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Title: Cold Vengance
Post by: dragoninja on March 17, 2005, 09:28:22 PM
I've started developing a new game, I have a few problems though...

1. I can't figure out a good name (No one will be able to help me with this one unless they hear the story)

2. I'm all dry of good ideas, I know I've said that I am good and giving inspiration... but I've never said I'm good to use them for myself...

If anyone want's to help... Please do... I have re-made the game several times, but it just won't turn out like I want it to...:(
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Post by: True Evil on March 17, 2005, 09:30:46 PM
If you can't find a name for the game then name it after a character, or make up a word that no one knows and say it means something cool.

What else do you need help on? I'll try my best.
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Post by: Linkforce on March 17, 2005, 09:32:55 PM
yea ill help too.  im good with names, so just tell a bit about the story and ill see what i can do.
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Post by: dragoninja on March 17, 2005, 09:38:01 PM
There is no story yet... thats why I need help...

... anyway... you replied quick...that is appreciated :)
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Post by: Linkforce on March 17, 2005, 09:41:55 PM
once you get a base idea for your game, ill help u with the title.       :D
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Post by: True Evil on March 17, 2005, 09:42:06 PM
No story line?

Well the most used and like (apparently) storyline is...

An evil dude threatens to destroy the world with the power of one girl, a guy is off tp destroy the evil dude and eliminate the girl so she can't be used again..., the guy falls in love with the girl and they find an alternative way to destroy the evil guy with out killing the girl and they all live happily ever after THE END. And of course throw in some extra bippity boppity in there and you got yourself a game.
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Post by: dragoninja on March 17, 2005, 10:01:06 PM
But that story line suuucks :(...

well well... link already knows about my main char... I've let him use it for his game... thats all progress I've made so far...

the only thing I can add is that this story I taking place in a winter planed meaning that there is always snow there and that my main char is to revange his dead family...

Answere to below: This is all I've done so far...
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Post by: Eternal Newb on March 17, 2005, 10:01:42 PM
I don't think anyone can help you till you develop something
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Post by: Linkforce on March 17, 2005, 10:05:53 PM
how about  Cold Vengance or  Cold Revenge ?
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Post by: Linkforce on March 17, 2005, 10:08:51 PM
glad to help!  :D
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Post by: True Evil on March 17, 2005, 10:32:04 PM
Cold Vengeance... Sounds awesome! Can't wait to see the story line :D
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Post by: Ruler of the Dark on March 17, 2005, 11:41:37 PM
>>>Don't make a new thread, just edit your first post and change the title.

Since it seems that you all are just brainstorming now, i can't critque your game, so I'll just say good luck http://charas-project.net/forum/images/msgicons/msgicon3.gif
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Post by: dragoninja on March 18, 2005, 06:23:30 AM
Thanks... I'll give you a full story line later on... (me not wanna spoil too much)
Title: The Story...
Post by: dragoninja on March 20, 2005, 06:46:36 PM
A young boy wakes up just like any other mornings, eat breakfast and goes to school comes home does the homework eat dinner and so on, In the middle of the night someone slams the door open and screams for help.

The boys father and mother walked into the boys room and said: Go to sleep, We'll be back soon, The boy (time to tell his name, Seikashi) looked at them for a while and said nothing then he went back to sleep

Just a few hours later Seikashi wakes up shivering, He wondered why his parents isn't back home yet, Seikashi starts to get worried and gets his clothes on and run out to go look for them.

Just as he walks out the house he can feel a strange smell, he only needed to take  a few steps only to find his mother lying on the ground full of blood and scars, in panic he runs to the market and finds several corpses he gets even more paniced he runs to the town gate and sees his father fighting a cloaked man, just as he shouts for hes father the cloaked man cuts his father over the chest, Seikashi's father falls dead to the ground, just as the cloaked man walks towards Seikashi someone jumps out of nowhere and cuts down the cloaked man

After closer observation he noticed that it was his own mother who had used her last strength to attack the man, This man alone had slaughtered the whole village, With the man muttering a few last words Seikashis mother falls dead to the ground and Seikashi faints, the last thing he saw was the cloaked man walk slowly away leaving nothing but his sword behind

Thats all I'll tell you for now, I'll tell what happened after the attack another time :P

(the storyline is pathetic I know... If someone has got any better Ideas please tell me)

CHARACTER/S:

Name: Seikashi tenkoshi
Age: 17
Grender: Male
Job: Merchant for the moment
Weapons: A katana obtained from the night of the attack
Likes: Fruits, Girls and Getting new friends
Dislikes: Make-up, Evil, Loosing a friend, traitors, Unnecesary fights and darkness

There is only one character so far... I'm still working on it and if someone wants to give advises of anything like it, please do. :D
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Post by: Linkforce on March 21, 2005, 08:22:13 PM
story sounds pretty original.... ive never really read about a story like that  :D   keep it up man!! :D
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Post by: Janne on March 21, 2005, 08:38:59 PM
Heyy....This sounds pretty good man...I can design characters for your game, if u want. Keep up the good work!
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Post by: AsakuraHao2004 on March 21, 2005, 09:51:47 PM
And then he goes on a quest to find the man. It's not ENTIRELY original, but hey, the epic I'm working on starts out a little like that. It's pretty good. The only thing, dosen't Seikashi seem a little old to still be living with his parents? I mean, for a game at least, it just seems a little out of place. Usually, if your character is  over 15, you tend to be alone or newly set out. Especially for games of vengance, you'd expect him to be a bit younger. But whatever, I'm probably just rambling about a person opinon... whatever you wanna make it is fine.
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Post by: dragoninja on March 22, 2005, 01:40:50 PM
Ummm... This incident took place when he was only 7... now is 10 years after the attack...

