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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Revolution911 on October 25, 2004, 10:44:50 PM
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This is not a thread to say that "rap sux" or "metal sux". just post what u write. heres a quick on of mine
The reality of the ghetto seem to break some niggas.
Got ppl thinkin we ignorant, lets change our figure,
Put that knife down, throw away that gat
Lets show em we aint fools, earn our respect back.
A hungry man will do whatever it takes,
to earn a quick buck, to get some food on his plate.
The reality is that we had no choice.
We had a mother who raised 2 girls and 1 boy.
W/ nuttin to show for it but a welfare check.
Livin like that, no wonder he got that gat
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This really belongs in Creative Arts.
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er....i guess so....sorry. my bad
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Rev u rock m8. How can ya just come up with somethin like that off ya head?
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That's the way of the rapper....
It amazes me too...
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pretty good! I love Your Raps
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You need some music to go with those letters. They are pretty good!
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no one else writes? it dont gotta be a rap...a poem? a song?
btw, thx for the comments
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Seems like to be in it the ppl think ya gotta be a gangsta
If you aint packin guns you a "wanksta"?
Dont get me wrong tho, dont start takin ****,
Strenght is power but so is knowledge jus dont be stupid with it,
small.....cmon ppl no raps?
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alil song I wrote a year ago.
Prom Night
She's layed out
Upon the bed
She stayed out
But now shes dead
Tell me why this had to be
Tell me why she couldn't see
tell me why she had to
turn her eyes from me
Hide away from me
She stayed out
Just like she said
She stayed out
and now shes dead
Tell me why this had to be
Tell me why she couldn't see
tell me why she had to
turn her eyes from me
turn away from me
Turn, turn, turn, turn turn
Turn away from me.
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nuttin big
I stay true to the game of the rap industry
so take a clue and stop tryin to spit on me
step off ur high horse cuz its pissin me off
we all one people if u disagree its ur loss
we may not be one voice but we can be one song
harmonizing all together makes it that much more strong
instead of hatred in our lives jus look to the skies
forget the people and their lies who stay in disguise
keep the peace close to home so u dont break the ties
if u dont agree with my theory then take a look thru my eyes.
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(sorry for the double)
little 4-liner lol
reppin Snake-Ize is the way i do it
i can rap bout basically anything, im so d*mn fluent
i dont care what ya'll say cuz when it gets down to it
im doin sumthin u cant do so just lose it.
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this one bout a girl
you just another piece of *** to him, he cant see
he takes advantage of ur innocence, u gotta break free
he dont see what i see in you, nah your more than that
your better than him,it aint worth it, forget this cat
u have to understand ma, are you that blind?
he been playin you from the start, look through my eyes,
he got u on a chain, dont be his stupid puppet
he gonna leave you for dead later on, he lovin it,
i aint tryin to keep you for my self, that'd be selfish
i just want you to see he aint nuthin, thas all i wish
ive seen what he did to other chicks, left em cryin
and when he tells u he luv u, u should know hes lyin
i know you see it to, dont even try to deny it,
just tell him where to go,tell him whats what, just try it
he gotta understand not all women are fools,
he sees em all as sluts, just trashy worthless tools.
leave him behind ma, go on, trash this cat
cuz to him u just another piece of *** ma, ur more than that
EDIT: those are hot raps snake
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thnx even tho they were nuttin big
d*mn i have nuttin to write about and if i was to write bout my everyday life people here would prolly start flaming talking about "oo see he's a gangster blah blah blah raps bad" so im done for the night
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Another body found on these streets,
the home of the killers, cold concrete,
a clouded sky up above my head,
a crow makin noise which means anotha nigga dead,
was it really worth it tho? to kill?
for what respect? that how u earn it? how u prove u real?
s*it like that will throw dirt on our names
as if we dont already gotta live our life in shame
a single mother starvin herself
it really hurt watchin cuz i couldent help,
a crackfiend roamin the streets,
to get some drugs, goin to whatever feet
a "gangsta" who just killed a father of 3
now he thnk he real for destroyin a familys unity
a dealer right at the end of the block
ruinin kids lifes by sellin em rocks
funny how ppl survive through all of this s*it,
funny that what i told ya aint even half of it
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cotinuation of rev's
fiends come out at night lookin for reefer
moms waitin at corners thinkin nothin beneath her
no pride, no shame, no talent so no fame
these are they lives, everyday there's new pain
now a chick caught a disease
cuz she went further than jus gettin on her knees
she was smokin too many tress
forgot the rubber and came out wit aids
life is a game and it dont care who plays
sorry i cant finish but futurama is on and i cant stay focused on this lol.
