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Title: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 06, 2008, 11:19:56 PM
Ian was on his computer when the Angel came. Without any choice, Ian was thrown into a portal. The portal, that led to his realm. His realm of imagination. "The World He Created." Everything he ever created or thought of was in the world. Especially, the evil. Ian then finds out that his friends are also stuck in the world, now with weaponry. Ian and his friends must fight an army and find the secrets of the mysterious group "The NightShades."

Characters from Earth
Ian- Me. A swordsman who can use his blood to form weapons and shapes. (http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/HEYGUYS.png)
Matthew- A scythe wielder who uses darkness as his only source of magic.
Chris- A guitarist who's riffs can shatter bones.
Rainiel-A werewolf who uses a scimitar.
Daniel- A Summoner.
Camilo- A gunner. Pretty much can use any gun possible. Just like Snake in SSBB.
Kyle- A person with a giant butter knife.
Isabella- A fighter and an aid, who can heal anybody. Part of McKenna's pirate group.
McKenna- A pirate. ARRGGHH!
Jeremy- A boy with a sword and a strong pistol. His sword is accurate but weak, and his gun the opposite. He can combine the two for a strong accurate shot.

Hero Characters from the new world
Reyon- A swordsman who is basically a stronger version of Ian, but with more skills, etc. A traveler from Greenvale.
Artox-An archer/swordsman who can transform into both a fallen angel and a holy angel, whose swords also tranform along, and his 3 swords (One per form) can combine for a super sword. From Greenvale.
Aerias- The prince of Greenvale who plays a mystical flute called the "Grenwood Flute."
Villains
Ensis- A human that was cursed and tranformed into a large beast. Leader of an evil army (Not yet named,) but isn't the leader of the NightShades.
Denteyuto- The second-in-command to Ensis, the leader of the NightShades, who's father was a famed blacksmith. He is the rival of Reyon, and later on Ian.
Terra- An old friend of Reyon who was told that her family was killed by Reyon and Artox (Really killed by Denteyuto and Ensis) and vowed to take revenge on them. Steals a pirate ship and kidnaps Mckenna and most of her crew, except Isabella. A member of the NightShades.
Fenrir- A werewolf hunter who works with the NightShades. His main target is Rainiel.

Enemies
KillBots-Robots found at labs who are only suppose to kill those who oppose Ensis.
Soul Reapers- Orcs in heavy armor with scythes, who's main target is Matthew.
Orcs- Evil elf eared creatures.
Archer- An archer for the evil army.
Swordsman- A swordsman for the evil army.
Cavalry- Spearman on horses for the evil army.
Pirates- Pirates on neither side who are on a search for McKenna and her crew.
SquidHeads- Humans who have squids for heads. They use spears.
Renegade- A dark swordsman.
Doppleganger- Evil sillouettes of the heros.
Gunner- A gunman for the evil army.

Factions of the Hero Army
Greenvale Vigilante Heroes- A group of Greenvale citizens who use everyday weapons to fight against the evil army.
Class of '09- The children from Earth.
Arching Steeds- A group of Archers who work with centaurs to take down the villains.

Factions of the Evil Army
Typhe Army- An army of monsters and soldiers within the Typhe Region.
NightShades- A group of coat wearing Ensis followers.
Dragonmen- A clan of humans with dragon wings and dragon riders.
Settings
Earth- Do I have to say?
Greenvale- An area including a castle, it's surrounding town, forest, and plains. Found in the Riath Region.
Typhe Lab- A large lab in the Typhe Region.
Areth- A technology advanced city, close to the Typhe Lab. Capital of the Typhe Region.
Lake Oasis- A desert city just off of the Typhe border.
Weston- A small town located in the Riath Region.
Mount Zelyth: A mountain lair for the Dragonmen. In the Riath Region.
Delyor Gates- The gates at the borders of Riath and Typhe. The guards are VERY strict.


McKenna's Cell Escape
Download links (Tell me when link dies out) 2.49 MB:
http://rapidshare.com/files/179903667/TheWorldICreated.lzh.html

 
 
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Moosetroop11 on July 07, 2008, 12:01:41 AM
I forget. Did the other version have loads of fan characters and stuff?

EDIT: Ah, No it didn't. Okay. Forget that.

I suggest putting in one more character or it'll feel less like you're selecting a party and more like you're choosing the one to leave out. That is, if you're putting a party choosing system in there.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 07, 2008, 12:57:16 AM
Actually, I'm calling everyone in real life, but these were the confirmed descriptions that they wanted.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Fisherson on July 07, 2008, 02:03:29 AM
I like it,nice work would like to see some screen shots
and features.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 07, 2008, 09:38:50 PM
Made some changes to the story and added 3 characters.

