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Title: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on March 30, 2010, 09:35:10 PM
(http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/996/essence.png)

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Welcome to my Final Fantasy Essence thread! I totally thought I should post this here, even though I really shouldn't. I mean, I posted this in a lot of places so I might not keep up with it. I'm just trying to see who is actually hyped. This game is pretty much dead on HBgames and Gamingw. It seems active on Rpgmaker.net. So, I'll try this one last place. And no, this isn't the only reason I joined. I've been watching this boards since... 2004. So, I'm pleased to announce...

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Storyline:

Prologue
[spoiler]Hundreds of years ago, Salfor, a nation of great power, found that the Earth around them was dying. They didn't neccesarly know what was causing it. The scientists and soldiers of Salfor searched the whole country to find that the mountains of the north had a strange forming. The earth of the mountains was very brittle and breakable. For 50 years they mined in those mountains until they found what they thought of was just crystal. But the priests felt a stronger precense... almost as if they were actually touching God. They found what they named the "Essence of Life". The crystalized matter was made up of strong spiritual power and, in actuality, souls of the dead. Scholars and scientists wrote books on the Essence. Though the word spred across the world. One kingdom, Aertes, found this as a great operatunity to build the largest and strongest empire. Aertes explored the mines until they finally reached the Essence. Soldiers were more than excited and they wanted power that instant. The soldiers tried eating the substance but... that didn't do anything but kill a few. They mined some of the material out and took it back to their kingdom for tests. They tried many experiments and they all had failed. Every scientist that experimented wrote short papers and even books on what happened. Future generations will get a chance to try themselves.[/spoiler]

Present Storyline
[spoiler]-Present story-
Once stood a village off the coast of the largest capital in the world... Soldiers came into the village, asking for cooperation to hand over their children so that they could build the largest army to take the world in to their own hands. Many of these parents did not want to cooperate, so the consequences were severe. Their village was burned down and many people died. A large group set off on a voyage to escape this horrific morning. Many of these people were ones who gave up their children and ones who escaped without cooperating with the soldiers.
Now, 11 years later, Eldia, the new formed kingdom, has edged on a war against the empire, yet it was a new empire; Qaros, The Capital. This newly formed empire is being ran by Dice Qaros, one of the ones who had been infused with this Essence power. Xyla, the scientist behind all of this, is helping Dice try to take over the world with magic warriors. They are even doing stuff the old empire, The Capital, would have done: use its own people. Eldia will wadge war, though Eldia has a secret too.[/spoiler]
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Characters:

[spoiler](http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/Xander.gif)
Xander Valance - Samurai
Age 19
 - As a boy, he suffered many traumas due to Qaros, previously named "The Capital." His village was attacked because The Capital wanted to get their hands on the children that reside there to infuse them with a power that could be blocked by
spiritual power, due to it currently forming inside the child, normally fully developed at age 20. The Capital's army came to
the cloest village, Xander's home village, and asked for them to co-operate. They would use their children as, basicly,
weapons to defeat Salfor. Xander's sister, Isuna, was one of the children taken away. He also seen his own mother's throat
slit because she wouldn't co-operate with The Capital's army. Xander escaped on a boat with the new founded colony.

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/Keira-2.gif)
Keira - Gunner
Age 17
 - Not much is known about her past due to what the Essence had done to her memories. Though she remembers training
as a soldier for the empire as a gun girl. She is very talented in what she does. She doesn't really hate anyone. She is shy
and peaceful and loves all of her friends. She tries to do her duty; what she was raised to do: to be a WEAPON.

Laine Marley - Summoner
Age 15
 - A cute little farmgirl who's parents were lost in the attack on the Eldian village, 11 years before. She loves the
outdoors and animals. Her white and Black, along with her summoning skills, are most powerful. She has a small crush on Storm, but she understands that she could never be with him. Storm really just treats her like a daughter.

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/Storm.gif)
Arjian "Storm" Highwind - Dragoon
Age 26
 - A home citizen of Qaros, back then The Capital. His mother willingly, among many parents, had him go through the process of becoming a magic soldier. Although he didn't process all the way. He has power throughout his muscles but is actually the first to have no  bad effects. Though it could be because he didn't complete his Essence infusion. The first thing he did was set out to kill his mother with no regret. He hates Qaros and hides out in the small city of Iren, a city of Qaros. Keira knows him because her home is near Iren and she knows him as a  best friend.

