Charas-Project

Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Almeidaboo on March 16, 2008, 04:43:07 AM

Title: Sprites
Post by: Almeidaboo on March 16, 2008, 04:43:07 AM
I need judment on these two...they're my first try on the business, to please be clear and sicere on what's good and what's bad ^^

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y12/almeidafreak/Ouroboroustry.png



(Gemini, I got your suggestions bro, I'm working on them ^^ Tnks a bunch!)
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Post by: Grandy on March 16, 2008, 12:54:01 PM
Beautifully great for first tries.
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Post by: Moosetroop11 on March 16, 2008, 04:36:46 PM
I agree that the shading on the hair looks flat, but when I opened it in paint it was actually really hard to correct. I dunno what it is about that hair...

Like they said, great for first tries! :D
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on March 16, 2008, 05:27:02 PM
It needs more shading on the hair so it looks less clumpy. Maybe add more difference to the shades.
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Post by: Almeidaboo on March 16, 2008, 10:07:32 PM
Wait, which one look "clumpy", the charaset or the battlers?
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Post by: ZeroKirbyX on March 17, 2008, 01:33:10 AM
Charset, make the charsets hair look like the bchars. As it stands, the chair has what looks like one giant clump on the left side. Try and make it look more like it does in the bchar.
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Post by: Almeidaboo on March 18, 2008, 12:07:24 AM
Ok kids, how about now? Any suggestions on improving that shoulderpad?
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Post by: Almeidaboo on March 19, 2008, 12:30:37 AM
Well, yay then...I should move on to the other poses then ^^