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Kinslayer
I changed my custom title. Cambié mi título personalizado jeh XD
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Born in the shadows, he rose on his feet, and farted. YES.
Of Love, Hate and Tears
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January 10, 2006, 04:40:24 PM »
I feel like writing right now, so I wanted to post some poems for you guys to read. I tend to think them like songs, but since I don't know how to compose, then I just write them as poems. Any comments accepted!
Treason
There is no more reason
To hide what you feel
I can feel your treason
It stings deep in me.
What makes me even angrier
Is the fact that you lied
This anger just keeps rising
It burns me in my heart.
I feel the treason
I feel the pain
Anger rises again...
The love I felt
The confidence
It all goes to Hell...
I hope that, when you read
You can understand
The treason is a dreadful sin
Which destroys mankind.
When your best friend betrays you
It hurts like bullets shot
You see him walk beside you
A few days ago...
I feel his shadow
Can't see a friend
I only see a snake
Biting my foot
Then it laughs
And fastly gets away...
I hope that my experience
Help the ones who read
And let them be strong
In those awful times of grief...
------------The End----------------------
I'll post more later, hope you guys liked it!!!!
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MrMister
damn u vile woman
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January 11, 2006, 01:42:12 AM »
Grow a pair!
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Meiscool-2
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January 11, 2006, 01:52:49 AM »
The... un.... It doesn't rhyme very well?
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Kinslayer
I changed my custom title. Cambié mi título personalizado jeh XD
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Born in the shadows, he rose on his feet, and farted. YES.
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January 12, 2006, 01:55:07 PM »
Yeah... I like to let it free itself from rhymes.
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Wire Frame
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January 12, 2006, 02:06:31 PM »
Not every poem rhyme.
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GhostClown
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January 12, 2006, 02:33:09 PM »
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Not every poem rhyme.
That's true. Over all.. it's not too bad.. But it needs work.
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Kinslayer
I changed my custom title. Cambié mi título personalizado jeh XD
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Born in the shadows, he rose on his feet, and farted. YES.
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January 12, 2006, 05:00:20 PM »
Yeah, well... I guess that I should work it, besides my time on internet is short (damn ciber cafes) so it's the best I can do in little times of inspiration.
Here goes another one:
The Laberynth's Creature
I was born from sinful things
I was locked against my will
These walls are getting smaller
As time doesn't stand still...
I found myself wandering in shadows
While the food came to me
I can't wait for tomorrow
Right now I need to eat...
The sorrow of this loneliness
I can't take it away
As the sun keeps rising
I can't see it's light again...
Then I wander and I see
The walls are all the same...
All these painful things I feel
They will all remain...
This day I just heard a voice
Footsteps close to me...
I see a figure in the dark
It comes right after me...
The sound of the blood falling
The sound of cheerful screams
Theseus leaves the dungeon
The creature is now free...
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