Element X

[Pythis]

I haven't gotten ANYTHING done but create a story so here it is.

As the world of Tyrice began to prosper among the guidence of the gods, The elements we're created. There we're elements of Fire, Earth, Wind, Water, Light and Darkness. Each god ruled over an element, but one day that all changed. A man named Pythiros created the 'Element Stones' and drained the power of the gods into each stone tablet. The gods we're powerless and the people seemed to lose faith in this new mysterious world that the gods created. but then again the gods created the people as well. Pythiros embedded a stone into six shrines each representing an element. The army of Relseport was sent out by the gods to destroy the stones but there efforts we're futile. Pythiros was much stronger than any public human and now any god..which left a question was HE a god? He could harness the power of the stones anytime and become all powerful yet he didn't and another question arose from the people. Maybe one of them could destroy the stones and gain that power. The people forgot about thier gods and thought, THEY can be gods. However the gods weren't completely powerless above the mortals called humans. Spark the lighting god smit the human's towns
 and villages to show them they are wrong. As the destruction waved through the world a boy seemed to be an influence to the world. This boy went through the world to destroy the stones not forhimself, but for the gods. If the gods can't die and had all there power back Pythiros can't do a thing. The boy was able to destroy the element stones and regenerate the god's power! After 20 long years of suffering it was over. Celebration went all around but signs of the gods we're undetected Heh even the boy guesses a god needs to kick back sometimes too.


Main character:
Name: Destin
Age: 12
Description: Destin has messy black hair and has deep grey eyes that are peculiar for his race. He usually wears a white Tank top and has light skin and has a scar on his right eye. He wears blue shorts too. He isn't very tall about 4"3 is his hieght. He wighs 95 pounds and wears brown sandals.
Personality: Destin is a lazy boy. He doesen't care for studying but he is very smart it's just that not many know it. He is kind to all that he meets but is hot headed. If he is insulted he won't let you go without yelling back at you. Other than that he is a nice friend and would do anything for his friends. He's a good person.
Likes: Food, Sleep, Games
Dislikes: Work

I'm trying to make an ABS but it isn't gonna go well I know it I trying to learn variables branches and switches still I don't know much.

[Drace]

12 is a very young age for a main character.

[DragonBlaze]

I concure, 12 is too yought. Besides, what parents in their right mind would let a 12 year old buy go out and fight monsters?

As for your actual story, its hard to say. It sounds like it could be cliche, or it could be good, it depends on how you go with it.

Good luck.

[Pythis]

I have some twists in mind all ready and he doesen't HAVE parents they abandoned him in his early childhood.

[blackskullwarlock]

12 years old is way too young, I agree. And another orphan, what a surprise -.-

[Pythis]

Don't worry I'm pretty sure you might like it when I get a demo

[smokey_locs2002]

12 years eh? Go for it. People once said having a female charater as a main charater was crazy...now I see games with nothing but female charaters.

[Drace]

I mean, he's gonna save the world why he just got in puberty?

[Pythis]

You know what screw the idea I'm horrible at making games..

[Drace]

The idea is ok, just change the age from 12 to like 18 or 19.

[Pythis]

I mean I'm a newb at rm2k/2k3 I'd be horrible without help. Plus I can't seem to learn anything.

[True Evil]

Originally posted by Pythis
You know what screw the idea I'm horrible at making games..

Why? Screw what everybody else says! It's YOUR game, you want the main character to be 12 then make him 12! Don't listen to everybody else! Geez.

EDIT: I'll be glad to help in any possible way I can!

[Pythis]

Damn I hate myself. I lose inspiration so friggin quickly. *sigh* I guess I'll go post or something

[PyroAlchemist]

Yish. Listen to what you want. If you like it go for it. I'll even help you. I'm good at sprite size battle charas and I make some pretty decent maps. Got a great knowledge of variables and switches. I can help.

[Pythis]

That would help. Before I do anything I want to fix the plot a bit.