't read what he writes then don't bother reading it and post your comments about his grammar and spelling.

The dialogue within the game is reflected on how someone talks to us. If he has poor grammar and spelling, that means he's going to have messages that are like "hi, i want to go too the place over there can we go their plz?" It's just an example, but obviously nobody wants to play a game that has that kind of dialogue. Now, if he does use proper grammar and spelling for the dialogue, then there is no reason as to why he can't use it here either.

To support what Ace said, and to prevent any "I DO GOOD IN GAME TYPE!" comments, the text in the game actually was crappy.

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Post by: Daetyrnis on October 18, 2006, 09:42:45 PM

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Originally posted by Bhall
What are you some kind of english profesor to teach him how to spell words.He can write how he want's and how he likes.If u can't read what he writes then don't bother reading it and post your comments about his grammar and spelling.

You may not realise it, but you're supporting my opinion.  I'm saying that if he doesn't improve those things, nobody will want to play his game.  People don't bother with those types of things.

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 19, 2006, 02:32:56 AM

   Then I guess I'll have to improve the way i spell in games and on this forum.

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on October 19, 2006, 02:37:48 AM

There, how hard was that?

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Post by: Noobpwner on October 19, 2006, 02:47:50 AM

Not very thank's for the tip.