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Title: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 04, 2009, 02:55:02 AM
Just thought I'd share a project I'm working on. Maybe see what y'all think. Kind of a sweet, kiddy vibe with this one.

(http://www.ben.marcade.biz/Umbrelliscreen1.png)(http://www.ben.marcade.biz/Umbrelliscreen2.png)

Elli is nine and three quarters. Elli lives in a small cottage by the woods with her mother. Elli loves the woods. Elli hasn't got many real friends to play with, but that's okay because she prefers the woods to real kids any day.
One rainy afternoon, Elli decided to go out exploring. She packed her Umbrella and said goodbye to her mother, who reminded her to be back by five o'clock because dinner was on the stove. Elli assured her that she would be.
Unfortunately, part-way though her adventure, poor Elli tripped and fell into a ravine, and was knocked unconscious. She awoke to find that night had fallen, and that she had wandered into a part of the forest she had no knowledge of- the Grey Wood. Can you help Elli find her way back home? Can you navigate the fearsome depths of the Grey Wood? And can you do it all before dinner gets cold?


Characters:

Elli
Elli is the protagonist of our tale. The only weapon at her disposal is her trusty yellow umbrella. Use it wisely!

Elli's Mother
Elli's mother is always concerned for Elli's wellbeing, and often warns her not to venture too far into the woods. Elli has no father, but that's okay because Elli's mother loves her twice as much as normal.

The Voice
The Voice is a disembodied voice that speaks to Elli as she walks through the Grey Wood. The Voice doesn't seem to come from any particular place. The Voice offers vital help and advice to Elli, so it's usually best to listen up.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Uberpwn_w00t on September 04, 2009, 03:18:40 AM
Hey this looks neat.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: fruckert on September 04, 2009, 03:39:39 AM
I agree.
Moar plox.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Darkfox on September 04, 2009, 07:46:32 AM
I agree as well, it sounds pretty interesting. I also sense a slight darkish undertone.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: ellie-is on September 04, 2009, 03:25:25 PM
Cool.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 04, 2009, 03:39:09 PM
Thanks for the kind words. Should be able to upload some game art later today.

I didn't make it and I haven't seen it so I guess it'll be a surprise for all of us.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Zerlina on September 04, 2009, 04:13:27 PM
Looks really cute, can't wait to see the finished project :)
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: boozer on September 04, 2009, 04:14:28 PM
Its looks awesome :D
It reminds me of Balloon Kid for some reason though
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 04, 2009, 07:44:37 PM
As long as I have the blessing of the Lord I'm fine.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 05, 2009, 12:46:31 AM
(http://www.ben.marcade.biz/5umberelli2.png)

Just a piece of art, drawn in a kids-book-esque style. Elli lying at the bottom of a ravine. By Jennifer Jones.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: ellie-is on September 05, 2009, 01:08:43 AM
So your girlfriend is a 90 years old woman? (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jennifer_Jones)
Wow huh.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 05, 2009, 01:24:35 AM
Nope, she's a 39 year old canadian world class curling champion. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jennifer_Jones_(curler))
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: zuhane on September 07, 2009, 12:20:57 PM
You should totally include a dog sex scene!
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 07, 2009, 02:14:35 PM
Well, I can safely say that I didn't expect anyone to be suggesting that.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: ellie-is on September 07, 2009, 02:27:05 PM
Well, she did was unconscious for a few hours... Maybe a dog could have raped her.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 07, 2009, 02:45:01 PM
Oh okay a dog/child rape scene. Yeah I'm glad we've got the creative juices flowing. Before or after the scene with benny hill being played over footage of the twin towers collapsing?
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Zerlina on September 07, 2009, 04:41:51 PM
after.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: lilsniffs3 on September 07, 2009, 07:26:07 PM
Sounds and looks awesome.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: fruckert on September 07, 2009, 08:56:09 PM
Oh okay a dog/child rape scene.
Not something you want to have at the top of a page.

