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Title: My first piano-only piece
Post by: Boba_Fettuccini on January 12, 2008, 02:12:22 AM

Comments please?

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Post by: Boba_Fettuccini on January 12, 2008, 02:19:32 AM

Heheh, updated.

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Post by: Dragonium on January 12, 2008, 03:22:39 PM

Okay, I'll give you a breakdown based on the three different sections of the track.

1st section - very good, I like it a lot. The chords work well with the single notes afterwards.

2nd section - I like how it's transposed down, but (maybe this is just my ears) the chords seem kind of discordant, like the notes disagree with each other. I'd take a look at those and maybe change them around so they work with the notes afterwards a little better.

3rd section - I really like this, but it seems kind of weak without the chords which have been used for everything else. I'd either put some simple chords in, or put some sort of backing behind it to make it sound a bit stronger.

Overall, good work. It's a very good piece of composing.

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Post by: Boba_Fettuccini on January 12, 2008, 08:29:08 PM

Thanks, that was very useful. I'm glad it turned out well, that was 10 minutes of goofing around on the keyboard  :D I will try to beef up that 3rd part, but I'm hesitant about adding more chords... I could break away from the piano-only, and add bass clarinet... that might sound good.