Post by: omegarirue on November 10, 2007, 09:32:54 PM
Once long ago there was a vast evil which ruled the land. After he was cast down, the goddess cried tears, that turned into
crystals. these crystals had magic essence, which revived the contents ago old magic. People used these crystals to gain the
magic back in the land. Soon however they became harder to find and the countries went to war trying to gain powers of the
crystals. after 10 years of pure blood shed, the wars ended as no more crystals could be found.
After 4 years of peace a lowly thief finds a crystal in a old tomb. He mystery died but the world was alerted to the new
crystals. The contents began gearing up for another war...
Are story now fallows a 16 year old named Rirue. He has received a letter to visit his old friend back in his home country.
after a grueling boat ride, they finally meet up. But things take a drastic turn...
-Characters-
-Heroes-
Rorie Laguna-Ry-Rio La-goon-a
age-16
weapon-duel swords
Rirue is a quite teen. he can be a clown around kind of guy but
events of the past have left him to be quite shy around other people. unlike
most heroes he does not have a big heart and hates to go out of his way.
in demo-yes
Melanie Tusk- Mel-a-knee -tit-Si-K
age-16
weapon-Katina's
Melanie was captured when she was a baby by a great ninja clan. she was raised and learned the ninjas ways until the capital
Amie destroyed the ninja clan. She managed to survive but the empire still hunts her. she is quite pushy and must have complete control over ever thing
in demo-yes
Forlorn Croesus-For-lorn crook-sell
age-21
Weapon-Great swords
Forlorn lived a a normal life and joined the Sailken paladins at 18 to represent his father who served in the paladins name
for 50 years until his death. he became one of the greatest soldiers and is hoping to become leader of the paladins. He is
wise, and he dislikes how Rirue always seems to act before thinking.
in demo-no
Kiran ???-Ki-ran
age-26
weapon-Katanas
Kirans family was killed when he was a boy. he joined the ranks of the kan ninja clan. he even taught Melanie many of her
skills. Two moths before the clan died he set out and became an assassin. he met a girl named Illyana dying on the side of the road. he promised her she wouldn't be hurt like he was,
in demo-no
Illyana-Lallkn-Ill-ya-naa Lal-kan
age-15
weapons-staff
Illyana was born by with the abilities to use magic. her father was a legendary mage but died in the magicide. she was
outclassed because she could use magic and her mom killed herself at 15. But soon after a man named Kiran found Illyana on the side of a road alley and raised her. he promised he would never let her die.
in demo-no
-Villains-
Darktie
age-???
weapon-double sided poison staff
Not much is known about Darktie. said to be the new Novia had maybe even related to him, he is linked to rirue's past.
Queen Relora
age-45
Weapon-Magic
The current queen of the sullivan empire. she comes from a history of dark mages, and knows black sorcery. she has more plans then just war...
Xerios
age-36
weapon-magic
the queens loyal attendant. not much is known about him, but something about him just isn't right...
-Others-
Hairis
age-22
weapon-swords
A bumbling fool who once worked at the academy with Rirue. He hates Rirue because he is 5 years younger but they are both the same rank!
there are a lot more but I don't want to say it all on the first demo.
-Screen shots-
A lot of my screens got deleted!
-Facts-
Music-The thing I know you will all love is the music. I recorded a lot for extreme quality. At first the file size was huge
but i used a program to shrink it down. one file used to be 67 MB now is KB. I hope you enjoy
-Systems-
Dash system
and rudra graphics. i went To a great extent editing most of my char sets to be rudraush!
Well I hope you enjoy. that shall be there ALL!
http://files.filefront.com/lorexe/;9013382;/fileinfo.html
there it is!
Post by: Moosetroop11 on November 10, 2007, 10:44:38 PM
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Originally posted by omegarirue
Xerios
age-36
weapon-magic
the queens loyal attendant. not much is known about him, but something about him just isn't right...
Queen: There's something not quite right about you... ..you're not Kefka, are you?
Xerios: FWEEHEEHEE I mean, whatever do you mean majesty?
Looks pretty good. To make text with invisible message boxes stand out, tint the screen a little.
Post by: omegarirue on November 10, 2007, 10:50:25 PM
Post by: Prpl_Mage on November 11, 2007, 06:53:00 AM
And, I donno but it might be kinda' weird to have someone that looks a lot like Lulu from FFX as the queen. Might just be me though.
But yeah, keep it up, curious about that drastic turn over here.
Post by: Linkforce on November 19, 2007, 02:05:07 PM