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Off-Topic => Really Old Stuff => Archive => Charas.EX => Topic started by: GaryCXJk on May 19, 2003, 04:41:35 PM

Title: Manual checks
Post by: GaryCXJk on May 19, 2003, 04:41:35 PM

I noticed there was a manual, but I think there are errors in them. Who wants to help with the error check?

I found this error:

"Import"

Something special is the delete-group (B). Sometimes it happen, that a (for example) a Suit-Resource is too small, so that the body isn't hide complete.

"a (for example) a" can be replaced by ", for example, a"
Hide must be hidden, and it sounds better to say completely hidden

Fixed text:

Something special is the delete-group (B). Sometimes it happen, that , for example, a Suit-Resource is too small, so that the body isn't completely hidden.

GPI: I'm so free and disable the smilies, because i don't wan't a beer :)

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Post by: GPI on May 19, 2003, 05:08:02 PM

Thanks.

My Problem is, that i don't pass the school because of English.

When somebody found errors or better expression, than please post it here.

(and now i stick this thread :)

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Post by: GaryCXJk on May 22, 2003, 06:24:44 PM

Wow... found typos:

In "Main Window":

Ok, lets beginn. How to create a new char.

Beginn should be begin:D
Lets should be let's (from let us)

So the phrase would be:

Ok, let's begin. How to create a new char.

Same screen:

First of all: Think about your char. How does it should look? How old? Tall, Kid, Normal and so on.

"How does it should look" should be "How should it look like" or something. Nice for a quote-correction part, the "Undescribable phrases of GPI". No offence.

First of all: Think about your char. How should it look like? How old? Tall, Kid, Normal and so on.

Same screen:

Then select the right Set. And search for good resources in the resource-field (A). If you want to change the color of one of the resource, simple recolor it (D-F). You can see the current char in the preview-area (B).

Simple should be simply
It looks nicer if you removed the dot and changed the A into an a, because it looks like a whole sentence

Then select the right Set and search for good resources in the resource-field (A). If you want to change the color of one of the resource, simply recolor it (D-F). You can see the current char in the preview-area (B).

So far only some small changes. Good work!