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Off-Topic => Archive => Gallery => Topic started by: Grandy on February 03, 2007, 08:11:26 PM

Title: It's not really a complete resource, but...
Post by: Grandy on February 03, 2007, 08:11:26 PM

 ...I need feedback on it anyway.

 PLUS I'll put it as a complete resource later. And maybe the suit on the battle char gen, 'cause that thing is lacking, well, everything.

 Anyway, can anyone give me feedback on this guy? It's Sheng, a character I created.

 I edited his hair from the evils guy on the battle char gen, and his suit is edited from the default thief.

 I also took that silly smile away, because... I find it dificult to believe someone would smile that retardarly in the middle of a fight.

 Oh, and that thing in his face is a lil' mustache, and below it, a goatee.

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Post by: Grandy on February 03, 2007, 08:14:32 PM

 Silly attach button and his silly not attachness.

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on February 03, 2007, 08:24:27 PM

Looks like he's frowning instead of old with hair.

Personally, I like everything but the face. The face looks odd next to everything else.

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Post by: Grandy on February 03, 2007, 08:35:33 PM

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 Frowning?

 I would understand if you said that the forehead is too big, but frowning?

 EDIT:... oh you mean the small hair that is slightly downer than the rest? I was wondering about that as well.

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Post by: FFL2and3rocks on February 03, 2007, 08:36:53 PM

Yeah, the mustache looks a bit like a sad face.

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Post by: Grandy on February 03, 2007, 09:40:22 PM

 Oh.

 That can't be helped, I think.

 I believe when he is amidst other mouthless characters, it'll look alright.

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Post by: Emerates on February 04, 2007, 12:09:48 AM

I would suggest making the beard less V-like, and make it look like it actually comes down by the corners of his mouth, for anatomical accuracy.

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Post by: Grandy on February 04, 2007, 12:58:39 AM

 Well, I've separated the mustache a pixel, hoping it'll do any diference.

 And, well, when I created sheng, his beard WAS V-like, so...

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Post by: Meiscool-2 on February 04, 2007, 06:28:16 PM

Much better. I can tell it's hair now.

Alright, other changes I would make are bringing the hair down a pixel or two so the forehead doesn't seem so big. Also, I assume that the few orange pixels on the chin are the beard. You should probally make the white around those a bit darker or something, because when I first looked at it, I thought that the white was the beard XD