Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
hmmmm......sounds pretty good can i have ur msn i would love a litle bit more of the story if its ok.... heehe i must be the only one to like it XD
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
ah kk
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
hmmmm......sounds pretty good can i have ur msn i would love a litle bit more of the story if its ok.... heehe i must be the only one to like it XD
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
ah......i ain't blaming u for your characters names...im not such a blaming guy heehe nice names^^
brb internet sucks, gotta reboot
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
ah....kewl hehé we'll i wish i could help u with ur b-chara but i ain't so good at em ;)
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
naah u dont wanna see ANY b-character i made because they simply suck but maybe insane jp can make it ;)
lol i btw nevr made any but i tried and they sucked!!! XD
Originally posted by mind-master: brain(mmb)
srry i deleted them after i made em XD srry because i made em for myself and i found em sucky...srry
oh but can you make a sample
Originally posted by dragoninja
Hmmm... That game sure does sound interesting...when can I try it out???
Btw...I though all of that stuff sounded good...
man...I really wanna try it out
Originally posted by SonicChaos7
Well, Armour and Amour are two different things, for starters. Amour is a love affair. Armour (Armor) is the equipment that is worn on your body. I'm pretty sure the characters don't want to be wearing love affairs. :)
Time to cut to the chase. Your story seems very basic. What I mean by basic is that the story is too... cliche, for lack of a better term. Ancient evil, knights, etc. Kinda basic IMO. What you could do is put a twist to this. I'm not saying that you should change it right away, I'm just making a suggestion.
lan-the phoenix holder said:
hey dragoninja do you want to help because i sort of need it. like the creatures and stuff.
there is an edit button for that...
Originally posted by dragoninja
quote: lan-the phoenix holder said:
hey dragoninja do you want to help because i sort of need it. like the creatures and stuff.
Alrighy... shoot, what do you need?
beware of the fact that I am no master in RPGs, but i'll see what I can do
Originally posted by dragoninja
I have some of the ones you need...
I'll send one of the dragon now and some other things tomorrow (gotta go to bed, It's 00:00 here in sweden :P )
By the way, can you discribe a mythic knight... I wanna try making 1 in charset...
ups...thats no dragon ;P I've sent the wrong pic, haha!
Originally posted by dragoninja
I have some of the ones you need...
I'll send one of the dragon now and some other things tomorrow (gotta go to bed, It's 00:00 here in sweden :P )
By the way, can you discribe a mythic knight... I wanna try making 1 in charset...
ups...thats no dragon ;P I've sent the wrong pic, haha!
thanks but can i use this as a boss?
Originally posted by baconman
Can I be a Phantom Thief instead of a Taru, you would get sued for copyright anyways lol. :eyes:
Originally posted by baconman
Here is my Mythic Knights face! :eyes:
The story is too basic and too overused. Please.. never call a planet "Destiny"... it's the worst name you could ever give anything. And evil trying to rule the world is not what all baddies do, but it is very common. The evil lord doesn't even have a motive.
Originally posted by charaman
Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far :D
Originally posted by baconman
As you know, Lan, I was the one who got you interested into 2k3.....I can help you make sprites, backgrounds, title screens, game overs, etc. You know that you can call me at anytime to request something. Make a charset for a character and I will try to improve it. Anyways, w00t for Mythic Knights! :)
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
quote: Originally posted by charaman
Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far :D
well what does intricate mean. but what do you mean by the names need work. by the way i made with kyei it is suppose to be spelled Kiye.
Originally posted by charaman
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
quote: Originally posted by charaman
Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far :D
well what does intricate mean. but what do you mean by the names need work. by the way i made with kyei it is suppose to be spelled Kiye.
intricate means u should add more to the story, and i mean mroe like the planet name, the people's names are fine. Goodd luck with your game!
Originally posted by Drace
Use a name generator if you can't make up your own
Search one on google.
Originally posted by Darkfox
Give me a quick location and details of the planet.
