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Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Wynwalk12 on November 23, 2004, 11:59:16 PM
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O.K.
Times Spheres is bades on a comic book created by me...Its about an olg sage who creates seven mystic spheres wich gives you an unique power but if they all come togeter for the wrong use they can be devasting.
You play Meko & Chrono(there brothers) and the rest of the gang. You are just ordenary kids who were drivng down a bridge where a drunk taxi cab driver comes along and knocks you off the bridge,the two of you are seperated and Meko (the youngest) finds a time sphere which gives him powers. But demons are looking for the time spheres too. Tetasis( the main boss) has an army of demons looking for the timespheres. Slash and Kaskay( two of Tetasis minoins) find you and take the time sphere. But luckily your master, Sicemera, comes and saves you. You then learn about the time spheres and there majical powers and now youre on a quest to stop Tetasis.
Theres more to it but I dont want to give it away.
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Bios:
Chrono Michimora
Age: 19
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Chrono is a real trouble and likes being the boss and taking things into his own hands. His parents were killed and Sicemera took him and as a son, and a pupil.
Meko Michimora
Age:17
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Meko is a kind and gentle person who doesnt like people to get hurt. He spends alot of time training and even more time looking out for Chrono.
Sicemera Mushachi
Age:37
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Sicemera is Meko's and Chrono's father and Master. He found them as young children and decided to take them in and teach them the ways of the Marcail Arts.
These are all the basic bios but there are more but I think there are too many...so blah screenies very very very soon!
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This is the Title Screen
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This is when Tetasis is plotting to get the time spheres
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The peaceful town of Meganopolis
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I'm sorry, but this is really, really cliched.
There are magical object(s) of great power that in the wrong hands cause bad stuff, meaning you have to get em before badguys do. The main character's parents that got killed. The main character is even called Chrono.
Why did this sage make these spheres anyway? And if he has enough power to create them, shouldnt he be easily powerful enough to stop the demons himself?
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This is when they are trying to get to school
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Originally posted by Red Giant
I'm sorry, but this is really, really cliched.
There are magical object(s) of great power that in the wrong hands cause bad stuff, meaning you have to get em before badguys do. The main character's parents that got killed. The main character is even called Chrono.
Why did this sage make these spheres anyway? And if he has enough power to create them, shouldnt he be easily powerful enough to stop the demons himself?
First of all the sage made the time spheres because he was dying and new the great evil was aproaching so he made the time spheres.
And second of all does it really matter if its cliched the point is that it will be the drama and the climax
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OK...this is when they are riding through the woods
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Originally posted by Wynwalk12
First of all the sage made the time spheres because he was dying and new the great evil was aproaching so he made the time spheres.
And second of all does it really matter if its cliched the point is that it will be the drama and the climax
So, how was he dying exactly? And just telling me it's gonna be dramatic doesnt convince me.
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This is when they are late and Keari is say its your fault in the first place we are late, because he was telling her how they got new swords
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Originally posted by Red Giant
So, how was he dying exactly? And just telling me it's gonna be dramatic doesnt convince me.[/B]
Hes dying because hes an old man...and fat...hehe
And is this dramatic enough for ya?
The teache is being shot by Vandule because he was stealing money from him
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This is chrono's "REACTION" accidentaly put eaction...
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Originally posted by Wynwalk12
And is this dramatic enough for ya?
The teache is being shot by Vandule because he was stealing money from him
Uhm, well, no, not at all.
1: All of the students seem to be fixated on the board as if nothing is happening, 2: You used the goofy FFL charset for the teacher and 3: You named the pic "NOOO! IM DEAD!" All which decreases the tragic feel of the scene.
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Does it really matter its just a pic...and do you have to be such a big critic...sheesh _sweat_
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Looks like a good game with a great storyline. Inform me when you have a playable demo so I can play it for my self.
Great job on chipset jobs.
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Thx! Im gonna take off the facesets they seem to kind of get in the way of the feeling...
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Good idea, not only does it take up more room in the text box, but for me, I see no point of having the face in the text. Better to just have the name of the guy at the top when he is talking!
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i have to be hnest...i agree 100% with red on this one...why did he create the time spheres if hes dying?......not every old man wakes up and says "im gonna die soon, better get workin on my time spheres!"
the main chars name is chrono.......
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I think there's some potential here, but it is cliched. Granted, it can be hard to come up with ideas that have never been done before. But here's some suggestions:
1. Come up with a real reason why this guy created the time spheres. Also, explain why he would make them if they can be used for both good and evil. You'd think he'd take something like that into consideration.
2. Change the main character's name to something other than Chrono (or Crono).
That seems like it addresses most or all of the criticism you've received so far.
On a more positive note, I really like your title screen. The screen shots you've shown so far also look like they have potential. Keep it up!
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Everyone keeps asking why he made the time spheres.
Well the answer is because... :blue-eye: I really dont know myself, I'll have to ask my freind...and do you all think I shoulg get new sprites...they are basically generated ones...and I might change Chrono's name to Seyno,....does anyone have suggestions tho...
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Altogether, it sounds good to me. But you could do a little more work on it. And I think changing the name from Chrono to anything would be better, just to, ya know, ripped off. But all in all, I'd play it. :D
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I can't watch the pictures my hero as bad guy shootin' at a teacher *urghz*
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Originally posted by Wynwalk12
Well the answer is because... :blue-eye: I really dont know myself
No. That is not good. Understand what I'm trying to say here, I'm not trying to seem like a meanie but unless there is an actual REASON behind the game, it's not gonna work, at least for me.
It sounds like the kind of thing someone has thought about for 30 seconds then decided to make a game. I suggest you get a plan for what you're doing.
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Originally posted by xJericho
I can't watch the pictures my hero as bad guy shootin' at a teacher *urghz*
:D Its was just for fun at first then it started getting serious.
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Sry I havent been on much...made a web site.
I will update the site to keep ya informed with what Im doin, check back every now and then cause I will be putting up a demo of the demo...maybe 15-20 minutes long.
Oh forgot to put link...www.freewebs.com/wynwalk12
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Well so far it looks like the story and graphics suck, so you better wow me with gameplay.
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Well...err...that really doent encourage me to do better... :|