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/spring.gif)
Spring Heines - Monk
Age: 21
 - A serious yet friendly girl of Salfor. She is in the army and is prepared to go to war any day, though Salfor stays neutral. Cid, her father, is developing a new kind of Essence and she helps him out. She hopes to have a working Essence infusion done by the time Salfor ever goes to war. And if there is, she wants to be infused with it so she can have better fighting skills.

Jessen Forte
Age: 13
He'll be updated[/spoiler]

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Sreenshots!:
[spoiler](http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/6.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/5.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/4.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/3.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/2.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/1.PNG)

(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/1729/screenshots/7.PNG)

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/3-2.png)

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/Isodore.png)

(http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/More-Isodore.png)[/spoiler]

World Map
[spoiler](http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w194/Celes_Cole/World-Map-op.png)[/spoiler]
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Music:
Storm's Theme
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-EA6KVyYGPc
Main Theme
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KO-AOuMsfNM
Battle Theme
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UH8Bo2ckR9g

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Credits:


-Director-
Kristin F.

-Writer-
Kristin F.
Lex S.
Jess A.
Ted B.
Solid278

-Spriter-
Lex S.
Oblivia

-Music-
Shizu - Retired
Yusuf O. - Dunno what happened
Mark - He's temp for main theme

-Artist-
Possibly taken!

-Game System-
Ted B.

-Others-
Anyone who helps me
And Square Enix/Soft

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As you could tell, I was getting a bit more "Eh" about the story towards the end. I had something going but went cliche. The story isn't too finalized... but yeah. I've been with this project for about a year and a half. I have gone through 4million Xander Sprites X.x...

But anyway!

Thanks for reading! Hope I can get these spaces filled!

If you ever want to contact me:
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Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: zuhane on March 30, 2010, 11:20:36 PM
WOWZERS! This looks... really, really good!
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Linkforce on March 31, 2010, 12:14:23 AM
This actually looks quite good!  Get a demo out so we can try it!
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: SaiKar on March 31, 2010, 04:27:23 AM
A bit sad to see someone of obvious talent doing a final fantasy ripoff.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Drakiyth on March 31, 2010, 09:59:47 AM
This game looks pretty professional but it kind of rips from the final fantasy 7 story line a lot.  Mako energy = Essence  -  Infused Soldiers were indeed used in FF7.  Overall, it's a pretty cool project and i wish you and your crew the best of luck on getting it out.  I agree with Sai though; I think you have incredible talent as a game designer and wouldn't mind seeing an original project one day.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on March 31, 2010, 05:50:53 PM
I'm also working on a game called Audria... so that's the original. FFEssence is just a much more serious game. And yeah I know it kinda pulls from FF7... which is funny because 7 is my least favorite in the series XD... I've been doing this for quite some time, now. There are various games I help out with. FFV-2 (by lex) and Beyond the Labyrinth (by Sinmora/Ted).

Bbbuuuttt, with the whole FF7 thing. I tried to make it more like FF6 instead, but it did end up with FF7. But don't worry, the game play and in-game story is completely different.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Fisherson on April 01, 2010, 01:48:57 AM
Wow! O_O This is probably the best put together FF fan game I've seen. Wouldn't mind seeing some "in battle" battle shots. By the way...Is FFV-2 titled by another name like "FFV-2 Time and Time again"? Because last time I tried to find that game I couldn't and realy wanted to play it again.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: lonewolf on April 01, 2010, 12:13:18 PM
like it have you seen this lot
http://xenonneonxe.hp.infoseek.co.jp/CHARA.htm
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 01, 2010, 06:40:26 PM
Wow! O_O This is probably the best put together FF fan game I've seen. Wouldn't mind seeing some "in battle" battle shots. By the way...Is FFV-2 titled by another name like "FFV-2 Time and Time again"? Because last time I tried to find that game I couldn't and realy wanted to play it again.

Well time and again was a FFIV fangame. FFV-2 is based off of Legend of the Crystals. There is no place you can find it on the net because it hasn't been released or even announced yet.

