The X of the Jolly Roger

[Big_Duke]

OK,I needed to get a new computer,now I have a better Computer,with Windows XP,everything is gone I made a new RPG.
Story:The X of the Jolly Roger is a search for the treasure of Jack Bulldog A.K.A. Killer Jack. The tresure is called Bull's Eye.


<-*Charactors*->

Hector Revania

A young pirate,about the age of 17. Close to the age of Monkey D. Lueffy(One Piece),but that's another story. Excells in LP(Life Power). Not that smart. Brave and strong. Very kind,but not generous,but not greedy either. Wears red pants,light blue vest,and black gloves,blond hair,A tan(Mentioned alot).This is what he looks like.(PL version)

[Big_Duke]

Um,Why isn't anyone sending comments?

[Linkforce]

Because you barely posted anything about your story...

[kodakumi]

i agree, but hey maybey if you posted it people would.

[Big_Duke]

Well,Really,Hector is held back by his parents,when he wants to find the treasure. Play and find out.

[AsakuraHao2004]

 

Close to the age of Monkey D. Lueffy(One Piece)

I hate dubs, SO much.

Anyways, you're story seems to be lacking, and things just sorta happen out of nowhere. It might be best a humor game.

[kodakumi]

didnt he or she just say that we will have to play and find out.

[SaiKar]

Yep, but I don't see a download link, so that kind of takes the fun out of it.

[GhostClown]

Your picture is sort of green-ish yellow.. <_<

[Darkfox]

Seasickness XD

Btw you just took the storyline from One Piece, changed the characters looks. The plot is the same. Oi.

[Big_Duke]

Btw you just took the storyline from One Piece, changed the characters looks. The plot is the same. Oi.

No,not exactly,there will be an intro. It'll explain everything.


P.S. I'm a HE.

P.S.(2)I had Image problems

P.S.(3)I'm not done with the game

P.S.(4)Sorry,for all the P.S. things,but it is an adventure game,a little bit of comedy here and there. but mostly adventure

[rhonin]

I don't really see the point of posting your game on Charas, if you're not gonna tell us anything about the story. It's not gonna hype many people up if you just say, "Play and find out." I'd play and find out if I knew what I was playing to find out about.

[Syntax]

I like to just play random games and see wich are good, and wich are not.
This one, the name sounda like a humor game. Pirates arent usually blond. And they are usually really greedy. Why would people be afraid of pirates if they werent greedy. usually the greedyness is what drives them to go get treasures and such.

[Big_Duke]

The X of the Jolly Roger will be a good game,I promise that,it won't be a piece of crap,like you expect. It is about a teenager,who is not very generous,but not very greedy either(Said that before),he is not eager about having a crew,so he goes solo,Bull's Eye is scattered through out the earth,not in one
piece,it is said that if it is moved,Killer Jack's ghost will haunt you forever,and kill you in Heaven or Hell.