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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Trevlac on July 25, 2004, 03:15:34 AM

Title: I drew cloud on macromedia Flash!
Post by: Trevlac on July 25, 2004, 03:15:34 AM

w00t!  lol ok so it's my first attempt at drawing the anime style that has no nose and has bean bag shaped features.  Cloud Strife was the poor bastard who got picked.  Anyway here he is and he was about 6 times this size before i resized him down:

Title: well nice first attempt :p
Post by: Osmose on July 25, 2004, 03:38:52 AM

now, I can't draw so I can't talk, but oh well :(

Alright, lets see...

-6 times bigger?!?! WTF?!?!
-Looks kind of like cloud with Ramza's First Look Clothes on
-too many free lines on his face. If you want to go without a nose, try compensating with an indent in the head(seperation between eyes and mouth i like to think of it, like in mose of the bases in the faceset section)
-Back of the head's a little iffy
-I believe flash does have a straight line tool somewhere :p
-What on earth did you do to those poor shoes?!?!?!
-too many free lines for how it looks
-some areas are filled in wierd, and some not at all, like the belt buckle

My advice? Try some basic drawing exercises with the mouse. Ya know, heads, hands, bases, get a feel for the mouse. Once you can draw a decent head shape with the mouse without messing up you can retry.

Course, this is all IMO

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Post by: Trevlac on July 25, 2004, 03:50:22 AM

i appreciate your comment dude but i have no idea how to draw and don't intend to learn :p

i simply drew this cloud from memory at 40% zoom O_O  and therefore resized him.  i'ma draw more tho.  get ready for like sphiroth or sometin.

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Post by: Osmose on July 25, 2004, 03:56:52 AM

The gallery is for posting art. If you don't want to learn to draw, then you don't belong here posting up swiftly made crap that wasn't well planned out just because you want to show everyone you have flash. if you want to actually show off your art, then learn how to draw it. otherwise, you're just wasting space here.

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Post by: Trevlac on July 25, 2004, 04:28:01 AM

hey wow, guess what? STFU!  This is a gallery and I can post WTF ever I draw so as I said: STFU.

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Post by: Osmose on July 25, 2004, 04:36:38 AM

*Retracts vote* Shouldve thought before i voted for such a childish person

My point still stands valid. If you don't intend to try and improve, then these pictures are basically pointless.

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Post by: Trevlac on July 25, 2004, 05:01:50 AM

i hope you can put this behind you.  i know i have.

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Post by: Darkfox on July 25, 2004, 05:47:51 AM

*Grumbles* ...

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Post by: smokey_locs2002 on July 29, 2004, 07:55:13 AM

heh heh. I own you

Title: cloud must be hyper or....
Post by: benosalankelley on July 29, 2004, 11:04:37 AM

Cloud...um...looks very happy.  :smoke: