Charas-Project

Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Noobpwner on October 27, 2006, 01:37:35 AM

Title: My creations
Post by: Noobpwner on October 27, 2006, 01:37:35 AM
I made it with jask paintshop pro...  It took a while give me some feedback...
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Post by: Prpl_Mage on October 27, 2006, 04:26:58 AM
Well, um the font look good but the snake and bird is two different um style.
But try to add a backround to the picture and try to remove the white edges around the bird.
If you add a backround, it is more likely that the thing is seen as one picture insteed of two different ones(snake and bird).
And maybe making the snake transparent and like add it into the backround as well but alot larger?
The snake is drawn on a piece of paper and the bird is an actually picture, and putting those two together without altering one of them makes it look, weerd.
Sorry if you canīt take this kind of critism btw.
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Post by: VulcanRaven336 on October 27, 2006, 05:42:02 AM
Get Photoshop :D
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 04:01:11 AM
Lol thanks both of you how much does photoshop cost??
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Post by: drenrin2120 on October 28, 2006, 04:15:24 AM
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Originally posted by VulcanRaven336
[strike]Get[/strike] Pirate Photoshop :D
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 04:32:52 AM
hmmm did you just give me motive for a crime.....
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Post by: Archem on October 28, 2006, 04:46:49 AM
It's not a crime if you don't get caught! I mean, I haven't been to jail yet... I totally should, though.
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Post by: Moosetroop11 on October 28, 2006, 10:24:49 AM
Yeah, as everyone else said the images didn't really fit. There should be plenty of images that would work better on google or something, even if you don't want a better program.
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Post by: DarkFlood2 on October 28, 2006, 12:07:07 PM
Photoshop usually goes for about $100 -ish dollars.
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 04:16:40 PM
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Originally posted by Archem2
It's not a crime if you don't get caught! I mean, I haven't been to jail yet... I totally should, though.


Just remember DO NOT DROP THE SOAP!!!Lol

Hers one I did on Photoshop ,of death from above 1979.
I was just messin around with pic so it probably sucks.



edit: The writing from the pic isnt showing up :(
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Post by: Meiscool-2 on October 28, 2006, 04:20:22 PM
Those look like really crappy renders.
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 05:06:18 PM
Thanks for telling the truth Mies...

Heres the same picture but edited on Jasc paintshop pro 8..


I think it looks better
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Post by: Moosetroop11 on October 28, 2006, 05:42:15 PM
I preferred the first version. The red square looks a little tacky here.
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 05:45:34 PM
hmmm never looked at it that way....
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 06:33:37 PM
another pic from me...

Tell me what you think of it??
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 28, 2006, 08:39:45 PM
Yet anothe pic...Im running out of ideas somebody give me some...


what do ya think??
go here to see full sized http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n98/twistedjoke/Death.jpg
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Post by: MrMister on October 28, 2006, 09:31:43 PM
I don't like it. The background is ugly, and you really screwed up the lighting effects. Work on more stuff before posting, because I think you're just rushing so you can post stuff here.
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Post by: Blue_Strife on October 29, 2006, 12:13:29 AM
Hrm. If you really wanna learn some photoshop stuff and get better, I could direct you to some tuts if you want.
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Post by: MrMister on October 29, 2006, 12:15:22 AM
Here's 12,000 Photoshop tutorials.
http://good-tutorials.com/
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Post by: Meiscool-2 on October 29, 2006, 05:13:20 AM
Yeah, I kinda did the same thing. Posted stuff I made in less then 5 minutes and expected happy results.

Doesn't work to well that way. I'd suggest that you practise more before you post 'junk', because that's what this is. These are made in a few seconds time at most. I know you're just begining, but you don't have to show us everything you make from day one. Wait till day 10 or whatever when you're actually decent and you can do something that everyone else isn't able to do.
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Post by: Noobpwner on October 30, 2006, 02:41:01 AM
How do you do the cool backgrounds(from your sig)???
and to answer the question the bottom one I think looks best...

EDIT::My death pic I spent more time on and now its almost done but I need a poem about death anyone out there have one??
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Post by: Blue_Strife on October 30, 2006, 03:39:33 AM
"I need a poem about death..."

O_o;

You're gonna kill it even more with text, imo.

Oh, btw MIC, I like the first one best. Nice amount of depth. :P
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Post by: plightofthepureblood on October 30, 2006, 03:43:46 AM
Ugh.....I should get myself a copy of photoshop, and see what all the fuss is about.
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Post by: Noobpwner on November 04, 2006, 05:12:30 AM
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Originally posted by Blue_Strife
"I need a poem about death..."

O_o;

You're gonna kill it even more with text, imo.

Oh, btw MIC, I like the first one best. Nice amount of depth. :P



Hmm yeah that one looks good to but i like the last one it just looks cooler(the effects from the first one look cool)