Originally posted by Darkfox
Can't describe? Hmmm...
Originally posted by Darkfox
Terrus
Myteria
Iono
Tyanaria
Tynaria
Hytherius
Iuto
Jythan
Heros (Hair-Os)
Eropni
Jaitai
Terra, It sounds like a large planet!
Originally posted by Darkfox
quote: Terra, It sounds like a large planet!
Thats another name for Earth, so is Gaia. I was trying to avoid that.
Thats another name for Earth, so is Gaia. I was trying to avoid that.
Originally posted by dragoninja
Nice... I'm almost finished with the chars... the face set will be delayed thought...:(
Heehee... You know it dusn't always have to mean earth and well... The mind is what matters
Originally posted by Leon_1990
here, whats wrong with ur rpgmaker lan?
notice I called u lan and not ian :D
Originally posted by Leon_1990
I'll send u a link to a site if its allowed.....
*cough*
Originally posted by Leon_1990
so tht an admin might say if its allowed.... lol I have wierd ways :D
Originally posted by Leon_1990
I hav'nt checked, PM ur msn and Ill tell u
Originally posted by AsakuraHao2004
How old are these people? I'm being astonished.
Originally posted by dragoninja
your welcome :D
sorry but the face set is not done yet _sweat_
Originally posted by dragoninja
I'll try... I only have the sucky one now... you can find an improved version on "requests" I have a topic there where you can get both the sucky one and the improved one... i have to go to bed now... c ya
Originally posted by dragoninja
I hope you'll find all what you need for the game...
Originally posted by dragoninja
How is the game comming along anyway??? I've always wondered about that...
well i AM STARTING FRIDAY MARCH 11, 2005
Hehe, and you wonder why no one listed you on their favorites.
Sometimes criticism helps,
Hehe, and you wonder why no one listed you on their favorites.
Originally posted by Janne
Well, well...The storyline seems to be very basic. At least the Evil King (or sumthin' like that) hasn't kidnapped any holy princesess or sumthin'...But it's good to be interested about making RPGs.
Originally posted by VulcanRaven336
Your game does seem kinda basic. . .
I think you should put more story into it and give your characters more personality. And try not to use RTP-resources pleeze.
Originally posted by ENDLESSHEARTX
Give some Screen Shots of the game, I want to see what it looks like!
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
oh but some music i mean that i can't find anywhere
Originally posted by ENDLESSHEARTX
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
oh but some music i mean that i can't find anywhere
No offense, but your not making any sense. If you can't find music anywhere, then you make it.
Originally posted by ENDLESSHEARTX
Could this go with it??????
XD, yeah i wouldn't wonder about that, because you are so, anoying sumtimes, obvious, nobody will respect you this way
Originally posted by PeRKLE
Kinda simple storyline - put a ju-jutsu-master in it and I will be your fan forever.
Originally posted by PeRKLE
what do u mean by jutsu-master what is it????
Ju-jutsu is the greatest martial art in the world :D and the master of it is a person who has trained it for years and has a black belt (not even close to karate, karate sux)
Originally posted by Janne
what do u mean by jutsu-master what is it????
Ju-jutsu is the greatest martial art in the world and the master of it is a person who has trained it for years and has a black belt (not even close to karate, karate sux)
That's the truth. Keep that in mind. Have u decided the name of your planet yet? Please, don't call it Destiny. (No planet with even a little bit of self-respect wouldn't call itself Destiny).
Have u decided the name of your planet yet? Please, don't call it Destiny. (No planet with even a little bit of self-respect wouldn't call itself Destiny).
Originally posted by Moosetroop11
quote: Have u decided the name of your planet yet? Please, don't call it Destiny. (No planet with even a little bit of self-respect wouldn't call itself Destiny).
Have you got any advice for him, apart from what not to put in?
Originally posted by Janne
quote: Originally posted by Moosetroop11
quote: Have u decided the name of your planet yet? Please, don't call it Destiny. (No planet with even a little bit of self-respect wouldn't call itself Destiny).
