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Game Creation => Requests => Topic started by: Jaarroho on November 13, 2007, 02:13:52 PM

Title: Eternal Legacy~The Fourth Prophecy HELP!!!!!!!!!!!
Post by: Jaarroho on November 13, 2007, 02:13:52 PM

I don't really care what you do, just make it look better. I think right now it's kinda bland.

If any of you want to help, make sure you keep all the text I have, for it IS important..

Thanks in advance!

Also, do you think it needs work?

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Post by: Moosetroop11 on November 13, 2007, 04:41:29 PM

Use this.

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Post by: Greeb on November 13, 2007, 04:55:54 PM

:D

Jaar, the bottom and the right part of the picture needs some drawings to make the picture look "cool and full".Just add something that is from your game or whatever, like the picture of your main character, or some genitals, whatever.

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Post by: Jaarroho on November 13, 2007, 10:13:18 PM

Umm, I have a script that gives it an animated background. All I need is the text to look interesting. It looks in away boring.

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Post by: Jaarroho on November 13, 2007, 10:19:31 PM

Oops. Sorry, but I want to show you what the title screen comes down to, so you get the basic idea.

Thanks for the feedback, though.

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Post by: Phayre on November 13, 2007, 11:47:56 PM

The gray seems sort of strange. Perhaps an off-white in the bubbles instead, something sampled from the background and then made lighter? Other than that, it could lend a very nice feel to whatever follows it if you stay consistent.

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Post by: Jaarroho on November 14, 2007, 01:05:35 AM

Ok, how about this one? I changed the background to white, and Made some slight edits in other places. Need another color or does it look fine now?

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Post by: Bluhman on November 14, 2007, 01:36:47 AM

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Originally posted by Moosetroop11
Use this.

Puree genius.

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Post by: Rayonius on November 14, 2007, 03:06:02 AM

I would make the whole bubble thing disappear, and do transparent text on your background, using the same text as "continue", "new game", and "exit". and um.. legacy, not legecy.

edit: you could just use a simple text generator, like http://cooltext.com

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Post by: Prpl_Mage on November 14, 2007, 04:31:06 PM

Try to add one of those pictures as in Tales of Phantasia or one of those final fantasy images, it really strengthens the text if you use one that match the style and doesn't take the attention from the title itself.

But please, with a background such as that; don't even use a bubble, it looks to good to be meddled with 1-colour, non detailed circle. And fix the spelling misstakes, it could be quite annoying.

So, give it another shot, I know I don't have or use photoshop so I can't help you out here.

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Post by: Jaarroho on November 14, 2007, 09:23:39 PM

Ok. I think I have something I'm happy with. Tell me if it's ok or what.

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Post by: Prpl_Mage on November 14, 2007, 10:11:36 PM

I like it anyway.