Two screenshots of the first scene, which is my house. (I am switching the charset, but later.)
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/Screenshot1.png)
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/Screenshot2.png)

I am right now removing the white parts of the faceset.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Hirochi-Zangus on July 08, 2008, 01:22:32 AM
I'm looking forward to this game. Nice facesets!
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: RockJohnAxe on July 08, 2008, 01:35:06 AM
Hey lil'sniffs, you are being hit with the Font Bug. You Gotta Copy the Font from RPG maker into ur Windows Font to make it Space properly.

Also: Recently Showed

should say: Recently Shown

It looks Entertaining Though
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Fisherson on July 08, 2008, 02:52:14 AM
Lol,i like you inteiror chipset and newer face set.
It looks good I realy want to play this game.Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 08, 2008, 06:32:29 AM
A bit of storyline:

[spoiler] Ian entered his room with boredom. As he uses his computer, an angel teleports there. The angel tries to negotiate Ian into coming with her. After a declined offer, the angel teleports him.

He is teleported to a small hill area. He talks to a man, asking where he is. He was in a town called Greenvale, a town under seige at the moment. The man says his name is Reyon, and  assumes Ian is there for the first time. Reyon shows Ian to his house, and tells him he can stay there whenever he wants. He also says that the manmade cave leads to the town.

Ian heads to town, and talks to a child his age. The boy was dressed up like an assassin. He looks at him carefully, and knows who it was. Rainiel. Ian heads farther down to a path blocked by guards. The guards were protecting Town Square from unwanted visitors.

Ian heads back to the cave. As he walks in, he spots 2 people in black coats. One of them is called "Blackbird". Reyon walks in and the coat wearers take out weapons. Reyon tosses a large sword and a coat over to Ian, mentioning that it's gonna get chilly. He takes out another sword. Here starts the first battle.

Reyon, in the end, calls an ice storm on them. Reyon and Ian win, but the dark coats fade into darkness.

What comes next?
[/spoiler]
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: RockJohnAxe on July 08, 2008, 07:19:18 AM
"Was" called Blackbird? Is he not called Blackbird anymore, or your just talking in the future tense cause u know he dies.

I dont like when people throw large swords at me :P

"Was" in Greenvale: As in Where the angel Teleport him from (where Ian lives? Assuming he doesnt know his own town) Or is there where he teleported too? Some of the wording is throwing me off a bit. Or maybe im just paying to much attention lol

Sounds pretty Linear but im assuming this is the Intro type deal.

Also because this is "ian's mind's World" does he have some recollection of who some people or things are? or is he just a clueless guy in a random world?
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 08, 2008, 07:17:01 PM
I refer in past tense because I'm trying to tell a story.

I meant like toss, not chuck the sword. Reyon flips the sword over their heads and Ian grabs it.

It is his world, but they were all, ALL, his important thoughts were stuck into the world, such as dreams. So, Ian might have had them in a dream, but payed little attention.

Anyway, I'll reword it a bit.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 08, 2008, 08:40:51 PM
Anyway, do you mean copy the fonts folder into my windows fonts? Or just everything inside?
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: RockJohnAxe on July 09, 2008, 12:33:15 AM
Well mainly what ever font ur games using. put it into te windows font folder.

Then the text will display properly.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 10, 2008, 07:20:40 PM
[spoiler]Reyon and Ian head back to town. As they get out of the cavern, a guard is knocked out and sent flying. They look towards Rainiel and see he is fighting 3 soldiers with no help. They both go to help him defeat the soldiers. All of them head to Town Square, where a great battle is going on.

Rainiel runs fast towards the enemies and disappears Suddenly, lots of slashes hit the enemies, and Rainiel appears again. With a weakened enemy army, they get help from the Greenvale Army to fight the leftover army. A minotaur ran behind Ian but when Ian turned around, it was lying on the ground. They looked up and saw the movement of a gun.

Ignoring it, the 3 recieve medals for their honor. They had a task assigned by the mayor to capture and escort a band of female pirates to town square to be sent to prison. [/spoiler]


And, if anyones wondering, "Blackbird'' is a codename.

Really Really big spoiler just in case I don't finish the game. Don't click if you don't want to spoil a plot element.

[spoiler]Blackbird is Denteyuto. Blackbird kills one of his own members for leaving the group, and before that, Ian fought Denteyuto, beating him by breaking his sword, had the chance to kill him, hoping for him to change his ways. A side story will reveal more to Denteyuto's past, which shows that his heart is black, a sign in their world that means that they are pure evil. The darker the heart, the eviler.[/spoiler]
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: RockJohnAxe on July 10, 2008, 08:50:14 PM
lol Lilsniffs, you make me laugh.

I like it so far. Although your Grammar is even worse than mine :D
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 11, 2008, 12:22:40 AM
I think he's talking about the black heart stuff. Yeah, Ian must be pretty weird, eh?