Have you got any advice for him, apart from what not to put in?
Not really :D Well, you could put traveling between different worlds but that is overused too...
Originally posted by Linkforce
dont give up... ik can help you. im not good with graphics, but i can help with story, characters, etc. just ask and ill help you! :)
Originally posted by Linkforce
yea its for charsets and battlesets, i said im not good with those.
ill help u with story, names, etc. if u want
Originally posted by Linkforce
How about [?B]Sincer [/B]
Originally posted by Linkforce
u needed a planet name didnt u?
Originally posted by Linkforce
w/e
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
You gave up on your game because no one is helping you? Most of the people here work on their game alone because they can do most of it. I can't make battle charsets but I've met someone who can so I ask him when I need some. I've also met someone who can make faceset so I do the same thing. They aren't just helpers, they are friends.
Try to do something on your own. I was unable to make anything until I practice so how about doing the same?
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
Why don't you try making one? I needed some Lufia-styled Character sets and nobody actually ever made one so I tryed and they came out good. You only need Knights? Why not search for an already-made one and just edit it?
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
Well since your post isn't very clear:
Giving up: Bad idea
Game: Good idea
When there's a will, there's a way. Giving up means you lost the will to do it...Snake Eater said it was pathetic to give up for such a futile matter and I have to say that I agree with him....
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
i was thinking and i plan on making this game even if i have a lot of trouble but sqoad check the request forum and check what i need help on.
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
i was thinking and i plan on making this game even if i have a lot of trouble but sqoad check the request forum and check what i need help on.
I'm glad to see you changed your mind! Figured out any Planet name yet?
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
I can help you out with a name but I'll need more details about the Planet. If you think it would be a spoiler, just send me a description tru private messaging.
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
Well I've browsed tru the 15 pages of messages to find out a very small description of the planet which is basically everything seems to resemble or is related to Mythologic Animals....
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
Ok so it's a mythologic planet. I thought I'd find cool names related to mythology...
How about
Hestia: That's the name of the Goddess of the Heart in Greek Mythology.
Aethra: Name of Theseus' Mother, a greek Hero.
Ceres: Goddess of Earth, Roman Mythology
Those were the best 3 out of many, hehe.
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
How about:
Seyella, Santharian Goddess of Destiny
Necessitas, Roman Goddess of Destiny
Nortia, the link between time and destiny
Parca, Roman Fate
Laima, Baltic Goddess of Destiny
Why is everything related to mythology seems to end with an 'A' -.-
Originally posted by dragoninja
All name sounds ok to me!
just pick one. I thought of a name... something like Cyrodil [serodyl] but that sounds like a cave or a village when you think about it...
Originally posted by Janne
glad to hear that u aren't quitting. Why won't you name the planet with some foreign language. (means:no english) for example: Aurinko (It's finnish and means sun :P) or Gurka ( It's swedish and means um, well...Cucumber :D (I'm not too good in speaking swedish)). Or something like that.
Originally posted by PeRKLE
I think that one good charactername is also Mun Pelikusee
Originally posted by PeRKLE
Just thinking aloud some name ideas :D
Originally posted by Janne
Or Haistapa Ska. <--Name suggestion
Originally posted by PeRKLE
quote: Originally posted by Janne
Or Haistapa Ska. <--Name suggestion
sounds kinda swedish? No ei kuhan hämmennän tota vitun dorkaa :D
Originally posted by PeRKLE
Just talkin' with languages :D nothing important.
sounds kinda swedish?
Originally posted by Janne
MUN keksintö *krhm* Haha:D have U decided the planet's name yet?
