Charas-Project
Off-Topic => Archive => Old Game Discussion => Topic started by: Fortet on March 17, 2005, 10:54:19 PM
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Okay! I'm going to finally work on this one. I have officially deleted all past projects and I'm going to work on one that actually has a storyline!!!! But it's kinda' cliche'd... Heheh...
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10,000 years ago in a world called Yugoth, a great and
powerfual man tried to take over the world. His only known
name was the Dark Lord. He had conquered all of Yugoth,
and the planet was his slave. No one had the power to stop
him.
Then, three brave warriors came along. They were only
known as Ice Dagger, Flame Swordsman, and Black Mage
(none of the names stolen, just a lack of names). They had
plowed through all of his forces and had gotten to his lair.
But, as they tried to attack, he imprissoned thier souls into
thier weapons - a pair of daggers, a broad sword, and a
staff of power.
And his rule was to remain for the next 10 milleniums...
10, 000 years later on Earth, three young teenagers were
leaving school for summer vacation. They had it all planned
out - swimming, movies, arcades, mall, etc. But, they had
problem. A small shimmer. As they walked through the park,
they noticed a small light in the middle of the sand. It wasn't
dark or late afternoon, so it wasn't a firefly, and nobody had
a flashlight. Nodoy else seemed to notice it. When they
walked up to it, they were whisked into a world... A world
called Yugoth.
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Pretty much, you play as the three kids, Sarah Wood, Leon
Strife, and Jarred Miller. When they get the weapons, they
can change from the soul form (the original heroes), and back
to themselves. You will have to do this repeatedly to solve
puzzles. You will be able to switch between characters from
the menu and change to the soul form by the touch of a
button.
Leon = Black Mage = Wind
Jarred = Flame Swordsman = Fire
Sarah = Ice Dagger = Ice
Certain buttons do certain attacks, but battling still takes place
from the regular battle area.
Leon:
13
Boy
5'4"
He is the regular smart kid into fantasy video games. He knows
mostly everything when it comes to fantasy. Although he's shy,
he makes a great leader.
Jarred:
14
Boy
5'7"
He's the cool kid who always has his music to loud. He loves to
fight, but knows when not to. He always outspoken and is
never afraid.
Sarah:
14
Girl
5'6"
She's the pretty one both the guys want and is a track member.
Although she's made fun of for being a tomboy, she knows who her true friends are.
Incase you missed something:
Leon's the smart one
Jarred's the tough one
Sarah's the fast one
Yep. That's about it.
Oh! The name:
Crimson Soul
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Sounds pretty cool. Since the war or whatever was on another planet than you started on, its not as bad of a cliche. The only negative thing I have to say are the names Dark Lord, Black Mage, ect. are a little unimaginative. Maybe you could make up names that would mean the same thing in your game. For example, when your talking about the dark lord for the first time, maybe you could say something like, 'a terrible enemy rose up and ..., he came to be known as [name], meaning 'dark lord'. I don't know, it may help, it may not.
The rest of the game sounds pretty cool though, I like the idea of being able to change between the hero chars and regular chars. Anyway good luck with this :D
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It's a good story with a good premise...but...I can't help but think Leon Strife's name is Cloud from FF7 and Leon(Squall) from Kingdom Hearts put together
Other thatn that it's pretty good.
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I figured that out after I had already got characters together. I've had this planned before KH came out and before I was an FFFreak lol. But yeah. It kinda' is, but I hadn't known at the time.
Anyways... Characters!!!
Edit:
CRAP!!! I HATE MS PAINT!!! Could somebody please convert to png with paint shop? I can't upload it to iDraw...
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Heh.. I like the idea of one character being the "fantasy video game geek" type... and then he ends up being part of something like that, except it's real.
I'm guessing there's going to be at least one "What!? You mean it DOESN'T really work like that!?"-type thing at some point...
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lol yeah. at one point. he gats a little freaked and stuff and starts to think he's dreaming. lol
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Sounds pretty cool. Let's just hope you keep your promise!
If you need any scripting help just ask me! :)
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Okay. I might need a few things:
Midis
Possibly Battle Chars, depending on if I can do it with the generator or not.
Fecests (Rhonin might have it unless I can fix my scanner)
I've asked MSlash a question about monsters, and he might be able to help.
POSES!!! (will take to poses thread thing...)
If you can help with any of these, please do.
P.S. Hour, YES! I NEED SCRIPTING!!! I'll P.M. You about what I need.
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Okay. I now need the following:
Midis
Char. Poses cause I think poses making people are dead
Facesets cause my scanner is completely broken... :(
MSlash is working on the monsters I believe, so if anybody wishes to help, please do! Here's a pic of the battle chars of the soul forms.