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7599/tnasmall.png

There are some old videos up by the name of akiochild on youtube. Those are 2 really old rm2k3 videos. Me and Lex found something a lot better than that =) (rmxp). Oh, and  if you want to see in battle shots, look at the battle theme vid (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UH8Bo2ckR9g). It has a glimpse of the battle system with a cut battle theme =)

@Lonewolf
Never seen those before
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Arksanti on April 01, 2010, 07:29:30 PM
Nice mapping & charaset style i love the final fantasy 1-5 look specially for the little characters aspect .

im not very friend of certain fangames style specially for final fantasy is think tha is because i see a lot of fangames based in final fantasy universe and at this point the game loses a bif of originality when you uses a big franchise for create your game .

between personal feelings about fangames good luck whit the proyect , in general looks good n_x

Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Zerlina on April 02, 2010, 03:02:50 AM
You should take the "Final Fantasy" out of the title and just make it a game on its own. It looks great :D
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: fruckert on April 02, 2010, 03:19:30 AM
I agree with Zerl, nobody will take a Final Fantasy fangame seriously, this should really be it's own project.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: ZE on April 02, 2010, 09:55:14 AM
Scratch Final Fantasy from the title and I'm behind it.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: zuhane on April 02, 2010, 11:39:37 AM
I totally agree! I reckon it wouldn't be too straining to change a few things here and there. You'd certainly get
much more recognition.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: drenrin2120 on April 02, 2010, 03:05:52 PM
I think you're all being kind of rude by asking him to remove the final fantasy name. He already said he's got another original project going, and it's obvious he's put a lot of work into this. If he wants to call it Final Fantasy Essence, then that should be fine.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 02, 2010, 04:18:06 PM
Yeah it is kinda rude. Sorry guys but I have custom music thats already been made, custom moogle and chocobo sprites, too. It can't happen. And even if I did remove the name, people would complain about it LOOKING like a FF fangame. Just leave it at that, a Fangame. Thanks. If you anti-fangame people want a non-fangame, then wait until I start making my original game, Audria, more of a concept and less than an idea. Thanks much though ^_^ but please, be respectful. Don't force me into something I don't want to do. There are a lot of other games out there that you guys could play.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: lonewolf on April 02, 2010, 05:27:29 PM
keep the name

here some things that may or not help you out

http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php?topic=54021.0%3Bwap2 fans of ff

http://www.gamingw.net/forums/index.php?PHPSESSID=5c818d05cc752ed8a4305c0971acba5b&action=profile%3Bu=29194%3Bsa=showPosts

Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Cerebus on April 02, 2010, 07:48:32 PM
I personally don't mind fangames, though of course there are some exceptions.
Just because "Final Fantasy" is written in the title doesn't mean the game won't be as good as if it wasn't.

They may be taken less seriously at first but I'm pretty sure most people will get over it if the story and all seem interesting enough. Like in this case. I guess.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 02, 2010, 09:23:11 PM
You guys have heard of Final Fantasy Endless Nova, right? I want to surpass that. To tell you the truth, I thought that game was crap. It didn't live up to Final Fantasy...spirit? I get why people don't like FF fangames.

And I know people won't take it seriously. Actually, I've known this. I've been working on a FF fangame ever since I started RPG Maker.... that was with RM2k. I believe that if I can make a FF game BE like an FF game, I could think of the possibilities of what I could make if it were an original game. Like I said, I have Audria planned. It's about a girl, a jewel that once held magic in the world, and she kills her parents. Etc etc. Not really planned much lol. Thanks though haha
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Ephiam on April 02, 2010, 09:30:16 PM
Never mind all of that nonsense about not making a fangame, Celes. Who's time is it that you're using? Who's making the game? Who's doing this as some sort of hobby? It's you. THAT'S RIGHT. So just go wild, and do what you have fun doing. If people happen to also like it, then that's a plus.

I wish you luck in your quest to surpass FFEN, and I will definitely play this once you've got something out.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: fruckert on April 02, 2010, 09:37:47 PM
People commonly trash on fan-games because of the same logic in trashing rap.
The absolute crap in the genre far swamps the gems.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Zerlina on April 02, 2010, 11:10:40 PM
I think most of us were trying to compliment him by saying his game looked great, but okay...
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: fruckert on April 02, 2010, 11:18:31 PM
Yeah, I was complimenting him too.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: drenrin2120 on April 03, 2010, 01:01:19 AM
I just want charas to host more games. It seems we usually scare people or don't encourage games enough. Buuuut, that's not really the point of this thread and I don't want to make it that. I like the look of this game. If its got a good ff feel to it I'd love to play. Then I could tell people to their amazement I played a new ff that didn't suck. :P

 But even if it doesn't, it still looks promising as a game.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Cerebus on April 03, 2010, 01:33:46 AM
I think most of us were trying to compliment him by saying his game looked great, but okay...