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
finally i can start soon i will have a small demo soon
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
finally i can start soon i will have a small demo soon
A demo? Good, I'm looking forward to it. So, have you decided a planet name by any chance? No, of course not, i can tell. Why give your planet a name anyway? Wouldn't it be easier just to make a continent instead of an entire planet...
quote:
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
quote:
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
finally i can start soon i will have a small demo soon
A demo? Good, I'm looking forward to it. So, have you decided a planet name by any chance? No, of course not, i can tell. Why give your planet a name anyway? Wouldn't it be easier just to make a continent instead of an entire planet...
well because i want to
Originally posted by dragoninja
quote: quote:
Originally posted by blackskullwarlock
quote:
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
finally i can start soon i will have a small demo soon
A demo? Good, I'm looking forward to it. So, have you decided a planet name by any chance? No, of course not, i can tell. Why give your planet a name anyway? Wouldn't it be easier just to make a continent instead of an entire planet...
well because i want to
Well, well... skip the name for now just keep working with the game itself, I wanna play it ASAP.
The name will come in time
Originally posted by Sqoad
And why's that?
Originally posted by dragoninja
I vote B: the laptop hates you...(be glad that the laptop is the only one is if so)
I still wonder 1 thing: why do you logg in and out all the time??? it sorta confuses me -_-
Originally posted by Sqoad
Umm.... Y'know.... It is not illigal to tell about a game that you are GOING to make.... So just... Be quiet
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
alright first don't curse i hate it plz don't put pressure i am tring my best to get the rpg maker. piedude and baconman don't post here. but if some people would just be a little nicer i can get things done u know.
Originally posted by Janne
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
alright first don't curse i hate it plz don't put pressure i am tring my best to get the rpg maker. piedude and baconman don't post here. but if some people would just be a little nicer i can get things done u know.
What do you mean by "nicer"?
k, gud, u helpin with thee characters a guess
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
quote: Originally posted by Janne
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
alright first don't curse i hate it plz don't put pressure i am tring my best to get the rpg maker. piedude and baconman don't post here. but if some people would just be a little nicer i can get things done u know.
What do you mean by "nicer"?
what i mean is don't be so hard on me
Originally posted by PeRKLE
Who two users?
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
oki know this is reality how about u sonicchaos7. i am really mad at the two users but any way just explain so it makes it easy i am sort of new so thats sort of it.
Originally posted by Leon_1990
quote: Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
oki know this is reality how about u sonicchaos7. i am really mad at the two users but any way just explain so it makes it easy i am sort of new so thats sort of it.
he meens the 2 users ur talkin about there.
and btw, lan, have u got MSN?
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Sorry to say, but this ain't that original. I felt like I was reading another Final Fantasy 5. Yet another ancient evil. Now since I care too much to let you make a game no one will miss, I will ask you some constructive questions in order to get the most out of this game and make it better hopefully.
First of all, does Mythic Lord have a name? No one names their son Mythic Lord. And certainly no one will take anyone named Mythic Lord seriously. I suggest you give him a name. If you have trouble doing that, I will help you. If you want him to be nameless, I'll be fine with that too. But keep in mind that, realistically, Mythic Lord is not a name, it's a rank. Just some advice to help further your game.
Now, most of your characters are teenagers or around that age. With such little fighting experience, it makes little sense for them to be able to go toe to toe with an evil that has so much fighting experience that he kills off a whole tribe. Try to give more explanation to as how people with so little years in their life would be able to beat Mythic Lord and someone that has been fighting for fifty years can't?
Your names could also use some livening up. Instead of Lan, why not Lance or Lancaius or Lanarkin? Instead of Yang, why not Shu-yang or Yangin? If it's not too much of a problem, it'd be nice to see some more neat looking names.
Anyways, I think the spirit armor could be a very great idea if you pulled it off well enough. If you make that into elementals, you could add extra strategy into your game.
Further elaborate on the character if at all possible. I mean, you're not simply Lan, a male born on November 12th, 1992. You're Lan, a male born on November 12th, 1992, an RPG creator, and more. Add little details like that to your characters, and I'll help you further from there.
