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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Darkfox on February 17, 2004, 03:48:20 PM

Title: Chaos Realm Song Lyrics
Post by: Darkfox on February 17, 2004, 03:48:20 PM

Ok, I have this so far... "This is Chaos Realm" the opening theme. Oh and this is the opening to the theme!


(Calm beginning)
"This is Chaos Realm... where nothing is ever sane... beast and men rule the earth and there exists other plains... *short silence* This is Chaos Realm, where nothing is ever the same... order is gone and Chaos rules and one could easily be driven insane."

Thats one version, I have a few others, depending on which is liked the most.

Comments or suggestions?

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Post by: Red Giant on February 17, 2004, 05:15:28 PM

It's great. I like lyrics that sound surreal.

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Post by: Darkfox on February 17, 2004, 05:17:16 PM

Thats what I was aiming for. Thanks Red.



Edit: Added to it. Are the additions ok?

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Post by: HackersTotalMassLaser on February 17, 2004, 09:13:25 PM

is that all? is not long enough...

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Post by: Darkfox on February 18, 2004, 05:15:38 AM

Thats just the opening piece, it's still a work in progress

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Post by: Red Giant on February 18, 2004, 05:57:56 AM

Hmmm....
It's good, but the timing sounds a little off... Unless I'm mentally reading it wrong.

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Post by: Darkfox on February 18, 2004, 06:04:56 AM

I think you may be right.

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Post by: Darkfox on February 20, 2004, 04:44:41 AM

(Calm beginning)
"This is Chaos Realm... where nothing is ever sane... beast and men rule the earth and there exists other plains... "

*short silence*

"This is Chaos Realm, where nothing is ever sane... order is gone and Chaos rules and one could easily go insane."


How's that? Does that improve?