Yeah, I was complimenting him too.

I'd just like to point out that according to celescole's profile, she is not a he. Whether it's true or not remains unknown, you can debate about it.

Anyway, all in all, having "Final Fantasy" is the title is fine, as long as the game is enjoyable. And this one seems interesting. Nice World Map too, by the way.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 03, 2010, 04:45:55 PM
Haha thanks guys. I appreciate it. I accept any criticism even about the whole "Why is it named FF, it should be without"... even if it does kill me to read that. I'll be okay =) I'll have some battle screen updates as soon as I can! Oh, and new music. Of course of course.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: ZE on April 03, 2010, 06:01:41 PM
You find it rude when someone criticize your game?  Then you want survive long in this world.

The only reason I'm suggesting to change the name is that I never download fangames. I prefer original stories, worlds, characters etc. from the authors mind. Not reused garbage that someone else already used to death.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Cerebus on April 03, 2010, 06:35:40 PM
But there is one thing you need to remember; not everyone will turn a game down just because of the title.
I'm pretty sure most people will get over the fact that "Final Fantasy" is written in the title, that there are Chocobos, etc.
People said "Remove Final Fantasy from the title and it'll be fine" which means the game is interesting enough. I doubt anyone who said that will  say "Well screw that, it is still in the title, I won't play it."

Of course, I could be wrong, though...
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Rowan on April 03, 2010, 07:41:06 PM
The only reason I'm suggesting to change the name is that I never download fangames. I prefer original stories, worlds, characters etc. from the authors mind. Not reused garbage that someone else already used to death.

Off-topic:

Calling TC (and team's) noticeable effort "garbage" towards their game you haven't even played is rude.

On-Topic:

Compared to a vast majority of other RPG Maker games, this looks rather promising. I wish you and your team good luck, and welcome to charas :).
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: MissingName on April 03, 2010, 08:10:49 PM
I completely agree with Rowan.  I want to see this game when it's done.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 03, 2010, 08:34:03 PM
You find it rude when someone criticize your game?  Then you want survive long in this world.

The only reason I'm suggesting to change the name is that I never download fangames. I prefer original stories, worlds, characters etc. from the authors mind. Not reused garbage that someone else already used to death.

You're an idiot. Anyone forcing you to download this game? Anyone forcing you to play it. I never ever ever said it was rude for someone to criticize me. But it is rude to try to force a name change when that's obviously what I don't want. Don't play it. What are you doing in this topic? shoo.

And thanks to the 2 above posters ^_^
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: Ephiam on April 03, 2010, 09:04:20 PM
A slew of people constantly asking the same thing can also become a bit grinding, too. I'm often annoyed just reading the requests to change the name, because if she'd wanted to change it or had anything else in mind then she would have already done so by now. I'm going to guess that criticism and all other forms of comments are welcome, but please god leave the naming business at the door, people.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: SaiKar on April 04, 2010, 02:22:35 PM
Careful, people. Arguing points back and forth is one thing, but I don't like it when I see people actually start to call each other names.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: zuhane on April 04, 2010, 09:52:41 PM
It's good to keep in mind that many people here actually see great talent in you, and don't wanna see the masses of
idiots and flamers passing by your obviously brilliant game! I personally love FF and also love the look of this, and now that
I've had chance to speak to you, reckon it'll be a very good game.

Just saying, not everyone has this mentality.
Title: Re: Final Fantasy Essence
Post by: celescole on April 04, 2010, 10:27:29 PM
Hehe thanks! I've been working on this sort of concept forever! I know my story isn't the best thing in the world, and Sai... well he is right about the whole FF7 ripoff thing. But that doesn't matter. There is no such thing as originality in a story. Only one can bend cliches into something that forms originality. If I turned this into an original game, it's no different from what it is now. It'd be designed around the same concept. I'd probably just change stuff like Chocobos to "Chicavos" and Cid to "Kid" and Moogles to "Muddles". See? It's no different.


Here is a new piece... actually it's old. But here is a newly updated piece ^_^ This is Essence's prelude. Now, there is the actual prelude within the game, but its not the main prelude. The secondary prelude will be played in parts of the game. This is more or less the title screen theme.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ql1PZQW_5o

ENJOY!

Edit--

Created a webpage... Enjoy!

http://final-fantasy-essence.webs.com/