And of course, Ian is named after me, designed after me, and everyone good is designed by their real life versions.

Oh yes, you'll play as 10 and 11 yr olds and 2 12 yr olds.

My grammar is pretty good, it's just the fact  it's


SUMMMMMEEEERRRR!!!!!!!
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 11, 2008, 02:28:23 AM
Epic Phail comic based on TWIC here: http://s300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/?action=view&current=SpeedSpeedLoverGamesNotOver.png

God, I need a better sense of humor.

Anyway, pic of Ian without coat and Reyon:
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/Bestbuds4evr.png)
I worked on all the small things, like interactivity:
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/PotatoPatato.png)
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: HobomasterXXX on July 11, 2008, 02:38:08 AM
I hate your system set.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 11, 2008, 03:03:49 AM
I'm still getting stuff, don't worry.

Gud 4 u?

(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn25/Lilsniffs109/System.png)
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Fisherson on July 11, 2008, 04:38:49 PM
I can hardly make out what it says.
Thry Red.Even though it's evil looking it might work better.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 11, 2008, 05:57:26 PM
I'm fixing that. So far I only have Ian's serious face without white.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Ben on July 11, 2008, 06:18:07 PM
regarding your mapping here...a bit of advice.

Take a look at the average bedroom.

Take a look at the area the Bed takes up, in terms of square feet. Were looking at about 6-7 feet long, and anywhere from 3-6 feet wide usually.

Now take a look at the Bed in your Map. Keep in mind, that its supposed to be around those dimensions.

NOW

Look at the amount of square foot floor space in the average Bedrooom, with a Bed in it. You usually Have anywhere from 2-12 feet tops from the bed to a wall in any given direction.

Look around the room you are in, And try to Imagine those RPGmaker tile grids around you. Each square is about 2X2 feet. Or if You prefer Metric we'll go with 1X1 Meter.

See how the average Bedroom is now nowhere near 20 X 20 Tiles?

The Map of the room you posted is so huge and wide open. Even though your room has a Bed, A Desk, Some windows, it looks like nothing is in it because of how retardedly huge the room is.

You may have intended on having a large open room, and if you did, you may want to think about making it look less rectangular, or something, because right now it looks really amateur and poorly thought out.

Hope this helps
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 20, 2008, 09:44:37 PM
KICK BECAUSE I WANT PEOPLE TO KNOW I'M STILL WORKING ON THIS GAME

Thanks for the advice Gemini. I was planning on adding a bathroom into the bedroom though, before I release the demo, which may or may not be out this month.

More info will be out after I come back from the theatres, since I'm watching "The Dark Knight" in 30 minutes.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on July 24, 2008, 08:55:08 PM
Pic of the first Battle.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on December 23, 2008, 01:28:00 AM
FALCON KICK!

I had to swap the data from my old computer to another computer, and it didn't copy correctly, so the maps and database are screwed up, and I have to start over, but with all the resources.

Also, the begginning is Ian lying in bed in a smaller room and complains that it's to early to sleep, and then the angel comes.

More info:

Reyon lives in a house on the outskirts of Greenvale.

Greenvale is split into parts. The outside of the city is the Outskirts, full of guards and farmers, and Reyon. The first layer is the town, where Artox, Rainiel, Christos, Matthew, and Camilo reside. The core is the large castle, where Aerias is.

Deeper into Ensis, he is fired from his blacksmith job for killing Aerias' older brother, making Aerias next in line for king. He turns evil and wants to destroy Ensis, and captures a mage and tells him to make him immortal or die. Trusty, the mage fires a spell that should kill Ensis, but instead turns him into a monster.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on December 31, 2008, 06:39:47 AM
More info cause no one seems to care.

Features:

Over 50 playable characters!
An entire world to explore!
No random battles-fight when only when you need to!
Different versions of game will be released-different music, different intro!
Watch TV- Disney, Movies, and News.
Flash Animated cutscenes

Mini-games:
Escape the jail:
McKenna and her pirate crew have been captured! Lucky for McKenna, the other ship has no free jail cells except the large cell, which is under construction. And, the person who's left in the cell with construction, ironically left his chest of equipment in the area with McKenna, but can she truly escape with a pen, an empty bottle of beer, and a stick?

Motorcycle Madness: Camilo must escape the exploding lab by stealing a motorcycle.

Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: fruckert on December 31, 2008, 07:00:10 AM
I could have sworn I commented on this on your Falcon Kick...

Anyways, I'm intrigued
Definitely sounds interesting
If a tiny bit cliche

I'll give it a try when you come out with it
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on December 31, 2008, 07:10:45 AM
Trust me, it'll take a while.

