How good's my game sound/look?

[Trikitiger]

I have a small clip of my game up on the web, but I still need to know what to fix and all, plus I need suggestions because I can't think of anything after 1 main character going nuts ^^;;

Storyline: I've said it before but I'm giving a better one this time.  You start off as part of an evil organization, not much of it is known at the beginning.  When you wake up you do stuff (talk, learn, whatever), then go onto a capture the criminals mission. You black out, you talk to your organization's boss, you black out again, and then you meet a friend.  You learn of what your own organization is doing but you don't know that it's your organization.  (And basically you try and wipe them off of Shanto, the first part of the game.)

Main Characters:

Trikitiger:
Bio: No it's not me! He's a Tiger-like creature which has flame, water, electric (lightning), plant, rock, and psychic type attacks.  He's supposed to be strong, but because his famous attack is too strong, he learns it later in the game.
Age: 5 months (created)
Hometown: Not really a town, but the organization HQ

Kamon:
Bio: He's a boy who came overseas to see the sights.  After finding Trikitiger, his trip turns into an adventure when he has to learn how to use swords (He's a tourist for peat's sake), and get used to armor
Age: 16
Hometown: Johto, Blackthorn

Haihashi:
Bio: This little blue fox is nothing to laugh at.  He's skilled at various attacks and can do attacks out of his reach (example: a fire dragon learning water attacks).  This little guy may not look strong but he packs a big wallop!
Age: 2 weeks (created)
Hometown: None

Kyoko (not in demo):
She is NOT a main character! but very close to one so she will be included in this section.
Bio: Kyoko is a Pokemorph, half Pokemon, half human, but don't worry, because she doesn't act like a Pokemon.  She's basically a girl with differences, or another basic description, a cat girl.  She tries to stop everything the organization does.  Sometimes fails and sometimes succeeds.
Age: 25 in human years
Hometown: ?? (an underground village)

Things that I KNOW I need to work on:
The sliding part in the beginning.  It's still set at Push button
Cities and clever dialouge for the citizens
Definetly the Mini-games.

Info (more babble):
Ok, it sounds like a Pokemon game... It sorta is, but I made this idea 2 years ago and wanted to finish it.  Sure it's got Pokemon related items and monsters, but you don't capture the Pokemon and the Pokemon items are minimal.  Some of the bosses are HARD, but I purposely did that because you squeak by every time... and when I say every time, I do mean EVERY TIME!  Which makes the battles alot more interesting because you're always hoping you win, then you do.

Ok, you're ready to try my game.  Have you been reading some caution info?  Because if you haven't you might be yelling at me but I warned you.  Anyways, send comments and or suggestions of what I should do, what I should keep, what I should try, etc.  The link will be below allllllllll this info.

http://www.geocities.com/trikitiger2002/probs-in-shanto.html

Don't send the email to the geocities internet name, because that one gets flooded.  Use the one at the bottom of the webpage!

P.S. Don't get mad at me for posting alot of stuff like this.  I'm just trying to see how my game is, and what new bosses to include.

Whoops, made a mistake in the polls!  Never mind it!

[Reain_]

why don't you bring this game to the beta tester section we can help you alot there and you don't have to keep creating new polls and threads we willjust keepit in one section for just your game and disscuss it in there and when you update it repost the link in your thread there


the beta testers is located at the team sections