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Off-Topic => Creative arts => Topic started by: drenrin2120 on May 14, 2009, 05:15:00 AM

Title: My band... again!
Post by: drenrin2120 on May 14, 2009, 05:15:00 AM
So I haven't been too active lately. I figured I'd show you guys what I've been up to lately. It's the same band I showed you guys roughly a year ago or so. As I remember the reception was less than triumphant. That's fine, charas is full of metalheads, which again, it's fine, to each his own, I can be a bit of a metal freak sometimes too. Anyways, link to our myspace with all four of our EP' songs uploaded. Criticism always welcome but as always, like it or hate it, I love it.

Link (http://www.myspace.com/sunsetpursuit)
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Archem on May 15, 2009, 06:19:38 PM
Sounds better than last time. It's still a little... Stale... Can't quite say how, exactly, but it's an improvement from the last serving, that's for sure. I could actually listen to this.

More sax is a must.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: lonewolf on May 15, 2009, 07:48:38 PM
your singer is like
the cure singer Robert smith in some ways on Bitter, Sweet Year
i love ska i have been  around ska UK band's for 20 years
bass player needs to be a little more loader on the sound coming off the bass
on Bitter, Sweet Year if you need help on sell's in Ireland and the UK let me now as long as you get a demo out i  am working for a Radio Deejay know as a runner a runner is some one that find's new band for the shows and get the music for the Radio Deejay from the lock up we but the Cd's we like in shop's you hear on the shops Radio show in the shop's so they get air play
pm me if you like me to help you out over seas to get you some sells of your music

as i got 25 more Cd & record & music fairs this year
where band's walk up to and ask if i can sell there Cd  for them 
10 bands selling there music in all so far for this year
some that's speed metal bands soft metal bands punk
but i like to find more bands you lot mixed music is cool

next years 41 fair's from January to  December so
i hope to find some up and coming bands

Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: DedlellyDeth on May 15, 2009, 10:39:03 PM
It seems a bit disharmonious. One noticeable thing is that there's too much talking in the middle of the second song. The instruments need to complement each other more, I think.

It's still a little... Stale...

Maybe he's going to make French toast? And it needs to...be stale? To hold up, you know? *tries to squeeze out metaphor*
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: drenrin2120 on May 16, 2009, 04:08:56 PM
Thanks Archem, I get what you're saying. Recording was good for us, as a band, it brought us all a lot closer and it expose our flaws to us very plainly. Everyone in the band would agree with you. I think it sounds stale for a multitude of reasons, there's a lot of parts where there's not much going on, it can get a little monotonous, and there's not a lot of personality in it, we're still looking for our sound. The horns need to take more initiative as well, in my opinion.

Dedlelly, not sure what you mean by too much talking... 0_o too many words too fast? And yes, song writing could always improve.

Lonewolf, the singer would sadly be me, though the bassist does some vocals too >.< We're hard up for a vocalist so I play guitar and sing. If I had the chance, I'd do everything I did over. The tone of the distorted guitar is a little... hm... flat? not exactly what I was looking for, plus I played the clean parts way too soft. My singing is really rough in some spots as well. I had a cold that day. XP What exactly do you mean about the tone of the bass? less bass more treble? And of course, any promotion we could get would be more than welcome. I feel we need to work more on local promotion before we take an overseas step.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: DedlellyDeth on May 16, 2009, 08:10:17 PM
Dedlelly, not sure what you mean by too much talking... 0_o too many words too fast? And yes, song writing could always improve.

Yeah. Ruins the flow.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Rson_DeLarge on May 20, 2009, 11:54:30 PM
well, I chuckled at the "scene slut" song. I have many the hilarious tales about my local scene kids.... which there are MANY of

so apparantly I'm not the only weirdo rm2k user/musician.
maybe I should post my old stuff... you'd probably all hate it though
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Archem on May 21, 2009, 12:04:31 AM
you'd probably all hate it though
Guarantee.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Rson_DeLarge on May 21, 2009, 12:14:39 AM
Orly?
because I'm actually in [yourfavoriteband]

Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Archem on May 21, 2009, 01:12:10 AM
Yeah... Too bad you'd post your old stuff. You guys were terrible until you dropped ol' whatshisname.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Rson_DeLarge on May 21, 2009, 03:00:09 AM
yeah, but you know, then he went on to form megadeth and we got Hammett so  W/e
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Archem on May 21, 2009, 03:05:22 AM
Lol you've got my favorite bands mixed up.

Dislike Metallica, love Megadeth.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Rson_DeLarge on May 21, 2009, 03:07:59 AM
oh, that's still kind of a lucky guess.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Archem on May 21, 2009, 03:56:20 AM
Well, that's not saying that Megadeth is my favorite band, but whatever. Around here, guessing a well-known metal band as a favorite or preferred band is always a good guess.

Oh, but look at that, we're derailing the thread something awful.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: drenrin2120 on May 21, 2009, 05:59:27 AM
Don't worry, not much to derail and besides that it was plenty lollerful.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: Shady Ultima on June 11, 2009, 06:59:29 AM
Pretty good man, really dig it.

The only part I had, was in one of the songs, you guys had only the horns + vocals, it just sounded disjointed.
Title: Re: My band... again!
Post by: lonewolf on June 11, 2009, 09:01:15 AM
have you any music  video's on youtube yet can you pm me to let me know
thank you