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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: Weregnome on February 28, 2005, 11:23:39 AM

Title: Both New Writings
Post by: Weregnome on February 28, 2005, 11:23:39 AM

As some may know I write. Of late I have completed two new pieces, one that i am not too happy with (an suspect alot of grammar errors) and another that is the second part of a prologue to my storu (the first part was from One Sweet Moment which can also be found on my DA account)

Here are the links to them.

 Photographs (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15384121/)

 Blue (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15267685/)

I hope you read and respond!

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Post by: White Dwarf on February 28, 2005, 11:29:19 AM

sorry i cant read it at the moment, but ill read it later, and i dident know you did storys....cool....anyway ill post again when ive read them...

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Post by: Weregnome on February 28, 2005, 11:48:26 AM

thanks White

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Post by: White Dwarf on February 28, 2005, 05:25:09 PM

ok, rea the first one, and the first prolog thingy, GREAT!!!!

i really like, i did spot some places where you missed out some letters, like you puh "is" instead of "his" but i think you just need to re-read it and correct things like that, i love it!! :bend:  :bend:

im just going to start reading the 2nd one, ill edit this post or post again after i read it

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Post by: Weregnome on March 01, 2005, 03:23:18 AM

oki thanks White. I'll go through and edit any mistakes after I have like more responses.

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Post by: Snake Eater on March 01, 2005, 03:29:32 AM

Great!
Isn't it ironic that White Dwarf is giving you spelling help? XD

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Post by: SleepAid on March 01, 2005, 05:23:21 AM

*spelling

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Post by: Razor on March 01, 2005, 06:54:57 AM

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Originally posted by Snake Eater
Great!
Isn't it ironic that White Dwarf is giving you spelling help? XD

That is single handedly the worst irony in the world, ever.

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Post by: Weregnome on March 02, 2005, 05:44:34 AM

rofl. yer that is.. it is indeed

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Post by: Weregnome on March 02, 2005, 08:06:04 AM

Ok this is a new piece I did.

 Battle of the Three (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15680601/)