Anyways, hows the gameplay going to be like?
It doesn't look like a traditional "stomp here" platformer.
Looks more like an adventure game, of which I'm not drawing any good examples.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Fisherson on September 07, 2009, 09:10:03 PM
XD What a wonderful little project. I love the sound of it! ^w^ It's now on my "To Play List".
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Angel Walter on September 07, 2009, 09:20:04 PM
Umm...
Oh okay a dog/child rape scene. Yeah I'm glad we've got the creative juices flowing. Before or after the scene with benny hill being played over footage of the twin towers collapsing?
There's something missing, I just can't put my finger on it...

Seriously though this game sounds brilliant! I'm watchin' this thread!
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: blue_emerald777 on September 07, 2009, 09:47:18 PM
Oh okay a dog/child rape scene. Yeah I'm glad we've got the creative juices flowing. Before or after the scene with benny hill being played over footage of the twin towers collapsing?

Not just any dog. A bulldog.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 07, 2009, 10:12:44 PM
Anyways, hows the gameplay going to be like?
It doesn't look like a traditional "stomp here" platformer.
Looks more like an adventure game, of which I'm not drawing any good examples.
That's actually kind of up in the air at the moment, I'm toying around with the balance of everything. At the moment it's looking rather explorationy with light puzzly.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Rahl on September 07, 2009, 10:31:42 PM
This looks awesome as usual red, keepit up.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Moosetroop11 on September 07, 2009, 11:42:52 PM
Nice idea! I look forward to it.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Darkfox on September 08, 2009, 12:04:52 AM
I'd love to give it a try sometime to be honest. I do kinda like the underlying meaning type games.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: lilsniffs3 on September 08, 2009, 12:09:06 AM
Darns I already want a demo. Lol.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Darkfox on September 08, 2009, 12:30:58 AM
Darns I already want a demo. Lol.

Me too, but I don't want to rush. I want a big demo. XD
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: lilsniffs3 on September 08, 2009, 12:36:41 AM
I want a demo that lasts until the last second of the game. The full game would include the second the demo doesn't include.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: _JeT_ on September 08, 2009, 01:04:36 AM
I cannot wait either. Though, I still wish you would make a detective game, as you mentioned in my thread.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: fruckert on September 08, 2009, 01:14:08 AM
That would be awesome.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 16, 2009, 12:48:30 AM
I kinda do want to do my detective game project, the main problem is that in my head it's a multi-part series and I'm afraid that my persistance won't match my ambition. Might pick it up, we'll see.

Anyway here's just some random screenshots to justify my bump. I could really do with help spriting maaan. The updraft specks don't look great static. Just imagine them floating upwards gracefully.

(http://www.ben.marcade.biz/Umbrelliscreen3.png)(http://www.ben.marcade.biz/Umbrelliscreen4.png)
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: fruckert on September 16, 2009, 04:19:42 AM
Awesome.
All I can say.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Hell Angel on September 16, 2009, 04:29:59 AM
Looks amazing, Red. Has a very good vibe to it.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Darkfox on September 16, 2009, 05:25:50 PM
Anyway here's just some random screenshots to justify my bump. I could really do with help spriting maaan. The updraft specks don't look great static. Just imagine them floating upwards gracefully.

Dude, that was my first impression before I read that. Awesome! Particle effects!
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: Red Giant on September 18, 2009, 11:25:56 PM
Yeah. Goddamn particle effects. Having all those little sparks eats up proccessing speed. I'm looking into more efficient methods but generally I feel like a monkey trying to make a car out of poo.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: SaiKar on September 19, 2009, 03:00:18 AM
You make the strangest, yet most awesome, stuff ever.
Title: Re: UmbrElli
Post by: coasterkrazy on September 19, 2009, 07:32:44 AM
Very original and creative idea with a distinctive style to it. I love the look of the gray scale world with Elli in color. Keep it up.