I had to start over when I was only hours away from a demo. Well, I stopped when I left Charas earlier.  I need to associate over 50 people into groups. I also need to get their class, their powers, etc. It's hard work to do alone.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: Flamehawk27 on December 31, 2008, 03:27:33 PM
I know how you feel. Im trying to do 22 charachters for my game, its hell.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on December 31, 2008, 10:44:41 PM
Not to mention  I have to make a spritesheet for all of them.

First post edited. A gameplay video of McKenna's jail escape should be up sometime this week.
Title: Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on January 05, 2009, 04:26:18 AM
Ahem. A really short first draft of The World I Created's McKenna Jail Escape:

Some pirates are idiotic. They sometimes make jail cells on their ships with stairs, treasure chests, air vent, and more room. And through the stairs were a small dungeon area where a guard continues working on the cell through the stairs. The pirates are really idiotic, or Ian is very idiotic. And, ironically, McKenna has been placed in the cell with the stairs and junk. The only problem? She works with a stick, an empty beer bottle, and a pen.


Use the items from the chest by pressing "Start" and going to items. Some items are unusable. Some items can only be activated in certain areas.

Glitches/bugs already found:
The guard faces you when you press the action button on him.

Notes:
This is a rough draft of it. The actual version McKenna will be caught again and thrown into a cage in the captain's quarters.
All chipsets are imported in already, so it may lag.

Download link 2.49 MB:
http://rapidshare.com/files/179903667/TheWorldICreated.lzh.html

Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on January 10, 2009, 02:14:10 AM
Anyone play yet?
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Red Giant on January 10, 2009, 02:25:19 AM
Links don't work :(
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lonewolf on January 10, 2009, 02:44:22 AM
its working ok for me
http://rapidshare.com/files/179903667/TheWorldICreated.lzh.html
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on April 08, 2009, 01:40:21 AM
Has anyone played my 5 second demo?

Update:

Flash made my "new" computer lag like hell. No flash for you! This means I'll have to make cutscenes look pretty f*ing sweet now.

I've been working for music on the piano, and have yet put it into Anvil Studios.

I've decided to NOT put 50 playable characters. It's too much work for one 11 and a half year old to do. Maybe I'll just not put in all the people who don't really like me. Especially that one girl who slams my head in the wall and stuff.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: DedlellyDeth on April 08, 2009, 02:13:00 AM
I've decided to NOT put 50 playable characters.

Good idea! A rule of thumb for design is to start simple and work your way up. I have only 1 PC in my game!

It's too much work for one 11 and a half year old to do. Maybe I'll just put in all the people who don't really like me. Especially that one girl who slams my head in the wall and stuff.

I remember back when I was a genius 11 and a half year old...
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on April 08, 2009, 01:37:53 PM
Are you hinting that I am not a genius?
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: DedlellyDeth on April 08, 2009, 04:39:36 PM
What? No. I really was and still am considered a genius. My IQ is like 154.




Damn, I sound like an arsehole.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Fisherson on April 08, 2009, 04:45:14 PM
What? No. I really was and still am considered a genius. My IQ is like 154.




Damn, I sound like an arsehole.

There's a six year old Idian kid that has an IQ 170 so you're actulay bellow genius level by todays standards. Don't feel bad he beat Einstiens IQ rating when the ol boy when he was an adult.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: DedlellyDeth on April 08, 2009, 05:25:31 PM
There's a six year old Idian kid that has an IQ 170 so you're actulay bellow genius level by todays standards. Don't feel bad he beat Einstiens IQ rating when the ol boy when he was an adult.

What the fook? Psychologists say 160+ is immeasurable so that's BS. And IQ is normalized to 100 every year, so I think you're wrong. Unless you mean the rate of extremities.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: lilsniffs3 on April 10, 2009, 01:43:02 AM
Guys...
Less IQ talk more game talk kk?
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Fisherson on April 10, 2009, 04:56:22 PM
Demo doesn't work at least not for me.
When I extract the files half of the files needed to play are missing.

you need a win rar 9.0.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Nandez on April 10, 2009, 05:32:59 PM
I have winrar
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Fisherson on April 10, 2009, 06:04:12 PM
I have winrar

What version? 9's the best right now.
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Nandez on April 10, 2009, 06:14:16 PM
There is no Winrar 9. It only goes up to 3.83
Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Fisherson on April 10, 2009, 06:21:49 PM
There is no Winrar 9. It only goes up to 3.83

It does? Weird I could swear mine said nine. *Looks* Crap it's not there anymore. maybe your right, but still check you version that was my problem with downloading AoA and Path to Redemption

Title: Re: The World I Created (Demo released!)
Post by: Nandez on April 10, 2009, 07:01:36 PM
I did I installed a diffrent version and it downloaded fine but like  the files are just missing.
It only has a few charasets and chipsets everything else is gone.