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(lol)
another kid atteptin to grow w/o a daddy
another mother pretendin that se live happy
just so her kids wont get scared at night
but really every day for her its another fight
life aint no game for them. its far beyond that
it turned into a battle field w/ only gats
goin to school everyday w/ the same clothes
w/ just 1 nigga walkin by his side on that long road
it seems the girls is givin head but not at will
its powered by fear that they might be killed
once again i look to the streets for a walk
no one shows they face , no one talks
they think ima nother killa, lookin for a victim
its so common to them they wont risk missin em
after walkin through, after seein that
i new i couldent stay, ill never go back
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i know snakeize is da biggest rapper on da forum......
i also rap ya know.........wanna read sumthin' i wrote???
well here it is....a lil song of mine...i also got a audio:D
on a CD..in local stores here in holland
don't steal or modify it in any way...it's already on a CD...and peeps know the songs 'round here so......uhm.....just don't steal aight;)
BTW snakeize tell me wadda ya think aight:D
and uhm....ALEX or someone else...please don't ban me because of this bad languages aight???
its just a song i wanna show ta ya
Titel:Albina Gorrila!!! By: BlesS(Bless is my artist name;))
Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!
(Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!)
Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorilla!!
(Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorrilla!!)
Walkin on dangerous grounds,hear the howlin of the blood hounds,fuckin with the Albino Gorrilla,still don't give a fucka, i'm a killa, if i rush in make sure ya hit da ground, bringin' the boomin' sound, lyric kingpin,
hittin' and shittin' ya upside ya head, anoyin' ya, so ya can't sleepa, cuz i'm still creepin and crawling, so scary, its blood stollin', really make ya fallin' in the depts of my mind, no way out, endless, but ain't painless, all my word are stainin in your brain 'n , keep breakin neck, keep crackin' spines, keep wrightin' my lines, keep up spittin' my rhymes, like it's hot 'n,heavy, carryin' a Glock '9, call me mista heavy metal, winnin' every battle, can't just sit and settle, down, whudda ya want now? , i keep pumpin' up da sound, you know, life ain't a merry go round, only real playa gettin' loud right now, lights go out, put yo hands and scream and shout, damn nasty crowd,
Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!
(Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!)
Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorilla!!
(Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorrilla!!)
Albino Gorrilla, still be da deala, steel make ya feela, like a queena,maybe Latifa, or warrior princess Xena,
we shall seea, the one and only beatboxin' rappa', hip hoppin' whipper snappa,
white one who comin' out fo the, Albino Gorrillaz , my rhymes keep bein' the illest,but keep chillin, with my boy JeFFa, 'n the rest, put yo best friend, fo rent, killin' everyone, startin' with yo president, leavin' my resident, tellin' people it ain't my fault, it wuz an Xedant, for all the the peeps of Holland i represent, rhymin' in English, everybody who crossed my path, DISTIN' guished, crushed, girls who look at me blush, all my hard core fans, steppin of the buss, got nothin' good to say about me, then shush, (ssssst), always talkin' about me, because the ways i bust, rhymin' is my must, rhymin' this fast, feelin' like a gust, ti'll i burst, of energy,
please someone release me, before i give all these fakers, a rap lobotomy, i'm sorry to see, peeps be hatin' me, the one and only, Albino Gorrilla, my will is yo waya, now everybody bounce on this beat, and saya....!!!:
Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!
(Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!)
Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorilla!!
(Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorrilla!!)
rippin'it up, spittin' it up, let everybody bounce, in this moth fuckin' club, in the motha fuckin' house, in the motha fuckin' car, by far, knock um upside the head, ti'll they see stars, ti'll they are retard-ed, can ya handle it?
rippin' up this ****, spittin' up this skit, keep bouncin' on it, keep bouncin' on this, fella's, get ready to graba bitch, show her to heaven, then get another snitch, flip the light switch, we ain't stoppin', till the motha fuckin' cops are commin', BOO-YEAH!!!
aight, aight, aight, aight, keep bouncin', keep bouncin',keep bouncin', keep bouncin', uh-HUH.........Yeaaaaaaaaaaaah!Ha-ha-ha-haaa!
For all my peeps in SweetLake, for all my peeps eatin' space cake, fo all my peeps smokin' a blunt, fo all my peeps on a 'ho-hunt,fo all my peeps who just chillin', PEACE!...Ha-ha-ha-haaa!
(4x):
Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!
(Go-Go-Go-Go-Gorrilla!!)
Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorilla!!
(Al-Al-Al-Albino Gorrilla!!)
uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh.......yeah....da name is Ble$$, A.k.A. the Lyrical KingPin, A.K.A. Albino Gorrilla, A.k.A. Funky C, A.k.A. C-gor, A.k.A. the Shizzalin' Shocka...this is Fo all my peeps, i know and love! MUCH LOVE!
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its just my thought but i dont think that u really hold glocks and roll blunts ya know?........i think u should stick to what you feel about things...(they dont gotta be like the ones i write)
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Another corrupted product of society
A wave of pain as far as the eye can see
The death, the pain, the torment, the shame
The blood, the rain, withering away the brain
People dont wanna listen, although it hurts inside,
Its on them if they dont listen and all die
Paradise is there, but they dont accept it
Too angry, too stubborn, too cold, too selfish
This is not what Malcom died for,
Its not what King dreamed,
Its not what our leaders stood for,
Its not how it was seen,
Its what a few idiots just did to earn a quick buck,
Yet so many fought for it and had no luck,
You dont turn around and send out fathers to get killed,
You dont send a single mother out to clean what youve spilled,
You dont build a stadium when you can do so much more,
Give money to the schools, streets, police and the poor,
So many die for what mayor bloomberg wastes
So many hide from bush and run with haste,
For fear of bing sent out to war and slaughtered,
And leave the one you love to feed your only daughter,
And then she asks"When is daddy coming home?
I hope soon, i want to show em how much ive grown!"
Do you have the heart to tell that little girls hes dead?
And that youve swithed to welfare, and ur incomes in the red?
Now after all a this **** that weve been goin through
**** Kerry
**** Bush
I dont care what they told you
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MX's sign stand for the struggle we endure
the many times we been smacked to the floor
and stood up jus get smacked down some more
y we still fightin for?
many ignorant cats jus love to see us niggas squirm
but jus watch and wait till it's my turn
cuz ima clap back, tired of waitin on white cats
its gets hard bein me and snubbed by these light stacks
dont mean to be rude but i kno ya'll can sense the hate
but its my anguish, my pain i dont kno how much more i can take
its takin too long so i dont wanna leave it to fate
we gonna rise up we GOTTA rise up and shake the man
cuz soon time for change is gonna be up and we gonna be stuck,
damn...
anotha half assed rap but it flows wit my music so its aight.
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eh....if i actually took time to write a rap it would be much better than what ive been postin
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Those are mediocre raps!
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(same here rev.)
boom, anotha nigga lay in the street
car rolls off as the niggas sit back in they seats
i run down the sidewalk jus to check who on my block jus got beat
cuz i kno my crew always dealin wit static and heat.
i come to realize its jus anotha block nigga
prolly anotha cat got crossed and pulled the trigga jus to prove who bigga
but thats life when u on the bottom of the ladder
the last rung where everyday ur whole world shatters
its funny that livin in the hood has repercussions
when we already limited to wut we got which is a lil more than nuttin
yea im ashamed that i gotta roll deep in a group
and gotta constantly watch for when i gotta fly the coup
i sleep wit a blade under my pillow, two in the side dresser one big and one little
always got one on my belt in the middle
after that one day i had to get stiched up
ive been holdin on it in case sumone had to get switched up
especially when we see another sign flipped up
i get to it in a way too much dirt dont get kicked up
chorus: (2x)
now we in my block, my home, nigga its my hood
we explorin my crew understood?