 
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Heyy....This sounds pretty good man...I can design characters for your game, if u want. Keep up the good work!

thanks, I could use a little help with that.

I'll post screenys soon.

 
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And then he goes on a quest to find the man. It's not ENTIRELY original


Naw...usualy they're out in search for a girl :P
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Post by: Janne on March 22, 2005, 01:53:42 PM
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Ummm... This incident took place when he was only 7... now is 10 years after the attack...

 
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Heyy....This sounds pretty good man...I can design characters for your game, if u want. Keep up the good work!

thanks, I could use a little help with that.

I'll post screenys soon.

 
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And then he goes on a quest to find the man. It's not ENTIRELY original


Naw...usualy they're out in search for a girl :P



But somebody else would make the b-charas for them, 'cause I don't know how to do them. (expect with charas-projects generator)
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Post by: dragoninja on March 22, 2005, 02:03:05 PM
Thats ok, I only need charsets for now anyway..

Say do you thing you can make this man look like a kid and without cape???
I know this should be in "requests" but thats pretty unnecessary for the time being...
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Post by: Janne on March 22, 2005, 04:31:41 PM
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Thats ok, I only need charsets for now anyway..

Say do you thing you can make this man look like a kid and without cape???


Are u talking to me? If u are, I see what I can do.

Edit. Well, I did one. Do u want to see it? (he hasn't got the sword).
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Post by: Sqoad on March 22, 2005, 06:46:51 PM
Yes, I think he wants to
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Post by: dragoninja on March 22, 2005, 06:59:58 PM
Yea, like you said Squad, I'd like to see the result... and he shouldn't hold a sword anyways XD
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Post by: Janne on March 22, 2005, 08:13:04 PM
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Yea, like you said Squad, I'd like to see the result... and he shouldn't hold a sword anyways XD


Well, here goes nothing...I tought that blonde hair would make the character look more younger.
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Post by: dragoninja on March 22, 2005, 08:19:01 PM
ummm... I was thinking that you'd make him shorter and remove the cape... The char I can use for other things though XD
thanks anyway :D
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Post by: True Evil on March 22, 2005, 08:22:58 PM
I like storylines of revenge! Who dosn't? I mean if you didn't then then 1/2 the games you played would be sports or puzzles. But I like the sound of your story so far. I can't wait to see some screens :D !!!
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Post by: dragoninja on March 22, 2005, 08:24:19 PM
It'll take some time though :( cuz I only have little time of the day to work on the game... But I'll try to get some up by next week XD
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Post by: Janne on March 23, 2005, 02:05:09 PM
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ummm... I was thinking that you'd make him shorter and remove the cape... The char I can use for other things though XD
thanks anyway :D


Oh. Well, I did remove the cape(but maybe it doesn't look like that). But I can try another shot...Must he have same clothes?
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Post by: dragoninja on March 23, 2005, 02:09:09 PM
Nope, Just try to make him look young (grey hair is the only thing that is important)

Thanks for helping ^^
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Post by: Janne on March 23, 2005, 07:13:38 PM
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Nope, Just try to make him look young (grey hair is the only thing that is important)

Thanks for helping ^^


OK...Again, I'll see what I can do.
Title: Delay...
Post by: dragoninja on March 23, 2005, 10:30:48 PM
Since I have lots of other things to do (plus I use the same computer as my brother) Screenys will be delayed to unknown time.... Sorry for the incovenience.
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Post by: dragoninja on March 25, 2005, 04:07:14 PM
I just thought that I'd let you know that I am gonna stop making this game since me and my cousin I going to make an RPG togehter...

Besides, It was to complicated to make the begining...
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Post by: Linkforce on March 25, 2005, 04:08:45 PM
are you still gonna keep the title?
Title: Rave Master
Post by: kaiten on March 25, 2005, 04:13:40 PM
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Originally posted by True Evil
No story line?

Well the most used and like (apparently) storyline is...

An evil dude threatens to destroy the world with the power of one girl, a guy is off tp destroy the evil dude and eliminate the girl so she can't be used again..., the guy falls in love with the girl and they find an alternative way to destroy the evil guy with out killing the girl and they all live happily ever after THE END. And of course throw in some extra bippity boppity in there and you got yourself a game.


Umm...  Isn't that from that show... Rave whatever something mystical blah?  Something along the lines of that... (J)
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Post by: dragoninja on March 25, 2005, 04:17:02 PM
Of course, The title you helped me with rocked!
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Post by: Linkforce on March 25, 2005, 04:20:45 PM
k! ;)  awesome! :D