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Title: MrHawi Gallery
Post by: mrhawi on January 15, 2011, 10:34:07 PM

Hi guys, i'm again here to show new stuff. i've composed 2 new themes, as the title says, these 2 originals are battle themes for RPG maker games, one is for normal battles, and the other is for boss battles :

Battle Theme:
http://www.goear.com/listen/fb09006/battletheme-mrhawi (http://www.goear.com/listen/fb09006/battletheme-mrhawi)

Boss Theme
http://www.goear.com/listen/338ebf1/boss-theme-mid-mrhawi (http://www.goear.com/listen/338ebf1/boss-theme-mid-mrhawi)

well, any sugestion, comment or critics are welcome and apreciated, =)

PS: Sorry about my bad english

EDIT:

Battle Themes (these themes are a bit old):
MrHawi Style (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi)
Poder Lucha y Justicia (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi)
MrHawi Boss Theme (midi):http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi)
Encuentro Casual (midi): http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi)

Other Themes (some of my recent stuff)
Sedatio V2 (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi)
En la Misticidad (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi)

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: Osmose1000 on January 16, 2011, 04:18:23 AM

I like the themes. They're pretty good.

The drums are the only thing that sound very off. The crash cymbals distract me from the rest of the song.

Pretty cool!

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: drenrin2120 on January 16, 2011, 05:37:18 PM

What the moose said. With no other cymbals, the crashes are a bit odd. The melody is very catchy and suits a battle system well!

The boss battle has a lot of potential, but some notes crash and the whole feels a little odd at parts. Still, it's a good boss theme, just work on them drums and focusing your melodies and chords to work better together!

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: mrhawi on January 23, 2011, 06:39:29 PM

 Thanks for comments, yeah, drums isn't good, i suck  composing drums xD i will try to fix that and take the suggestions for future works. Well, i want to show another theme, is a town theme :

Town Theme
http://www.goear.com/listen/4cf2b81/melodia-pueblo-mrhawi (http://www.goear.com/listen/4cf2b81/melodia-pueblo-mrhawi)

i hope that you like it, see ya!

PS: Sorry about my bad english again :).

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: A Forgotten Legend on January 24, 2011, 04:49:58 AM

I would either put the flute up an octave or use another instrument, because the lower is gets the more muddy the melody gets.

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: mrhawi on February 06, 2011, 07:04:19 AM

 Thanks for the suggestion A forgotten legend, i will try that =).

 Here another boss theme:

Special_Boss_Theme (http://www.goear.com/listen/e4822d0/specialbosstheme-mrhawi)

see ya! =)

Title: Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
Post by: Gryphon Nanaya on April 10, 2011, 12:03:39 AM

Dude these themes rock! te special boss them souned a bit random at some parts but still sounded great!  :Plight:

Title: Re: MrHawi Gallery
Post by: mrhawi on August 22, 2011, 04:16:53 AM

Hi, thanks for comments =), i want to show more of my stuff:

Battle Themes (these themes are a bit old):
MrHawi Style (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi)
Poder Lucha y Justicia (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi)
MrHawi Boss Theme (midi):http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi)
Encuentro Casual (midi): http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi)

Other Themes (some of my recent stuff)
Sedatio V2 (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi)
En la Misticidad (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi (http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi)

I hope that you like it. Comments, critics or suggestions are aprecciated, and if someone wants the midi files of the songs, i have no problem to give it =).

Title: Re: MrHawi Gallery
Post by: Osmose1000 on August 23, 2011, 05:47:58 AM

Wow, you've gotten way better since your last stuff! The boss theme sounded a bit like the Lufia Sinestral fight theme at first, but only enough to sound partially inspired (I could be wrong though). Really cool stuff!

Title: Re: MrHawi Gallery
Post by: mrhawi on August 29, 2011, 04:48:42 PM

 Thanks for the comment Osmose1000, and yup i was inspired in that theme =)

http://www.goear.com/listen/d5b3331/lufia-boss-theme-cover-by-mrhawi- (http://www.goear.com/listen/d5b3331/lufia-boss-theme-cover-by-mrhawi-) (that theme is?)