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Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: RelicLOL on November 01, 2006, 11:47:59 PM

Title: First RPGMaker map
Post by: RelicLOL on November 01, 2006, 11:47:59 PM

Well, this is my very first map I have ever made on RPG Maker 2k3 that
meets the following:

-Serious work, not just messing around
-Custom chipset

I am posting this because I wanna get some opinions on what I can improve. I've made maps for another game, but I understand that the style and stuff can be different with mapmaking.

Anyways, the screenie is attached.

Edit: The attachment didn't work for some reason, so here's a link to the image:
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3802/map1wh7.png

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Post by: Raen Ryong on November 02, 2006, 12:38:30 AM

The actual map is very nice looking, it just looks very static at the moment. You should add some events, such as butterflies or whatever. Anything that moves across the screen: makes it look a lot more alive.

Also, overlays are generally a good idea if you're good with Pictures. I try to only use overlays in special areas so they look more dramatic, however I see some people using them in just about every map. It's a question of style, I guess~

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Post by: Archem on November 02, 2006, 01:41:35 AM

For a first map, it's very nice. But be warned, as Meiscool'll be by soon enough to point out every flaw in a self-righteous manner. So try to ignore his snootiness, and look forward to his advice, it's quite helpful.

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Post by: MrMister on November 02, 2006, 01:44:27 AM

Yeah don't trust Meiscool. He always makes his overlays way too visible... I hate that guy.

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Post by: thepsynergist on November 02, 2006, 02:03:17 AM

My first post was nearly disregarded because of him.  He just has some control issues, is all.

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Post by: I Have a Sandwich on November 02, 2006, 03:43:10 AM

I love how fast this went from "My first map" to "Meiscool sucks". It's a record I'm sure.

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Post by: MrMister on November 02, 2006, 06:14:45 AM

Your map > Meiscool.

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Post by: RelicLOL on November 02, 2006, 05:37:04 PM

Thanks for the feedback. Also, I've seen MIC's posts, a few actually made me laugh.

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Post by: Anubis_Soldier on November 06, 2006, 01:01:58 AM

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Originally posted by MrMister
Yeah don't trust Meiscool. He always makes his overlays way too visible... I hate that guy.

Is that why you chopped him in half while wrestling on the blades of a helicopter? And then the chopper exploding for no reason...

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Post by: Blazingheart on November 10, 2006, 09:35:32 PM

Quite a good map,betetr than i could do,congratz

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Post by: KnuckleCrunch on November 16, 2006, 08:46:16 AM

seriously i dont like people being mean to other people...
still meiscool is just tryin ta help people with their mapping skills and by the looks of things meiscool has a right to same some constructive crisitsm to some people... oh and by the way, good map, i dougt meiscool will disagree>_>

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Post by: Bluhman on November 16, 2006, 08:45:50 PM

Hello, folks. Meiscool is not looking at this thread, so I shall fill in for him:

*Ahem...*

Your map is nice looking. Not squarish at all, and looks pretty natural. One gripe I have, however, is the slight misuse of that log in the upper corner as a bridge; normally, that is supposed to just be a Log lying on the ground, and so wouldn't normally be able to be crossed by walking over it. There's a very specific Log Bridge chip in that chipset, which you actually used in the upper part above the log, but you used it incorrectly, since it is surrounded by grass. To prevent this from happening, hold down shift while laying down the tiles.

Yeah. But it's still a pretty good map.

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Post by: drenrin2120 on January 17, 2007, 03:32:00 AM

The map's not bad at all, one thing, I don't think you were implying this, but you're not claiming that as YOUR custom map, right?

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Post by: Bluhman on January 17, 2007, 03:38:26 AM

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Originally posted by A Forgotten Legend
Four words;One punctuation mark:

I like your map.

Two words;One symbol;One emoticon:
Meiscool=Evil  >:

No, he just hates you because you're stupid. Bumper.

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Post by: FFL2and3rocks on January 17, 2007, 04:00:14 AM

Must've missed this one before.  :cow:
Anyway, yeah, don't bump/kick/necro/etc. old topics. It's been two months!