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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 01:12:32 AM

Title: My second art posted here!!!
Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 01:12:32 AM: Ok!! Now here is a character that not many people like. He's Fuuma from World Heroes.Sorry, but I'm somewhat of a fan of this game. Please, no harsh comments, just compliments or critisisims. Hope you like it! :]]

(Can't wait for his Neo Geo Battle Colossium appearance:D )
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Post by: Revolution911 on October 07, 2004, 01:40:47 AM: i like the body structures of ur drawings, but the faces usually seem off...idk y...im not tryn to be an a-hole...im no perfect artist either.I cant draw feet for my life
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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on October 07, 2004, 01:48:12 AM: yeah, you have a very nice use of lines and body structure... but the face jsut kinda throws it off.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 01:48:17 AM: I might sound dum but ..... what does "idk" mean?
Also, I don't mind if you say that their faces are "idk", I'm not that good at drawing really, so I just learn something from every review.
Actually, I thank you for your comments.
THANK YOU!!!! :D
I just don't want people saying , "OH MY GOD THAT SUCKS!! YOU ARE SO PAPHETIC AT DRAWING, YOU MAKE ME SICK, THAT IS SOOO GAY , BLAH, BLAH BLAH .......
You are not an a hole so don't worry. :]]
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Post by: Revolution911 on October 07, 2004, 01:50:06 AM: idk=i dont know
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 01:51:47 AM: The face..... could you please be more specific , you know, like is it the eyes, the hair ,the nose,the mouth.
Please tell me!! I don't mind.
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Post by: Revolution911 on October 07, 2004, 01:56:40 AM: hmm....well...the mouth is kinda long ya know? and something about the nose....cant put my finger on it

ONCE AGAIN! NOT TRYIN TO BE AN A-HOLE!
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 02:05:21 AM: I see what you mean by the mouth, he was supposed to be smiling, but I messed it up while I was inking it. And tha nose.....
well, In a lot of the anime drawn world heroes artwork, Fuuma has a ....... not so sharp nose. So I was trying to make his nose ..well.. umm... "Not so Sharp!!". And NO, you are not being an a hole. RELAX!!!

(Z)
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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on October 07, 2004, 02:08:59 AM: Plus, I think the nose is just a BIT too far to the side of his face.
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Post by: Ace of Spades on October 07, 2004, 02:21:09 AM: It's a great drawing, but it kinda looks like his face isn't connected to his body.
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Post by: carmen on October 07, 2004, 05:42:25 AM: I think that the pic is great ^_^. I like the line work, I see you inked it, coolios. The face is fine. It's just your smooth style they're not used to. Work on the structure a tad and remember weight placment ^_^ just a couple tips. But an over all great job, keep up thegood work
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Post by: VahnGrave on October 07, 2004, 05:58:18 AM: I like it. it is the nose, its to, wrongly placed.It belongs like a half a millimeter to the right.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 07:39:28 PM: Thank you carmen for your tips!!:D They are very helpfull.
Also, thanks everybody for your comments. I'm learning.
(His nose, gotta fix his NOOOOOOSEEEEEE!!!!) :yell:
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Post by: Red Giant on October 07, 2004, 07:55:12 PM: Yah, his nose might look better a little to the right, but I don't think it's THAT much of a prob. Your artwork is ace and very definitive, keep it up.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 08:04:07 PM: (...a little to the right...) Got it!!! Thanks!!!
Wow!! I though you guys would start yelling at me cause I drew a World Heroes character.(Supposedly one of THE worst games ever!!!)
Man I love these forums. You guys are awsome!!! :D
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Post by: Homunculus on October 07, 2004, 09:41:48 PM: Wow, that's awesome! I don't really see anything wrong with the face myself... But good job, that picture's Super good #1!
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 07, 2004, 09:43:58 PM: Thank you very much Homunculus.
::)
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Post by: Hitokiri Devil on October 10, 2004, 04:50:35 PM: no offense but it seems like his feet are hairy...maybe its just me though :p
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Post by: MrMister on October 10, 2004, 06:43:33 PM: Quote
Originally posted by AsakuraHao2004
Plus, I think the nose is just a BIT too far to the side of his face.

I agree, it looks like some mole furry from Sonic.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 13, 2004, 07:12:01 PM: Errr.....
His feet are not hairy, I just didn't finish them cuz I got too lazy.
(Do I know you .........Hitokiri Devil.....) ::)
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Post by: carmen on October 14, 2004, 07:36:32 PM: lmao, I know what you mean, they do not look hairy. It's just an unfinished ink job. I do suggest you use an inking brush next time. Then you woudn't be able to tell you didi it with a pen. Just nice solid marks.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 14, 2004, 09:18:58 PM: Thanks!!!! :D
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Post by: MagusDeath1 on October 14, 2004, 09:38:01 PM: Yoa Mr. X. Did you do that on paper then put it on the computer? The line's are very good to me. Simple but elegant. Great job! The face does look a little weird but not much. Weird as it doesn't seem to match the bodies style.
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 14, 2004, 09:53:09 PM: Why yes, I first drew it up in school, inked at 4th period,put it in my computer and BAM!!!! I posted it!!!!!
Thanks for the comments. :)
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Post by: drenrin2120 on October 14, 2004, 10:34:53 PM: I think it's a great picture, I did tink the eyes were a little too far apart but nothing too big at all. GReat picture!
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Post by: Mr. X : Syndicate Leader on October 14, 2004, 10:46:44 PM: Thank you!!
Whoa, I would have never guessed that so many people would continue to see this post.
Heck I don't mind!!!
Thanks! :D