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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: White Tiger on November 26, 2006, 10:00:18 PM
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The game starts with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke waiting for Kakashi. Naruto keeps on talking about being Hokage when suddenly Kakashi comes in. They all get to know each other. Kakashi says to come to the training ground at 2 a.m. When they get there, they're all starving. Kakashi comes in, and Naruto is the first to show off his skills. Then Sakura, then Sasuke. Then Kakashi says for all 3 to fight him at once to get the two bells. Nobody gets the bells, but they all pass. The next day, they're helping Tazuna with the bridge. Then Naruto spots two ninjas from the ground. The 3 fight the ninjas, but Naruto gets poison stuck in his hand. Thats when he cuts himself and makes 3 promises. Naruto suddenly faints, and wakes up in a boat. He gets up to the deck and sees everybody. Naruto goes to talk to Tazuna, when suddenly he hears something. He ingores it and gets toward land. Sakura, Sasuke, Kakashi and Naruto suddenly meet Zabuza, the great demon. Kakashi shows his second eye, but he just stands there. So the 3 little ninjas go out to battle Zabuza. They defeat him easily with the power of "Teamwork". Zabuza gets out of the area, and they all go to Tazuna's house. Well, thats all. What do you think?
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First: Please make spaces in your paragraph.. The enter key is your friend.
Second: No.. Just no.
Until you can prove to me that you are *VERY* talented in spriting, coding, storywriting, and mapping.. Like a meiscool level or higher, then this will fail.
Sorry to say it, but fangames usually don't turn out well. Even in the hands of professionals.
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I think you're right. My game does kind of suck. Well, thanks.
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Ummm, you didn't describe your game in any way whatsoever.
Basically all you did was provide a horrible synopsis of the first 15 episodes of Naruto. And got the last part wrong, they don't beat Zabuza, Kakashi comes close, but Haku saves him by "Killing him"
And If I ruined it for you than that means you should not have started this project.
If you want some positive feedback here than post some screens, give some info, talk about battle systems, features, something besides what you put.
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ZAWOOT!!!! ANOTHER NARUTO GAME!!! YES!!! Great job this looks awsum.
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Meis, you could tone it down a bit.. seeing as how you were just banned.
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My above post isn't against the rules in any way. If I called him a dumbass for attempting this, then it would be.
Also, saying that my above post is unruly is the same as saying that when people look at a few screens and read the title of a game then post "This is cool keep it up :p " are unruly.
Leave me be.
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Thanks. At least someone likes it.
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yea guyz this game is teh roxors we should all help this guy so the game will be AWESOME!!!!!!11!!!one
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Originally posted by Razor
Sarcasm on the internet is like nazis on the moon. We know its there, but its just hard to detect.
Yeah, that pretty much sums it.
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Yep.
I would like new games more if people had demos and screenshots, rather than just saying they will make a game.
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Originally posted by White Tiger
The game starts with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke waiting for Kakashi. Naruto keeps on talking about being Hokage when suddenly Kakashi comes in. They all get to know each other. Kakashi says to come to the training ground at 2 a.m. When they get there, they're all starving. Kakashi comes in, and Naruto is the first to show off his skills. Then Sakura, then Sasuke. Then Kakashi says for all 3 to fight him at once to get the two bells. Nobody gets the bells, but they all pass. The next day, they're helping Tazuna with the bridge. Then Naruto spots two ninjas from the ground. The 3 fight the ninjas, but Naruto gets poison stuck in his hand. Thats when he cuts himself and makes 3 promises. Naruto suddenly faints, and wakes up in a boat. He gets up to the deck and sees everybody. Naruto goes to talk to Tazuna, when suddenly he hears something. He ingores it and gets toward land. Sakura, Sasuke, Kakashi and Naruto suddenly meet Zabuza, the great demon. Kakashi shows his second eye, but he just stands there. So the 3 little ninjas go out to battle Zabuza. They defeat him easily with the power of "Teamwork". Zabuza gets out of the area, and they all go to Tazuna's house. Well, thats all. What do you think?
Wow that's so 'ORIGINAL'. You even took it from Anime and Manga. Now all the people that want to read or watch the anime know like about the first 20 episodes. Good job! if people were gonna watch it and they saw this then you just ruined about 20 episodes for them.
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No he didn't.
He summed it up without adding many give aways or plot story. Also, he said a few things (either he's making his story different or he failed to follow the anime) different.
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Unless you know the anime well, and anime fangame is more or less like trying to trying to run with one leg. You'll go for a while, then you'll hurt yourself and give up.
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Generally it is more pleasing to do somthing original and imaginatively constructive. Fangames are what? A dime a dozen? Problem is, creativity is rather hard to come by. Why? That answer eludes me but it would seem that as this country becomes more toward politics and science and the cutting of corners in modern cartoons primarily in America, TV shows with terrible acting yet are loved for God knows why are frequent, it kinda sums up that creativity is that elbino rhino of the modern world. O_o
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Most people like Naruto for the Japanese version. The Dub version is horrible.
They translated "I'm gonna kill you bitch" to "I'm gonna beat you, Believe it!"
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Originally posted by White Tiger
The game starts with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke waiting for Kakashi. Naruto keeps on talking about being Hokage when suddenly Kakashi comes in. They all get to know each other. Kakashi says to come to the training ground at 2 a.m. When they get there, they're all starving. Kakashi comes in, and Naruto is the first to show off his skills. Then Sakura, then Sasuke. Then Kakashi says for all 3 to fight him at once to get the two bells. Nobody gets the bells, but they all pass. The next day, they're helping Tazuna with the bridge. Then Naruto spots two ninjas from the ground. The 3 fight the ninjas, but Naruto gets poison stuck in his hand. Thats when he cuts himself and makes 3 promises. Naruto suddenly faints, and wakes up in a boat. He gets up to the deck and sees everybody. Naruto goes to talk to Tazuna, when suddenly he hears something. He ingores it and gets toward land. Sakura, Sasuke, Kakashi and Naruto suddenly meet Zabuza, the great demon. Kakashi shows his second eye, but he just stands there. So the 3 little ninjas go out to battle Zabuza. They defeat him easily with the power of "Teamwork". Zabuza gets out of the area, and they all go to Tazuna's house. Well, thats all. What do you think?
One more thing you should notice on your posts is not to post so many names everywhere in the text. Can confuse people, and i like to hear the story before the game's start.