now its my life, my strife, struggle and pain
my heart's cries pummle the floor like the rain.
i aint gona release the 2nd and 3rd verse because its a joint song bein written by me, Mystic, and Cee
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we gonna roll, with that right there aight then
and uhm Rev.....i don't use the glocks....but...i' an expert in blunt rollin'...for my homeys that is;)..i don't even touch siggaretes
i'm a good boy :D
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you guys really rock
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(im really sorry bout this big topic kick. yes i do kno the rules but i dont c y i should start a new thread)
I finally got the internet on computer in my room so i have sumthin that was written by me sumtime near the beginning of this year.
"Im the Assassin"
Giovanni R. Alphonse
CHORUS:
fists be clashin
faces we mashin
cant u undertand that our lives aint lastin
we bashin on white niggas cuz cash they stashin
leavin us all to rott as our our life starts flashin
jus passin us all by jokin and laffin
ima put an end to this, im the assassin
assigned to protect our people so ima start blastin
1..2..3.. im back in
Verse 1:
cant u c
its the nigga XG
when these niggas look at me
they jus cant believe
they think they eyes deceive
and they dont c wut they c
the 8 flashin letters of Snake I-Z-E
here to take control of this here rivalry
this racism **** just dont fly wit me
u kno y cuz black is all i can be
so if u feel me come ride wit me
CHORUS:
fists be clashin
faces we mashin
cant u undertand that our lives aint lastin
we bashin on white niggas cuz cash they stashin
leavin us all to rott as our our life starts flashin
jus passin us all by jokin and laffin
ima put an end to this, im the assassin
assigned to protect our people so ima start blastin
1..2..3.. im back in
Verse 2:
wuts wrong wit the world y cant we live togetha
when was the last we saw that happen..neva
wut eva happened to equality and peace
the only peace we get is a peice on the streets
or a peice of the streets were drugs and money meet
ima struggle for the change i dont kno the word defeat
a young Tupac in his prime i cant be beat
u cant escape the rhymes so take a seat
we cant escape the fact that our lives are bleak
faced against society where we dare not speak
but its time to unite and stand up to the man
now come wit me and take a stand
CHORUS:
fists be clashin
faces we mashin
cant u undertand that our lives aint lastin
we bashin on white niggas cuz cash they stashin
leavin us all to rott as our our life starts flashin
jus passin us all by jokin and laffin
ima put an end to this, im the assassin
assigned to protect our people so ima start blastin
1..2..3.. im back in
Verse 3:
i cant stop when i flow
hope u know
when times get hard u kno we dont show
emotions flowin strong
so im here to write this song
cuz u neva kno when a niggas life goes wrong
we keep it all inside and we lock it up
its jus sumthin else for us to chock up
till we blowup inside and hold our glocks up
look for a white mans house for us to knock up
CHORUS:
fists be clashin
faces we mashin
cant u undertand that our lives aint lastin
we bashin on white niggas cuz cash they stashin
leavin us all to rott as our our life starts flashin
jus passin us all by jokin and laffin
ima put an end to this, im the assassin
assigned to protect our people so ima start blastin
1..2..3.. im back in
repeat(fade): while speaking
spoken:
this whole black white rivalry is takin its toll on everybody. Racism has a big impact on the lives of todays children.
Lets put and end to this **** now. Yes!! We should acknowledge our differences but lets not discriminate because of them.
Its time we embrace the diversity of the world. We need to see eachothers differences and still work together as one people.
Do not try to look past the outside appearances of others as if it were a disease. WE ARE NOT THE SAME. WE ARE NOT ONE RACE
OF PEOPLE. WE ARE ALL DIFFERENT. YET WE ALL NEED TO SHARE THE WORLD OR WE WILL DESTROY OURSELVES. LETS ALL RIDE TOGETHER
INTO A FUTURE WHERE WE ARE NOT AFRAID TO WALK ALONE IN ANOTHER NEIGHBORHOOD.