If I seem a little harsh, I'm not trying to be. I simply want to see that your RPG can be one that'll at least earn a decent score.
Originally posted by Sqoad
Cool! When will a demo be released? I'm getting impatient(If that how you spell it) XD
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Why are you being so rude? I try to help you, and this is what I get in return. Thanks. I appreciate it.
First of all, does Mythic Lord have a name? No one names their son Mythic Lord. And certainly no one will take anyone named Mythic Lord seriously. I suggest you give him a name. If you have trouble doing that, I will help you. If you want him to be nameless, I'll be fine with that too. But keep in mind that, realistically, Mythic Lord is not a name, it's a rank. Just some advice to help further your game.
Your names could also use some livening up. Instead of Lan, why not Lance or Lancaius or Lanarkin? Instead of Yang, why not Shu-yang or Yangin? If it's not too much of a problem, it'd be nice to see some more neat looking names.
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
No really. You say you want help, but you're turning it away whenever I tried to help you.
Again. Thanks.
Originally posted by Rune_of_Punishment
He means about the whole situation. It's pathetic when someone tries to help you, but you reject it because it doesn't follow your "plan". Why toast your buns over something like that? He actually wants your game to be good, unlike many of the other users who post in here. The majority of the people who post in this topic just say, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!" Will that help you as a game maker? I hope not and I know it won't. I can't believe you would shun help just to appease your friends.
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
If you would answer the questions directly, it would help you. Trust me, I've been doing this long enough to know that the way to any solid RPG is to answer the questions that people give you. If you can't tell the answers to me, you don't have to, but it's better for your sake if you do since it'll make the scope of your RPG bigger and of course, more enjoyable.
Of course, if you don't want that then just simply say it.
Anyways, name for your planet.
Aramak
Seirus
Senechia
Tors
Kailas
Artoma
Centrinius
Norbersk
If any of those help, feel free to take them while I come up with more ideas.
The majority of the people who post in this topic just say, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!"
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Well, by that rule, if he treats me rude, he wants me to treat him rude so I can.
But I won't. I just wanted Lan to not be rude, and he hasn't been since I told him to knock it off so I'm fine.
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Thanks, Lan, I appreciate it.
Originally posted by Rune_of_Punishment
Your interpretation is askew. In no way was I picking on you. I was only commenting on your game, that is all. If you consider that picking on you, then I am guilty as charged. However, I did not pick on you, so just get a grip, please.
Originally posted by dragoninja
This will be REALLY difficult... -There must be atleast 20 good names to choose between...
Originally posted by dragoninja
Well, I could not choose a name so I took away the name I didn't like. the rest is up to you...
Originally posted by dragoninja
Choosen one yet???
Originally posted by dragoninja
Well, I could not choose a name so I took away the name I didn't like. the rest is up to you...
Originally posted by dragoninja
The ones I liked, why?
Originally posted by Linkforce
you should have asked me for a name. but good name though.
Originally posted by Leon_1990
I don't think he's done enough for a demo secret box....
btw Lan, is it rm2k/3 that you are using?
Originally posted by Leon_1990
quote: Originally posted by Leon_1990
I don't think he's done enough for a demo secret box....
btw Lan, is it rm2k/3 that you are using?
you are not???
I meant r u using rpgmaker2000 or rpgmaker2003...
Originally posted by Sqoad
Heh! I can wait, As long as it comes out it's okay! The one that waits for something good (Never) waits too long :D
Originally posted by RegalPhantom
I back up Leon. I think you should do it on Gamingw.net
Originally posted by Wind the griffin holder
My bro is putting in blopers in so u get a harder laugh :sweet:
Originally posted by dragoninja
oooh, how close was I???
Originally posted by Janne
When will the demo be released?
Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder
thanx i was waiting for that but thanx for the small info but i need his name, age, and a small bio
Originally posted by Sephiroth12317
Hey buddy Here is the picture of the guy i made for you! He is Evil at first >: But later in the game he becomes Good! :D