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Here is the three dark forms you asked for. I'll get the other 2 monsters done by tomorrow


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w007! Thanks man!
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One Sea Serpent, ripped and Ready.

P.S. I'll have the last monster done by tomorrow or the next day. It's gonna be great...I hope.
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It's awesome But I've got a provlem... It says Invalid Image Size... Could you possibly make it a bit smaller?
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Simple problems can be solved simply, AND.....
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The Last Monster is done.....It looked alot better but It had to be able to work.
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good good, its a good story line, well, hmm, if sumeone says its cliched then uhm, frugg him, becuz every game has its own cliches, and sumtimes a game cant live without any cliches, srry no offense to anyone XD, lol anyway het Mslash why do i regocnize that sea serpent thingy? its from digimon, uhm, seadramon, lol...
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Yes it is Seadramon, it seemed like a good monster for the role of Sea Serpent
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w00t! I now have 3 screens. Here's the title. I thank Blad_Shinigami for the excellent work!
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Screen 2
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And #3!
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*clapping* Very nice looking game
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Most of the thanks should go to the following people:
Rhonin
MSlash
Blade_Shinigami
You guys rock!
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That font makes me cringe though...
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you don't like my font choice... EDIT: or maybe you mean the screen caps. yeah i can't read them that well.
by the way fortet it's blaze_shingami
although i like blade better
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woops. lol sorry. The font rocks on the title and game over, but the font shown on the game... peh, just a problem on my comp. It'll turn out fine when played on a different comp.
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More working has commenced. I'm working on the following:
A temple colasing (yay hurt!)
The ability to change into the soul forms
Hopefully A striking system
And well, the first 3 levels.
All that should be in the demo.
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w007! I finally got some music!!! But I still need a battle midi... (Runs over to the Midi Makers Thread)
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I love it!! Especially about the soul thing. It's awesome.
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The cloak beast graphicx was completely drawn quickly on MSPaint with hardly any shadeing or textureing. Needs to be redone to better fit the graphics.
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I Plan on having a demo either Late April or early May! : )
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I'm with Darkfox on the cloak beast thing. You might want a better one. Not enough detail.
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jep...its a nice game...cool story....but...its not that i don't like the screens but...they seem so empty...give it a little more trees and houses and shrubs and stuff:P
furter more...that monsters really gotta go....i know da guy who did it(can't remember his name) has put alot of effort in it...but is ya want a look a like that cloak beast....search mre sites....cuz this one doesn't really fit to the graphics you use.
further more..............naw thats it:P
keep working on your skills....they will get better every time you work on your game....just check out the maps you make now...and compare them with the maps ya will make in about 2 months....they will get better....atleast for me it did:P
well.....keep on workin bro
i'll keep lookin out for your game and more screens
Peace
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Yay! Critisism! I love it! It helps a lot!!! Anyways, I'm an idiot and have been playing Ragnarok and not working on the game... *slaps forehead* Stupid stupid stupid!!! Anyways, getting back on track!
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Originally posted by Darkfox
The cloak beast graphicx was completely drawn quickly on MSPaint with hardly any shadeing or textureing. Needs to be redone to better fit the graphics.
Eh hem, I did draw it, but not on MS Paint. I hand drew it, scanned, colored it in Paint Shop pro, then put in the detail...Looked great. when I resized it..it ended up with what is in this thread.
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i can draw a cloakbeast for ya if ya want....but in can't color it and i can't shrink it to size....i guess somebody else can do that...the coloring and the shrinking to the actual size.....
i will draw the cloak monster....for it is my duty to help those in need.....and YOU are a little boi in trouble.....kinda:p
well...i'll post the cloakbeast when i'm done drawing it:p
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kl change Leon's age 2 14 and his hair colour 2 grey-ish
and I'm your main character :D
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well....drawn this is a few minutes
and it turned out like a Cape-beast:p
srry bout that....but tell me if ya like it...i can ink the lines to make it look more "alive"
and then someone maybe can color and make it to size for ya
P.S.
it's a very big picture.....sorry bout that:p
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I might have a small delay in the demo release, but the demo should be out before April 20th! Please bear with me on this!!!
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I have decided to make this a four part saga because I can fit sooooo much of stuff into one part to make a whole game. So, I'll do that. Anyways, the demo will still be out April 20th! Look forward to it!
EDIT:
Here are the Game's Names:
手品師との戦い (A Fight with a Mage)
剣士の復讐 (A Swordsman's Revenge)
短剣の憤り (The Dagger's Wrath)
暗い主の上昇 (The Dark Lord's Rise)